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The company announced that its profits declined much less in the second quarter than analysts had expected it to and its business will improve in the second half of the year.

A) had expected it to and its business will improve
B) had expected and that its business would improve
C) expected it would and that it will improve its business
D) expected them to and its business would improve
E) expected and that it will have improved its business

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Re: Company announced that its profits... [#permalink] New post 01 Jun 2009, 20:49
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Without seeing the spoiler I got B in first look.

The sentence is in past perfect tense, with analysts expected earlier in time and profits declined later in time.

So C, D, and E are out. Now the choice is between A and B.

A is incorrect because of no clear antecedents (precedent) of pronoun "it". [Thanks Allen for correcting me that pronoun have antecedent and not precedent..........:)]

Hence B is the answer.

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Re: Company announced that its profits... [#permalink] New post 01 Jun 2009, 21:01
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I think humans' explanation is great.

I think the antecedent of "it" in answer A is clear, but "it" is singular when the sentence is refering to "profits" which is plural. I think this is an error that is easier to notice. This same reason also means C is wrong. D seems awkward like "them to" is unnecessary. It's certainly implied, but I think we need "had expected" for past tense (past perfect?).

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The company announced that its profits declined much less in the second quarter than analysts had expected it to and its business will improve in the second half of the year.

A) had expected it to and its business will improve
B) had expected and that its business would improve
C) expected it would and that it will improve its business
D) expected them to and its business would improve
E) expected and that it will have improved its business

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Re: Company announced that its profits... [#permalink] New post 02 Jun 2009, 04:43
I just noticed parallelism too which really narrows it down:

The company announced that its profits declined much less in the second quarter than analysts had expected it to and its business will improve in the second half of the year.

B) had expected and that its business would improve
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Re: Company announced that its profits... [#permalink] New post 05 Mar 2010, 15:23
This site gives decent examples on when and why this case is used: http://www.ego4u.com/en/cram-up/grammar/simpas-pasper
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Re: Company announced that its profits... [#permalink] New post 09 Jun 2010, 03:13
Simple B. Had is needed to explain that 'expected' occurred before actual decline. And past tense of will is would
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Re: Company announced that its profits... [#permalink] New post 09 Jun 2010, 06:19
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I3igDmsu wrote:
The company announced that its profits declined much less in the second quarter than analysts had expected it to and its business will improve in the second half of the year.

A) had expected it to and its business will improve
B) had expected and that its business would improve
C) expected it would and that it will improve its business
D) expected them to and its business would improve
E) expected and that it will have improved its business

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Hi Guys,

There are some other important issues to take note of here!

1. Ellipsis: In A, "had expected it to" implies the word "decline," but "decline" is not in the sentence-- "declined" is! It's perfectly alright to leave a word out, as long as that exact same word appears somewhere else in the sentence!

Ex. CORRECT:Joe's shoes are nicer than Bob's (shoes). The last word is optional because "shoes" already appears.
Ex. CORRECT:Joe is taller than Bob (is). The last word is optional because "is" already appears.
Ex. INCORRECT: Joe has and always will be confident. The word "been" is missing! You cannot imply a word that never appears in the sentence!! This is considered an error in ellipsis.



2. The phrase of parallelism here is "A and B", meaning that "and" must connect between two words/phrases of the same grammatical structure. In this case A is the relative clause, "that its profits declined... So B must also be a relative clause!! "that+a subject+a verb..." Any answer that failed to put "that" after the "and" can be eliminated!!! This is tested a lot on the SC!!!

3. Why "would" and not "will"?
This is a matter of reported speech.
A direct quote would be this: The company announced, "Our business will improve..."
Reported speech pulls the tense back: The company announced that its business would improve...
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Re: Company announced that its profits... [#permalink] New post 09 Jun 2010, 06:33
I3igDmsu wrote:
The company announced that its profits declined much less in the second quarter than analysts had expected it to and its business will improve in the second half of the year.

A) had expected it to and its business will improve
B) had expected and that its business would improve
C) expected it would and that it will improve its business
D) expected them to and its business would improve
E) expected and that it will have improved its business

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OG=B



checking for parallelism.

company announced that .... and that.......

So only B and C. left.

C violates the SV agreement. it cannot refer to plural "profits"

B it is.
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Re: The company announced that its profits declined much less in [#permalink] New post 09 May 2012, 10:12
We can eliminate C,D and E by using following principle.

Past sentence should be followed with past perfect tense.(In above situation- Company announced is past sentence and it should be followed "had expected")

And A is wrong since "had expected it" is makes wrong because of unnecessary use of "it".

Last Left B which is correct

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