neeraj609 wrote:
Hi mikemcgarry
Can you please help me understand the usage of both in this sentence. Is it not odd to say
"I both finished home work and played outside" as compared to "I did both finished homework and played outside". The non-underlined part uses the first one in the list.
Thanks in advance!
Dear
neeraj609,
I'm happy to respond.
First of all, my friend, I am going to make a suggestion. When you are discussing individual words and their usage, please put the word in quote marks to distinguish it. You wrote:
Can you please help me understand the usage of both in this sentence.
At first, I thought you were trying to say:
Can you please help me understand the usage in both of these sentences?Then I realized, you were trying to say:
Can you please help me understand the usage of "both" in this sentence?Do you see the confusion caused by what you wrote? Part of studying for the GMAT effectively is learning how to communicate with precision. Imprecise communication in the business world costs millions of dollars in losses!
What you are asking is tricky is because it's not a point of grammar. It's a point of
rhetoric. Remember that the GMAT SC is NOT simply a test of grammar. It is a test of grammar, logic, and rhetoric all together, and to pay attention to grammar and ignore the other two is disastrous.
Think about your original sentence, without the word "
both."
"
I finished home work and played outside."
Of course, this is not a particularly GMAT-like sentence. In this sentence as written, there are no surprises. In fact, the action it describes is entirely cliche. When a young person finishes her homework, we expect that young person to play outside. That is 100% predictable.
In the structure
[subject]"both"[verb #1]"and"[verb #2], the word "
both" is used for rhetorical emphasis, to highlight an unexpected combination of actions. If the two actions are expected with each other, as in your example sentence, the word "
both" is 100% out of place. Consider this sentence:
My friend both dances ballet and practices karate.
In that sentence, the word "
both" is entirely justified, because this combination of actions jars our expectations. Ballet is graceful and delicate, and we expect an artistic sensitive person to do that. Karate is a powerful martial art form, and we expect someone tough to practice that. The idea of someone who does both is entirely unexpected, and the word "
both" highlights the fact that the combination is beyond our expectations.
This is precisely what is happening in this SC question. Historically, most groups that broke with the Roman Catholic Church during the Reformation banded together in alliance, so the fact that the Calvinist broke with the Catholics and also didn't align with the Lutherans jars our expectations. We wouldn't expect one group to take both of those actions. The word "
both" serves rhetorically to highlight this broken expectation.
Does all this make sense?
Mike