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What is the GMAT Focus Edition? 

The current GMAT Focus Edition, which is taken primarily by applicants to MBA programs, is an exam with three sections: Quantitative Reasoning, Verbal Reasoning, and Data Insights. The original GMAT exam was updated in early 2024 to this current version, which is two hours and 15 minutes long and includes 64 questions. 

Section details are as follows, per GMAC:

Exam Section Number of questions Time length

Quantitative Reasoning 2145 min

Verbal Reasoning 2345 min

Data Insights 2045 min

What is the scoring breakdown for the GMAT Focus Edition?

Total Scores for the exam range from 205 to 805, and all Total Scores end in 5. Section scores range from 60 to 90. Comparing your final scores to these ranges should give you a clear indication of where you are strong and areas where you can improve.      

Total Score

Score range: 205–805

Score intervals: 10

Standard error of measurement: 30–40 points

Quantitative Reasoning Score

Score range: 60–90

Score intervals: 1

Standard error of measurement: 3 points

Verbal Reasoning Score

Score range: 60–90

Score intervals: 1

Standard error of measurement: 3 points

Data Insights Score

Score range: 60–90

Score intervals: 1

Standard error of measurement: 3 points

How does GMAT scoring work?

The GMAT is a computer adaptive test, which means that your score is calculated with an algorithm that adjusts the difficulty level of the questions you receive based on your performance as you proceed through the exam. In other words, you essentially receive increasingly difficult test questions as you perform better and less difficult ones when you answer questions incorrectly. In this way, the exam aims to identify your precise ability level.

Your final GMAT scores take into account not just how many questions you got correct and incorrect but also the difficulty level of each question you answered. Your overall score is based on your results on all three sections, weighted equally. 

Overall GMAT Scoring and Section Subscores

Each section has a final subscore of 60–90, and all three sections combine to create the overall 205–805 Total Score that is most often cited by test takers and business schools. 

How can I tell whether a score is for the GMAT Focus or the previous version of the GMAT? 

The previous version of the GMAT was retired on January 31, 2024. The scoring scale was previously 200–800, so if you see GMAT Total Scores that end in zero, those are for the older version of the GMAT. All GMAT Focus scores end in five, making them easily distinguishable from scores for the previous version of the test. 

What other changes were made to the GMAT when it became the GMAT Focus? 

Additional changes that were made to the GMAT when it was relaunched as the GMAT Focus are as follows:

  • The exam was shortened. 

  • Percentiles were recalibrated based on more recent test-taker trends. 

  • The IR (Integrated Reasoning) and AWA (Analytical Writing Assessment) sections were eliminated. 

  • The Data Insights section, which is similar to the previous IR section, is now an equally weighted section that factors into a test taker’s overall score. 

  • Content areas were revised (e.g Sentence Corrections questions were eliminated) to better focus on skills necessary for business school, such as critical thinking, data analysis, and problem-solving. 

  • The Question Review & Edit feature was added, allowing test takers to revisit and adjust their responses, if needed.

Learn even more about the GMAT Focus here.

What happens if I do not finish a section on the GMAT or leave questions blank? 

You will be penalized for any unanswered questions on the GMAT Focus. Managing your time appropriately is therefore important, and you should make a strategic guess if you are unsure about or stuck on a particular question to reduce the impact of this penalty. 

Can I go back to previous questions on the GMAT? 

Yes, the current GMAT Focus Edition allows you to mark a particular question and return to it later while you are still in that section. You can review any question and edit up to three answers in a final Question Review & Edit screen, as long as you still have time remaining at the end of the section. Just be sure to allocate time to return to those questions!

Which parts of my GMAT score are most important? 

Your Total Score (205–805) is the most important in the MBA admissions process. This score will affect your MBA program’s class average, and the admissions committees use this score in their efforts to predict your level of success in their program. So even though you want to maximize your scores in all three sections, any number of score combinations can result in the same Total Score. 

However, because the MBA is a quantitative degree in nature, a very low GMAT Quant subscore could become a red flag or concern for a candidate in a competitive application environment. 

What is a “good” GMAT score? 

Two key considerations influence what would be considered a “good” GMAT score: 

  • Percentiles 

  • Average score(s) at your target school(s) 

To see how your specific overall and subscores compare to those of other test takers, you can reference the latest percentiles, which are compiled by GMAC, the organization that administers the GMAT. 

