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 The Organization for Economic Cooperation and Development in Finland requires that all teachers have master’s degree and funds the same to ensure that its teachers impart high quality of teaching. A. degree and funds the same to ensure B. degree, funds the same, and ensures C. degree and fund the same to ensure D. degree, funds the same, ensuring E. degree, funding the same to ensure
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Re: 3 - Exercise Sentence 2 - Quality of Teaching [#permalink]
14 Dec 2011, 23:05
The Organization for Economic Cooperation and Development in Finland requires that all teachers have master’s degree and funds the same to ensure that its teachers impart high quality of teaching.
A. degree and funds the same to ensure B. degree, funds the same, and ensures C. degree and fund the same to ensure D. degree, funds the same, ensuring E. degree, funding the same to ensure
The organization requires that all teachers have masters' degree and fund the same [to ensure that its teachers impart high quality of teaching]
Since there is a subjunctive 'requires', we need to use base form of verb i.e. 'have', & 'fund'
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Re: 3 - Exercise Sentence 2 - Quality of Teaching [#permalink]
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egmat wrote: The Organization for Economic Cooperation and Development in Finland requires that all teachers have master’s degree and funds the same to ensure that its teachers impart high quality of teaching. [list] A. degree and funds the same to ensure B. degree, funds the same, and ensures C. degree and fund the same to ensure D. degree, funds the same, ensuring E. degree, funding the same to ensure
This is subjunctive mood, and "fund" should be paralleled with "have". If "fund" is the noun, the correct form should be "the same fund", not "fund the same". So, easily we can eliminate A, B, and D. In choice E, funding will make sense that the action of having master's degree will fund the same. I don't feel any sense in this case. In choice C, this make more sense to me. All teachers fund the same to ensure that its teachers impart high quality of teaching.
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Re: 3 - Exercise Sentence 2 - Quality of Teaching [#permalink]
15 Dec 2011, 19:22
The Organization for Economic Cooperation and Development in Finland requires that all teachers have master’s degree and funds the same to ensure that its teachers impart high quality of teaching.
A. degree and funds the same to ensure -- not clear whether funding the teachers or Masters degree. B. degree, funds the same, and ensures-- Organization cannot insure for sure. It can just try. C. degree and fund the same to ensure -- singular funds is required here D. degree, funds the same, ensuring-- funding the same to ensure-action to ensure something not automatically getting ensured. E. degree, funding the same to ensure -- Present participle "funding" modifies the sentence before the comma." Same" here refers to the policy of the organization to have all the teachers with masters degree only. & it funds this policy.
I will go with E.
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Re: 3 - Exercise Sentence 2 - Quality of Teaching [#permalink]
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I have just posted the official answer. I will post the solution soon. But before I do that, I want to see a few more responses with correct answer and explanation. Think little hard about the meaning of the sentence. Read the sentence and focus on the what the author is trying to say. A hint - what are the two things that the organization does? Disclaimer: This question probably takes meaning thing further than usual. The choices hardly have any grammatical errors. This was done on purpose to "force" the thought process in the direction of meaning and logic... Looking forward to some more responses...
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Re: 3 - Exercise Sentence 2 - Quality of Teaching [#permalink]
16 Dec 2011, 09:43
Before the meaning issue, A has a modification problem IMHO. Meaning wise too, I do not think A conveys a logical correlation by equating requirement and funding. More on this after the OE is out.
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Re: 3 - Exercise Sentence 2 - Quality of Teaching [#permalink]
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Quote: The Organization for Economic Cooperation and Development in Finland requires that all teachers have master’s degree and funds the same to ensure that its teachers impart high quality of teaching. A. degree and funds the same to ensure B. degree, funds the same, and ensures C. degree and fund the same to ensure D. degree, funds the same, ensuring E. degree, funding the same to ensure OMG, I found my problem. The subject of "funds" is The Organization for Economic Cooperation and Development in Finland. The teachers "fund" mean something illogical. It should let the organization rather than teacher "fund".
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Re: 3 - Exercise Sentence 2 - Quality of Teaching [#permalink]
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Quote: egmat wrote: The Organization for Economic Cooperation and Development in Finland requires that all teachers have master’s degree and funds the same to ensure that its teachers impart high quality of teaching. A. degree and funds the same to ensure B. degree, funds the same, and ensures C. degree and fund the same to ensure D. degree, funds the same, ensuring E. degree, funding the same to ensure
Here is the official explanation for this question:  Understand the Meaning of the Original Sentence The sentence presents two facts about an organization in Finland - Organization for Economic Cooperation and Development. This organization does two things with an aim to ensure that its teachers impart high quality of teaching. 1. It requires that all teachers have masters’ degree 2. It funds the same – i.e. it funds the masters’ degree education of teachers. Find the Errors in the Original Sentence 1. The Organization [/color]for Economic Cooperation and Development in Finland requires a. that all teachers have master’s degree 2. and funds the same to ensure that its teachers impart high quality of teaching. In this sentence the two verbs – requires and funds – make sense and agree in number with the subject - organization. Per the context of the modifier “to ensure that its teachers…”, it is clear that it provides the purpose of both the actions of the organization. This sentence is correct as is. Review Answer Choices to do POE Choice B – This choice no longer provides the purpose of the actions. By changing “to ensure” to “and ensures”, the sentence implies that the organization somehow (probably with some other measures) ensures that its teachers impart high quality of teachers. This is not the intended meaning of the sentence. Choice C – This choice is also grammatically correct but it changes the intended meaning of the sentence. Per this choice, the organization requires two things from the teachers. 1. Teachers have master’s degree 2. Teachers fund the master’s degree This is clearly not the intended meaning. Per the intended meaning, the organization requires that teachers have master’s degree and in fact the organization itself funds the same (obviously for the teachers who do not have master’s degree). The organization implements this requirement and funds the education with a single aim – high quality of teaching. Choice D – This choice does not use correct punctuation to connect the two verbs – requires and funds. Choice E – Use of “funding the same…” is incorrect here. Neither of the two interpretations of the verb-ing modifier is correct: 1. Organization requires that teachers have master’s degree – this results in the organization funding the education. –Illogical. 2. Organization requires that teachers have master’s degree by funding the same. - Illogical TAKE AWAYS 1. Understand the meaning of the original sentence. Note the relationships among each part of the sentence – both from grammatical standpoint and from logical standpoint. 2. Make sure that these relationships are maintained in the correct choice as well.
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Re: 3 - Exercise Sentence 2 - Quality of Teaching [#permalink]
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Re: 3 - Exercise Sentence 2 - Quality of Teaching [#permalink]
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Organization ... 'requires that' ... should be followed by infinitive "to ensure" so, B,D out. fund is a verb used for subject Organization so it should be parallel to requires. so it should be 'funds'. In this sentence main clause ends before 'and'. "Organization requires that Teachers have master's degree and funds ..."
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Re: 3 - Exercise Sentence 2 - Quality of Teaching [#permalink]
21 Dec 2011, 03:44
OECD requires ....... and funds. Make sense. A.
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Re: 3 - Exercise Sentence 2 - Quality of Teaching [#permalink]
06 May 2013, 07:29
Why is "degree" not plural?
"all teachers have degrees...."
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