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# Usage of Verb-ing Modifiers - Part 1

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20 Aug 2013, 00:46
egmat wrote:

2. In three months, biologist Glauco Machado gathered enough information about large numbers of a relatively unstudied order of arachnids to persuade an ant specialist at the university to advise him and to publish his first scientific paper.

Isn't 'his' ambiguous in the above example ?

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29 Aug 2013, 08:57
I have a doubt in the below question (OG 13 #97)
Some anthropologists believe that the genetic homogeneity evident in the world's people is the result of a "population bottleneck"—at some time in the past our ancestors suffered an event, greatly reducing their numbers and thus our genetic variation.

In the underlined part of the above sentence, “greatly reducing ….numbers” seems to present the result of the preceding clause “…ancestors suffered an event”. But the subject of the clause “ancestors” does not do the action of reducing, the action is caused by the “event”. So the subject does not make sense with the verb-ing modifier here. Thus the sentence is wrong. Can you please tell me whether my thinking is in the right direction as far as modifiers are concerned?

Also, can you please give the rule set for the punctuation dash(-).

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I have a doubt in the below question (OG 13 #97)
Some anthropologists believe that the genetic homogeneity evident in the world's people is the result of a "population bottleneck"—at some time in the past our ancestors suffered an event, greatly reducing their numbers and thus our genetic variation.

In the underlined part of the above sentence, “greatly reducing ….numbers” seems to present the result of the preceding clause “…ancestors suffered an event”. But the subject of the clause “ancestors” does not do the action of reducing, the action is caused by the “event”. So the subject does not make sense with the verb-ing modifier here. Thus the sentence is wrong. Can you please tell me whether my thinking is in the right direction as far as modifiers are concerned?

Also, can you please give the rule set for the punctuation dash(-).

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Hi Sarmistha,

Yes, your analysis of this sentence is absolutely correct. The verb-ing modifier "resulting" does not make sense with the subject of the modified the clause "our ancestors". This is the reason why choice A is incorrect.

Now, use of "dash" is a bit different in this sentence than its usual usage. Generally, on GMAT "dash" connects two Independent Clauses. But in this sentence, we do not see that construction. So here I would say that "dash" has been used in a little different way than it is generally used.

Hope this helps.
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09 Sep 2013, 08:35
Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.
(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and

OA:C (Source-OG)

I have a doubt regarding the use of "comma + co-ordinating" in this sentence.
From grammatical point of view, ", carefully coordinating them with her narratives" functions as an adverbial modifier (comma+present participle). Thus "coordinating" should make sense with the subject "Beatrix Potter" and it does make sense (Beatrix Potter is coordinating...).

But I have seen few explanations in which "coordinating" is said to modify "illustrations". This doesn't make sense as "coordinating" is in the form of "comma+verb-ing" and not only "verb-ing". I am confused how to go ahead with this question. OG explanation is not satisfactory. Any help is appreciated.

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09 Sep 2013, 08:43
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beatrix-potter-in-her-book-illustrations-carefully-119216.html?hilit=Beatrix%20Potter

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10 Sep 2013, 00:11
egmat wrote:
Hi there,

beatrix-potter-in-her-book-illustrations-carefully-119216.html?hilit=Beatrix%20Potter

Thanks.

I have gone through your reply. But still I have a query.

I have read that "comma+verb-ing" can have 3 positions in a sentence. These positions are as follows:

a) After the modified clause eg. Clause, verb-ing
b) Before the modified clause eg. Verb-ing, clause
c) Subject, verb-ing, verb+predicate

I don't remember an example which fits in the third category but I am sure I have seen one.
Could you please clarify whether the third option (c) is correct. I got confused because I have seen an example wherein this type of formation is accepted.

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01 Oct 2013, 14:15
Hi eGMAT,

Can you please explain the difference between choices B and E in OG12 94? Given that B is grammatically correct and is reproduction of original sentence (correcting the error). The correct answer seems to change the meaning. B has one meaning and E has another, given the fact that the author wanted to convey the meaning given in original sentence choice B should be the correct choice not E which changes the meaning.

OG12#94
The recent surge in the number of airplane flights has clogged the nation's air-traffic control system, to lead to 55 percent more delays at airports, and prompts fears among some officials that safety is being compromised.
(A) to lead to 55 percent more delays at airports, and prompts
(B) leading to 55 percent more delay at airports and prompting
(C) to lead to a 55 percent increase in delay at airports and prompt
(D) to lead to an increase of 55 percent in delays at airports, and prompted
(E) leading to a 55-percent increase in delays at airports and prompting

EA: no purpose is to be stated here, so "to lead" construction is wrong. now, both B and E are grramatically correct. Which one to choose ?
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19 Jan 2014, 01:43

Mine query is related to OG-12, #38, Please find the question below.

In 1850 Lucretia Mott published her Discourse on Women, arguing in a treatise for women to have equal political and legal rights and for changes in the married women’s property laws.

A. arguing in a treatise for women to have equal political and legal rights
B. arguing in a treatise for equal political and legal rights for women
C. a treatise that advocates women’s equal political and legal rights
D. a treatise advocating women’s equal political and legal rights
E. a treatise that argued for equal political and legal rights for women

Between A & E, there is only a change in a modifier, could you please elaborate why B is wrong,
i think publishing a book and then the modifier "arguing" can be treated as one of the outcomes or the motive behind publication. Please correct me if i'm wrong?