GMAT percentiles

GMAT Focus Total Score Percentiles courtesy of mba.com

ScoreMean ScorePercentile Ranking

8050%

755100%

705100%

65599%

60593%

555546.0175%

50553%

45531%

40517%

3558%

3053%

2551%

2050%

Percentiles reveal how your score compares with those of everyone who has taken the exam globally. Scoring at the 50th percentile means that you have scored higher than 50% of test takers. Currently, a 90th percentile Total Score would equate to about a 655, for reference. Average scores at the top U.S. full-time MBA programs (such as Harvard Business School, the Stanford Graduate School of Business, Wharton, and Columbia Business School) have typically been around the 95th percentile (meaning that only the top 5% of test takers score at this level), which currently is approximately 675.

Average GMAT scores at specific MBA programs

Be sure to also research what the average test score is at each of your target programs. Your admissions chances will be higher if your score is equal to or higher than the averages at your intended schools. 

You can find the average test score at your target programs in several places online, including in the Class Profile for each individual program. 

View a composite list of average GMAT scores at top U.S. MBA programs, compiled by Poets&Quants.

Average GMAT Scores At The Leading U.S. B-Schools

2022 P&Q RankSchoolAverage GMAT 2022202120203-Year Trend2019201820176-Year Trend

1Stanford GSB7377387334734732737Even

2Chicago Booth7297327245730731730-1

3Penn Wharton73373372211732732730-3

4Northwestern Kellogg7297277272730732732-3

5Harvard Business School730*730*730*Even730*730*729*1

6MIT Sloan730*730*725*5727728722NA

7Columbia Business School72972972637277327245

8Dartmouth Tuck72672472067237227224

9UC-Berkeley Haas72972672727257267254

10Yale SOM725*726720NA721724727NA

11Duke Fuqua7187137021670570470216

12Michigan Ross720722710107197207164

13NYU Stern7337297231072171771419

14Virginia Darden720715703177137187137

15Cornell Johnson710*710*700*10697699700NA

16Carnegie Mellon Tepper7026916802268769069111

17UCLA Anderson7117147065719719716-5

18USC Marshall7327167072570870570329

19UNC Kenan-Flagler706696694126977037015

20Texas-Austin McCombs70670870427047037033

21Washington Foster710*704692NA695696693NA

22Indiana Kelley685679652336666746787

23Georgetown McDonough69770569166946936925

24Rice Jones70270568913710706711-9

25Vanderbilt Owen69069067614680678690Even

26Emory Goizueta7006926831768468568218

27Georgia Tech Scheller6906826801068168168010

*Median; five schools report median scores only, up from three schools in 2021. Table: Poets&Quants  Source: School-reported data    Created with Datawrapper

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Search on U.S. News & World Report for average test scores. 

Keep in mind that the scores you will find on either of these resources might still be for the previous version of the GMAT (using the 200–800 scale). 

How do I compare a previous GMAT score with a newer GMAT Focus Edition score? 

GMAC offers a Concordance Table on its website that shows the correlation between scores on the previous version of the GMAT and those on the new GMAT Focus. Note that these are subject to change and that percentiles are also updated annually. 

View GMAT and GMAT Focus Concordance Tables.

What does the GMAT test involve? 

Question types within Verbal Reasoning include Critical Reasoning and Reading Comprehension. The Verbal section of the exam aims to assess your ability to read and understand material, and to evaluate arguments and reason logically. 

All question types within the Quantitative Reasoning section are considered Problem Solving questions. Topics covered in the Quant section include number properties, arithmetic, algebra, and geometry. This section aims to assess your knowledge of algebra and arithmetic, as well as your analytical thinking skills. 

Question types within Data Insights include Data Sufficiency, Multi-Source Reasoning, Table Analysis, Graphics Interpretation, and Two-Part Analysis. This section aims to assess how you work with data in real-world situations. 

Overall, the GMAT also tests your ability to analyze and work with data, work with incomplete information, communicate, make decisions, and manage your time under pressure. 

How do schools use GMAT scores in the MBA admissions process? 

Business schools look at your GMAT score, in combination with your undergraduate performance (overall GPA as well as specifics on your transcripts), to predict your ability to handle the academic rigor of their MBA program. 

