tempdude wrote:
essaysnark wrote:
As we just stated, these schools look for different things in their applicants. Stanford Essay 1 is a personal essay. Harvard has never wanted personal content in their essays. At risk of repeating ourselves, these are different requirements and a different approach is needed for both.
EssaySnark
Why make such authoritative statements if you are not HBS AdCom member. I believe the essay content can be personal or professional or something else all together, as long as it answers the question. An essay with personal content should be fine for HBS. Both my essays last year had personal content. Let me know if you need more individual help.
I agree that Stanford approach is different, mainly because the question is different.
We make these statements based on many years of watching the inputs and the outputs of the system. And in this case:
We have heard Dee Leopold state directly that they want professional content.No, we're obviously not on the Harvard Admissions Board, but we have to remind you that you are not, either.
We see what people submit in their Harvard essays, and we see how the Admissions Board responds. It's what any good admissions consultant does. What ONE PERSON'S experience was in one application is just not equivalent to our knowledgebase of what MANY MANY PEOPLE'S EXPERIENCES have been. Often people are admitted despite their essays. Not saying that's what happened to you, simply explaining from where our recommendations and advice is formed.
That being said: Of course everyone should do what they think is best with their applications!! That is always and ever the case.
EssaySnark