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27 Jan 2014, 14:37
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Hi eGMAT,

Can you please explain the difference between choices B and E in OG12 94? Given that B is grammatically correct and is reproduction of original sentence (correcting the error). The correct answer seems to change the meaning. B has one meaning and E has another, given the fact that the author wanted to convey the meaning given in original sentence choice B should be the correct choice not E which changes the meaning.

OG12#94
The recent surge in the number of airplane flights has clogged the nation's air-traffic control system, to lead to 55 percent more delays at airports, and prompts fears among some officials that safety is being compromised.
(A) to lead to 55 percent more delays at airports, and prompts
(B) leading to 55 percent more delay at airports and prompting
(C) to lead to a 55 percent increase in delay at airports and prompt
(D) to lead to an increase of 55 percent in delays at airports, and prompted
(E) leading to a 55-percent increase in delays at airports and prompting

EA: no purpose is to be stated here, so "to lead" construction is wrong. now, both B and E are grramatically correct. Which one to choose ?

Hi drebellion,

Let me first apologize to you for getting back on this after so ling. I don't know if you still have any confusion regarding this question, but let me still post a reply so that others can benefit.

The only difference between choices B and E is that the former says "55% more delay" and the latter says "a 55% increase in delays".

In Choice B, it is really ambiguous what "55% more delay" actually wants to refer to. Increase in delay is not correct because the sentence talks about the increase in the number of delays. So we should say "delays" instead of "delay". Choice E clarifies that ambiguity.

Hope this helps.
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Mine query is related to OG-12, #38, Please find the question below.

In 1850 Lucretia Mott published her Discourse on Women, arguing in a treatise for women to have equal political and legal rights and for changes in the married women’s property laws.

A. arguing in a treatise for women to have equal political and legal rights
B. arguing in a treatise for equal political and legal rights for women
C. a treatise that advocates women’s equal political and legal rights
D. a treatise advocating women’s equal political and legal rights
E. a treatise that argued for equal political and legal rights for women

Between A & E, there is only a change in a modifier, could you please elaborate why B is wrong,
i think publishing a book and then the modifier "arguing" can be treated as one of the outcomes or the motive behind publication. Please correct me if i'm wrong?

Thanks

Hi Nitinaka19,

Analysis of Choice A: The sentence tells us that Lucretia Mott published "Discourse on Women". Then we have a Comma + Verb-ing "arguing..." that modifies the preceding action. Now Comma + Verb-ing modifiers perform two functions:

1. presents the "HOW" aspect of the preceding action - In this scenario it does not make sense to say that Mott published "Discourse on Women" by arguing... for women...".
2. presents the "RESULT" of the preceding action - Even this function doe snot make sense because "arguing for women rights" was not the result of publishing "Discourse on Women".

Also, this choice fails to establish that actually "Discourse on Women" is the treatise that Mott published. The phrase "in a treatise" suggests that Mott argued for women rights in some treatise other than "Discourse on Women".

Analysis of Choice E: This choice employs Noun + Noun Modifier that can refer to any entity in the preceding clause. Here, "a treatise" = Noun and "that argued for..." = Noun Modifier. Together this Noun + Noun Modifier modifies "Discourse on Women". It gives more information about this entity. So "Discourse on Women" is a treatise that did something. This Choice CLEARLY communicates the meaning of the sentence. Hence, Choice E is the correct answer.

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19 Apr 2014, 03:18
Hello E-GMAT Team,

I have a query regarding the usage of verb-ing modifier and I am using the below OG-13 question to represent it.

A surge in new home sales and a drop in weekly unemployment claims suggest that the economy might not be as weak as some analysts previously thought.

A. claims suggest that the economy might not be as weak as some analysts previously thought
B. claims suggests that the economy might not be so weak as some analysts have previously thought
C. claims suggest that the economy might not be as weak as have been previously thought by some analysts
D. claims, suggesting about the economy that it might not be so weak as previously thought by some analysts
E. claims, suggesting the economy might not be as weak as previously thought to be by some analysts

My doubt is about option D and E. I understand that the verb-ing modifier preceded by a comma modifies the previous clause. But considering option D/E, "A surge in new home sales and a drop in weekly unemployment claims" is not a clause since is doesn't have a verb and hence the usage of "suggesting" as a verb-ing modifier would be wrong.

But if I change option E to something like this :- A surge in new home sales and a drop in weekly unemployment claims give hope to the nation, suggesting the economy might not be as weak as previously thought to be by some analysts.

Would the above be correct as the part before the comma has a verb "give" and so is a clause now?

Also, can we change the position of the verb "give" and make the sentence like this :- A surge in new home sales and a drop in weekly unemployment claims, suggesting the economy might not be as weak as previously thought to be by some analysts, give hope to the nation.

I think the non-restrictive clause beginning with the verb-ing modifier can be done away with and the remaining sentence "A surge in new home sales and a drop in weekly unemployment claims give hope to the nation" would still make perfect sense even if the part before the comma doesn't have a verb. I am not sure about this though.

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23 Aug 2015, 12:19
@e-Gmat - Great article!

However, I am unable to find the Rule #2 article linked on this post.
Can you please do that. It would be of immense help.
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Great Article.

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