MBA admissions decisions are holistic and take into account many factors, including a candidate’s test score(s), academic background, work experience, leadership potential, recommender insight, extracurricular involvement, career goals, and fit with the program.  GMAT scores alone will not get an applicant accepted to a program, but scoring well below the program’s average can certainly hold an applicant back and become a roadblock to acceptance. In addition, you will often be competing for a space in the class with many other well-qualified candidates who are also submitting strong test scores, so to maximize your chances, you want to score as high as possible on your test. 

When should I take the GMAT, and how long should I take to prepare for it?

GMAT scores are valid for five years, so even if you are not planning to apply to business school for several more years, taking the exam sooner rather than later can be beneficial. Create a time frame for studying for and taking the exam that works with your professional and personal schedule. 

Most candidates spend two to four months preparing for the GMAT. You might consider taking a preparation course and/or working with a tutor, which can help strengthen your quantitative and verbal foundations and maximize your score. 

A thorough prep course will provide the following:

  • Foundational content you must review to do well on test day (e.g., number properties, algebra)

  • Specific strategies for approaching each question type and for times you get stuck 

  • Realistic practice in the form of full-length computer adaptive exams to ensure that you are ready for the actual test experience 

Test Prep Tips to maximize your GMAT score

Follow these tips to give yourself the best chance of achieving your target GMAT score: 

  • Give yourself two to four months to prepare (on average, top scorers prepare for more than 80 hours).

  • Set a study plan and stick to it (e.g., two to three hours a day, four or five days a week, for two or three months).

  • Take five to eight full practice exams before test day. 

  • Do not study the day before the test; give yourself a mental break.

Read tips on how to analyze your GMAT practice problems.

Should I retake the GMAT? 

Retaking the GMAT is not something you need to avoid, because business schools will use your highest score when evaluating you for admission. We therefore recommend that you consider retaking the exam if you feel you can improve your score and/or you scored below your desired target for your intended business schools. 

Taking the exam more than once is relatively common. Be aware that you must wait 16 days between exams, and build that into your timeline as you plan ahead. 

If you have taken the GMAT exam and hope to improve your score, we recommend purchasing GMAC’s Enhanced Score Report, which will reveal the question types and subject areas in which you most need to improve. 

Do I actually need to take the GMAT? Are alternatives to the GMAT available?

The vast majority of business schools currently require that you take either the GMAT or the GRE exam and submit your score as part of your application. Schools generally do not have a preference between the two exams (GMAT or GRE), so you should take the exam on which you feel you would score higher and that would help present you in the strongest possible light as an applicant. 

We recommend that you take a free online practice exam (available on each respective test developer’s website) early in your test preparation process to assess your comfort level with both exam options and generate a rough starting score, and then use that experience to determine which test to focus on. Note that some candidates actually take both exams to see which one they ultimately perform better on (there is a large proportion of overlap in the subject areas covered). 

If you have taken a practice exam for both the GMAT and the GRE and are still unsure as to which one to focus on, or if you just need additional advice related to your test preparation, contact us to schedule a free 30-minute consultation with one of our experienced MBA admissions consultants, who can offer valuable input on your situation. We offer these complimentary advice consultations on a weekly basis across multiple time zones. 

What about the Executive Assessment? 

A small but growing number of full-time MBA programs also accept a third admissions exam, the Executive Assessment (EA). The EA was created by the same organization that produces the GMAT and was initially intended for candidates applying for Executive MBA (EMBA) programs. The EA is accepted as an alternative to the GMAT or GRE at several elite U.S. full-time MBA programs, including Columbia Business School, NYU Stern, UVA Darden, Duke Fuqua, Texas McCombs, and Georgetown McDonough. 

View a full list of programs that accept the EA, according to GMAC

What about GMAT/GRE test waivers? 

Some MBA programs have begun offering test waivers for applicants who either cannot take an exam or feel they have sufficient evidence to otherwise demonstrate their quantitative, analytical, and verbal reasoning skills. If you are considering applying for a test waiver, you must review the specific requirements outlined by the school in question, because policies tend to vary widely. In general, you will need to provide evidence that proves your abilities via past academics, work experience, and/or certifications or other graduate degrees. 

Read more about test waivers and who should consider them.

Check out our list of top U.S. programs, test requirements, and waiver offerings.* 

(*Subject to change; we recommend that you review each school’s policy for the most up-to-date info on its requirements and options.)

Can I still take the previous version of the GMAT exam? 

