aditi1903 wrote:
Found even in ancient Egyptian mummies, the parasitic Guinea worm became the focus of a global public health campaign in 1986; this species of parasite has declined for two decades, and may finally be eradicated from the earth by 2010.
(A) Found even in ancient Egyptian mummies, the parasitic Guinea worm became the focus of a global public health campaign in 1986; this species of parasite has
(B) Being the focus of a global public health campaign since 1986 and found even in ancient Egyptian mummies; the population of the parasitic Guinea worm has
(C) Having been the focus of a global public health campaign in 1986, it was found even in ancient Egyptian mummies; the frequency of the parasitic Guinea worm
(D) Being found even in ancient Egyptian mummies and having been the focus of a global public health campaign since 1986, the frequency of the parasitic Guinea worm
(E) Having been found even in ancient Egyptian mummies and being the focus of a global public health campaign since 1986, the parasitic Guinea worm species
OFFICIAL EXPLANATION
To be logical, each independent clause of this sentence must use chronological order; to be clear, each clause must avoid wordy or awkward phrasing. “
Found even in ancient Egyptian mummies” is a logically and grammatically correct way to begin the sentence, and this modifying phrase is correctly followed immediately by the noun it modifies, “
the parasitic Guinea worm.” The clauses before and after the semicolon are both independent, as required.
(A) CORRECT. The original sentence is correct as written.
(B) “
Being the focus of a global public health campaign since 1986” is an awkward construction that should be replaced by the more direct “
became the focus of a global public health campaign in 1986.” The phrases “
being …since 1986” and “
found even in ancient Egyptian mummies” are presented in an illogical and ungrammatical sequence. The clause before the semicolon is not independent; rather, it is a modifying phrase with nothing to modify. The connecting punctuation should be a comma, to make it clear that “
being the focus…mummies” modifies “
the parasitic Guinea worm.”
(C) “
Having been” suggests that the focus on the disease came chronologically before the worms were found in ancient Egyptian mummies. The semicolon is used correctly only if the clauses before and after the semicolon are each independent. Therefore, the phrase “
parasitic Guinea worm” must be used before the semicolon; otherwise, the pronoun “
it” has no logical antecedent. Also, "
frequency of the parasitic Guinea worm" is incorrect; the frequency cannot be eradicated.
(D) Progressive verb forms “
being found” and “
having been” illogically suggest continuous action and fail to establish a logical event sequence. Moreover, this choice is expressed in a manner that is wordy and awkward. Also, "
frequency of the parasitic Guinea worm" is incorrect; the frequency cannot be eradicated.
(E) Progressive verb forms “
Having been found” and “
being” illogically suggest continuous action and fail to establish a logical event sequence. Moreover, this choice is expressed in a manner that is wordy and awkward.