No. As of January 31, 2024, the previous version of the GMAT exam is no longer offered. The GMAT Focus Edition is the only GMAT exam option. 

How do I choose the best exam option?

The GMAT has historically been the primary exam taken by applicants to MBA programs and to some specialized master’s degree programs in finance, management, and other business disciplines. However, today, the GRE is also accepted by most global business schools, and some programs, particularly in the United States, accept the EA as well, or even a test waiver in specific instances. 

We encourage you to be intentional when deciding which test to take. Try several practice tests initially, research your target school requirements, and then determine which exam is the best fit for you and your situation. Feel free to reach out to us with any questions you might have along the way.

Hear more advice on determining which test to take for MBA applications.

Have questions about your specific GMAT test plan or MBA application profile? 

Sign up for a complimentary, 30-minute consultation at your convenience.
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For its first required application essay, the Haas School of Business at the University of California, Berkeley, wants candidates to dig deep on a personal level and discuss something about which they are passionate, and for its second, applicants are asked to explain where they hope to go professionally after earning their degree and how they anticipate the Haas MBA program will help them get there. In response to the school’s third prompt, applicants must submit a brief essay on their firsthand experience with a diversity-related situation or issue. And the program’s fourth required “essay” is actually a short video on the candidate’s connection with one of the school’s four Defining Leadership Principles. The Haas admissions committee takes a slightly different approach to the optional essay than most programs do, offering both a short, multipart questionnaire (which is less complicated than it might seem at first glance) and a straightforward prompt that invites applicants, if needed, to address any unclear or problem areas in their profile. Together, the essays should allow you to offer insight into who you are as an individual and who you hope to be as a future business leader, to complement the information presented in your resume, recommendations, and basic stats. Read on for our more detailed analysis of all the school’s 2024–2025 prompts.

Berkeley Haas 2024–2025 Essay Tips
[b]Required Essay #1: What makes you feel alive when you are doing it, and why? (300 words maximum)[/b]

Perhaps you are familiar with the psychological concept of “flow,” which is a mental state people enter when they are completely immersed in and focused on something they enjoy and are enthusiastic about—it is also described as being “in the zone.” With this question, Berkeley Haas is basically asking you to discuss what puts you in the zone. If you are truly excited about something—and, we would assume, therefore engage in it on a regular basis—writing about it should not prove too challenging. Like all other application questions, this one has no “right” answer, so do not try to guess what you think the school wants to hear. Authenticity is key to your success here. Note that the prompt includes the words “when you are doing it,” so although you may feel strongly about certain causes or values, such as animal rights or environmental matters, for this essay, you will need to discuss an activity rather than an ideology. 

The school does not stipulate that your topic needs to come from a specific area of your life (e.g., professional life, community service, personal life). We appreciate that you are likely passionate about your career, but this is not automatically your best choice for a topic here, especially given that the school’s second required essay offers a better opportunity to discuss your professional side. What Berkeley Haas wants to learn from this essay is what gets your heart pumping and mind revving. Enthusiasm and intensity can be very inspiring and energizing and can lead to big ideas and actions. Sharing what incites such feelings in you gives the admissions committee an idea of where you might someday make an impression on the world, how you might leave your mark—especially once you are equipped with all you will gain and learn during your MBA experience.

That said, do not worry if the thing you feel so fervently about might initially seem commonplace to someone else. For example, perhaps you feel passionate about basketball. Because this is an interest anyone could share and enjoy, you might have concerns that it could sound pedestrian or unremarkable—and for many, this is a completely unremarkable pastime and one they should not write about. If, however, you can show that you have engaged with basketball in a way that takes the activity well beyond being a commonplace hobby and that it is something you connect with on a deep level and in various ways (perhaps having played for many years, you now coach youth teams from underprivileged neighborhoods in your community), then it most definitely becomes an acceptable discussion topic. In such a case, basketball could be used to reveal intensity, dedication, commitment to yourself and others, growth, longevity, and/or resilience. Of course, we are offering basketball here just for illustration purposes. We imagine you likely feel the flow when engaging in a completely different activity or even in disparate activities that are unified by a single behavior, such as when you are creating something or perhaps motivating others. The options are very much endless.

Once you have identified the passion you wish to discuss, avoid simply telling the admissions committee about it and instead illustrate how it manifests in your life. For example, rather than starting your essay by stating, “I have been watching and playing basketball since I was a child,” you need to create a more vivid impression of your dedication and involvement, such as “From playing with my brothers after school to varsity ball in college to now coaching a youth league in my community, I can hardly remember a time when basketball wasn’t an integral part of my life.” Or consider a more narrative approach, such as, “Dripping with sweat, I thrust my right arm up and knocked the basketball away, just as the buzzer sounded.” Once you have set the scene and presented the object of your fervor, you must then explain why you connect with it so strongly or so well. Perhaps it gives you a sense of peace or purpose, or it makes you feel connected with others in a meaningful way, or it allows you to challenge yourself mentally or physically. A successful essay response will not only paint a clear picture of your passion but also highlight the elements of your personality that make it significant to you.

[b]Required Essay #2: What are your short-term and long-term career goals, and how will an MBA from Haas help you achieve those goals?[/b]

[b]Short-term career goals should be achievable within 3-5 years post-MBA, whereas long-term goals may span a decade or more and encompass broader professional aspirations. (300 words max)[/b]

With this rather no-nonsense query about your motivation to earn an MBA and expectations as to where you will go with it professionally after graduation, Haas simply wants you to spell out what you have in mind as you approach this phase of your life and career. With just 300 words, focus on presenting your answer as directly and thoroughly as possible. Keep in mind that the rest of your application needs to provide evidence that your stated goals align with your existing skills and interests, especially once they have been augmented by an MBA education. This will show that your professed objectives are achievable and thereby lend credibility to your statement. Also take care to present your goals in such a way that the transition from your short-term objective to your long-term aspiration makes sense.

Interestingly, this year, Haas has added a definition for what it considers “short-term” and “long-term” goals, which is unique among the top MBA programs. While some schools specify that they want candidates to identify the position they hope to gain immediately after graduating, Haas is giving applicants leeway to think a little more broadly and envision their path more practically. For example, perhaps the role you truly want is more easily achieved a year or two out of the MBA program, so you might need to enter a different position first as a kind of stepping-stone. Haas wants to know where your true focus lies and be reassured that you have a vision for your career as a whole.

The Haas admissions committee has made another slight adjustment to this prompt from last season in that it now asks how “an MBA from Haas” is key to your reaching your professional objectives, rather than just “an MBA” more generically. This means you must identify Haas-specific resources, opportunities, and offerings and tie them to your particular needs and interests. Your goal is to convince the admissions committee that you do not simply need an MBA to bridge the gap from where you are in your career to where you want to be, you need an MBA from Haas. So research the school thoroughly (though we hope you have already done so at this point) and identify the courses, clubs, events, centers, faculty members, and possibly even extracurriculars that will position you for success in your post-MBA career.  

This straightforward question basically constitutes the core of a typical personal statement essay. And because personal statements are similar from one application to the next, we created our mbaMission [url=http://info.mbamission.com/MBA-Personal-Statement-Guide]Personal Statement Guide[/url], which helps applicants write this style of essay for any school. This publication is available free of charge and provides both detailed guidance and illustrative sample essays. Be sure to download [url=http://info.mbamission.com/MBA-Personal-Statement-Guide]your copy [/url]today.

[b]Essay #3: One of our goals at Berkeley Haas is to develop leaders who value diversity and to create an inclusive environment in which people from different ethnicities, genders, lived experiences, and national origins feel welcomed and supported.[/b]

[b]Describe any experience or exposure you have in the area of diversity, equity, inclusion, justice, and belonging whether through community organizations, personal, or in the workplace?[/b]

[b]Candidates seeking consideration for [url=https://haas.berkeley.edu/financial-aid/full-time-mba/haas-scholarships/entering-students/]mission-aligned fellowships[/url] may use this space to reflect on their commitment to the mission of those fellowships. (300 words max) [/b]

Without question, diversity, equity, and inclusion (DEI) are on many people’s (and companies’) minds these days, and Haas is certainly not the only top MBA program asking applicants to discuss these topics. Some schools’ essay prompts are about times when the applicant cultivated a more diverse community or encountered a challenge related to DEI or had their world view altered by a DEI-related experience, but Haas’s prompt leaves things a bit more open-ended: “any experience or exposure” (emphasis ours). Given that this is a required essay, this leeway will likely be helpful to candidates who might have less exposure to such issues or environments.

You can draw from any area of your life (professional, personal, community/volunteer), so truly reflect on the entirety of your background for possible stories for this essay. Consider your role in the different situations. Were you a leader of a diverse team? A participant or member of a diverse group? An observer? The object of someone else’s focus? Next, consider both your actions and the effect the experience had on you. Did you learn a valuable takeaway or change your mind about an issue, person, or group? Did you change someone else’s perspective? Were you inspired to act in some way—or to maybe cease acting in some way? Did you have to (or choose to) speak up or confront someone, and if so, why?

You do not need to have led a revolution or camped out for days in protest to craft a compelling, effective response to this question (though such stories would understandably make an impression). Authenticity, honesty, and sincerity are all key here. Speak genuinely and directly about your personal experience in the DEI/justice/belonging space and share its import for you and the effect it has had on you, so the Haas admissions committee can understand your level of  familiarity and engagement with these meaningful issues.

If you hope to be considered for a supplemental scholarship, as the prompt directs, you want to highlight your involvement with related communities and/or opportunities and your motivation for that involvement. Be sure to first spend some time researching the relevant fellowships to confirm your eligibility and to gain a better understanding of how you might frame your story to optimize its effectiveness.

[b]Essay #4 (Video): The Berkeley MBA program develops leaders who embody our four [url=https://mba.haas.berkeley.edu/defining-principles]Defining Leadership Principles[/url]. Briefly introduce yourself to the admissions committee, explain which Defining Leadership Principle resonates most with you, and tell us how you have exemplified the principle in your personal or professional life. [/b]

[b]Please review the Defining Leadership Principles in advance and take time to prepare your answer before recording. You will be able to test your audio-visual connection before recording. Video essays should last 1-2 minutes and may not exceed 2 minutes.[/b]

Start by taking a deep breath. We understand that video essays can make you feel like you are being put on the spot, but Haas is really not trying to stress you out. The admissions committee simply wants a more dynamic representation of your personality than a written essay can provide. So just deliver your response honestly, as smoothly as you can (despite any nervousness you might be feeling), and be yourself.

If you have not done so already, you should of course start by familiarizing yourself with the school’s four Defining Leadership Principles so you can determine which one you connect with most and should therefore speak on in your video: Question the Status Quo, Confidence Without Attitude, Students Always, and Beyond Yourself. This question offers you incredible flexibility and is essentially an opportunity for you to share a strong relevant story from your past—one that relates directly to one of the four key principles. First you must “introduce yourself to the admissions committee,” and given that this part is about a topic you know very well (you!), the only real challenge will be keeping this portion succinct. (Remember that your entire video can be no longer than two minutes!) After that, launch right into your story.

Absolutely avoid beginning your anecdote with a statement like “The key principle I have displayed is [fill in the blank].” Instead, let your actions speak for themselves and naturally reveal the connection with one of Haas’s four key tenets. If that connection is not clear on its own, you need to keep refining your story until it is. In a little under two minutes, you can absolutely convey a clear narrative with a distinct beginning, middle, and end that shows the admissions committee your strengths, rather than simply stating that you possess certain characteristics. Do not use any part of your video to pitch your candidacy, detail your career goals, or express your admiration for the program.

Remember to bring energy and enthusiasm to your submission. You are trying to connect with the admissions committee as well as communicate information, so a little charisma is welcome.

[b]Optional Essays: The admissions team takes a holistic approach to application review and seeks to understand all aspects of a candidate’s character, qualifications, and experiences. We will consider achievements in the context of the opportunities available to a candidate. Some applicants may have faced hardships or unusual life circumstances, and we will consider the maturity, perseverance, and thoughtfulness with which they have responded to and/or overcome them.[/b]

[b]Optional Information #1: We invite you to help us better understand the context of your opportunities and achievements. [Note: As of May 22, 2024, the exact questions for this element of the application had not yet been made available. The questions here are from the 2023–2024 season and are meant to provide an idea of what you might expect when the school’s application for 2024–2025 is released.][/b]

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[b]Optional Information #2: This section should only be used to convey relevant information not addressed elsewhere in your application. This may include explanation of employment gaps, academic aberrations, supplemental coursework, etc. You are encouraged to use bullet points where appropriate.[/b]

Although Berkeley Haas’s first optional essay prompt is somewhat elaborate, it is not necessarily all that complicated, and we imagine it will offer some applicants an easy way of highlighting particular elements of their background without having to try to fit them into one of the school’s other essays. The admissions committee clearly wants direct information and basic explanation(s) from this option, so simply answer the questions and succinctly provide any necessary clarifications using the allocated word count.

The second optional essay prompt asks applicants to focus specifically on information they deem most “relevant,” and the lack of a word limit means candidates can fully explain whatever they feel the admissions committee truly must know to be able to evaluate them fully and fairly, though the note about using bullet points implies that succinctness would be appreciated. This is not, however, a blank-slate invitation to dump every bit of remaining information about yourself that you feel the school is lacking. Also, avoid the temptation to simply reuse a strong essay you wrote for another program here or to offer a few anecdotes you were unable to incorporate into your other Berkeley Haas essays. Be judicious in your use of this opportunity, and submit an optional essay only if you truly believe a key element of your story or profile is needed for the school to have a complete and accurate understanding of you as a candidate. Consider downloading your free copy of our [url=https://shop.mbamission.com/products/mbamission-optional-essays-guide][b]mbaMission Optional Essays Guide[/b][/url], in which we offer detailed advice on when and how to take advantage of the optional essay (including multiple sample essays) to help you mitigate any problem areas in your profile.
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We know the job market is a bit tight right now—especially in the tech industry— and many of you are likely struggling to land your target roles. Be assured that you are not alone, but also know that our clients are landing interviews and receiving job offers. So, how can you become one of those people who are securing offers?

Most importantly, focus on what you control (how you present yourself), rather than what you cannot control (companies’ hiring plans). Here are six tips for making your job search efforts more effective.

[b]TIP #1: Do not focus exclusively on online job postings.[/b]
Many job openings are never posted online, and often, for the ones that are, the hiring managers already have a list of top candidates in mind before the opportunity is even listed. So, you should devote more than 50% of your job search time to networking. 

[b]Action Item #1[/b]
Create a list of 10–20 target companies (regardless of whether they currently have an opening of interest posted), and then search your connections to find people who work at these firms. They can help you understand these businesses, their hiring needs, and any job requirements. Use your first-degree network on LinkedIn to request introductions to people in their network (your second- and third-degree network) who are employed at your companies of interest.

[b]TIP #2: Leverage your network to gather information and build advocates. [/b]
[url=https://www.cnbc.com/2019/12/27/how-to-get-a-job-often-comes-down-to-one-elite-personal-asset.html]For years, the media has often estimated[/url] that 70% or more of open positions are never publicly advertised and that up to 80% of openings are filled through job seekers’ professional and personal networks.

[b]Action Item #2[/b]
Be specific in your requests for networking conversations, but do not ask anyone outright for a job (though you can refer to specific job openings that have been posted). Customize each conversation to your contact. Learn about their organization and its needs, ask for introductions and gather information on the best way to navigate the application process.

[b]TIP #3: Customize your application. [/b]
[url=https://www.jobscan.co/blog/fortune-500-use-applicant-tracking-systems/]Jobscan reports[/url] that more than 97% of Fortune 500 companies use applicant tracking systems, but a majority of resumes submitted to these systems are rejected. Using the right keywords and simple formatting is a must.

[b]Action Item #3[/b]
Analyze your target job description and identify specific skills and/or areas of knowledge in the responsibilities section that are especially important for the role. Use information gathered from your networking conversations to highlight your relevant qualifications on your resume.

[b]TIP #4: Submit high-quality applications and follow up on them. [/b]
Do not make the mistake that many candidates do in submitting numerous job applications each week but never taking any initiative to further demonstrate or affirm their level of interest.

[b]Action Item #4[/b]
If you do not hear back on a job application within two weeks, reach out to the hiring manager, the recruiter, or your internal connection. Confirm that the company received your application, reiterate your interest in the role, and ask about the firm’s timeline for hiring. If you are not selected for the position, see whether you can gather any insights on how to enhance your application for future postings. You could also check LinkedIn to see who was ultimately hired for the role, which could help you identify potential gaps in your experience for your target roles.

[b]TIP #5: Deepen your industry-specific knowledge. [/b]
Just being knowledgeable about an industry is no longer enough; employers expect candidates to have opinions on their business and ideas about how to move it forward. With so many qualified job seekers looking for their next opportunity, the onus is on you to clearly connect the dots for the hiring manager. You must demonstrate how you can contribute and add value to the firm.

[b]Action Item #5[/b]
Read (a lot!) about your target companies and industry. Sign up for e-newsletters from trade associations and for relevant industry publications. Follow your desired companies on LinkedIn. 

[b]TIP #6: Redirect your search based on the information you gather from networking conversations, recruiters, and interviews. [/b]
Are you trying to make too big of a pivot in the market? Is the number of jobs in your target role and industry very limited? Are you portraying yourself in a compelling way to your target firm? You might need to make adjustments to your approach based on the answers to these and similar questions.

[b]Action Item #6 [/b]
Think about whether you need to expand or change directions. Evaluate where and how you can shift direction to gain more traction. If you do not know, consider changing the questions you ask your networking contacts to solicit more information that will help guide you.

We believe these actions—in addition to setting weekly networking goals, tracking every conversation, and revisiting your progress on a monthly basis to identify obstacles and ways to overcome them—will increase your chances of success.
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The Yale School of Management (SOM) is one of the few top MBA programs that give candidates just one required application essay with which to make an impression on the admissions committee. The school offers applicants a choice of three topics to, as the admissions committee states, “ensure that you’re able to write about something important to you.” Applicants can expound on a significant commitment and its underlying impetus and meaning (until last year, this essay had been required), discuss a particularly significant community involvement, or describe a major challenge they have faced. The essay has a 500-word maximum, so you need to be clear, direct, and rather succinct in your response, without much preamble or extraneous text. If you feel your primary essay does not allow you to share an aspect of your profile that you believe is particularly important or compelling, or if you have an issue in your candidacy that would benefit from further explication, you can use the “optional information” space to fill in the blanks. Our full analysis of the school’s essay prompts for 2024–2025 follows.

Yale School of Management Essay Analysis, 2024–2025
[b]Required Essay: We want to know what matters to you, and our essay question is designed to help us gain insight into your background, passions, motivations, responsibilities, ideals, identities, challenges, or aspirations, depending on where you take your response. To ensure that you’re able to write about something important to you, we offer you three essay prompts from which to choose:[/b]

[b]1) Describe the biggest commitment you have ever made. Why is this commitment meaningful to you and what actions have you taken to support it? (500-word limit)[/b]

When this intriguing essay prompt was originally introduced in 2016, Assistant Dean for Admissions Bruce DelMonico noted that the “seemingly simple and straightforward question” was composed with assistance from one of the program’s organizational behavior professors. Yale’s admissions committee clearly takes its application essays seriously and is thoughtful about the mind-set and types of behaviors it wants to see in the school’s students. In an online [url=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b0uVg70ZVl4&t=66s]Q&A session with several leading admissions officers[/url] we hosted, DelMonico declared himself “agnostic” about whether applicants should discuss a personal commitment or a professional one, noting that he wants to gauge the level to which candidates commit themselves, rather than the context of the engagement: “We don’t have a preference for professional or personal accomplishments. . . . We are not making value judgments about what that commitment is, but it is more about how you approach that commitment, how you have demonstrated that commitment, and what sorts of behaviors underlie that commitment.”

You might initially perceive this prompt as rather narrow in scope, allowing you to share the story of just a single professional or community project and nothing more, but that is not the case. You can certainly discuss your dedication to a particular project or cause, of course, but you are definitely not restricted to this approach. Consider this: you can also be committed to an idea (e.g., personal liberty) or a value (e.g., creating opportunity for others), and approaching your essay from this angle instead could enable you to reveal much more of and about yourself to the admissions committee. For example, you might relate a few anecdotes that on the surface seem unrelated—drawing from different parts of your life—but that all support and illustrate how you are guided by a particular belief or world view. Or, to use the example of personal liberty as a theme, you could show how you take control of your academic and professional paths, adhering steadfastly to your values and vision. Whatever you choose to feature as the focus of your commitment, your actions and decisions, manifest via a variety of experiences, must allow you to own it as a genuine part of who you are as an individual. Identifying a theme that you think no one else will ever use is not your goal here; presenting authentic anecdotes that powerfully support your selected theme is what is important.

If you elect to focus on a single anecdote, the commitment you claim must be truly inordinate. Being particularly proud of an accomplishment is not enough to make it an effective topic for this essay. You need to demonstrate your constancy and dedication in the face of challenges or resistance, revealing that your connection to the experience was hard won. Strive to show that you have been resolute in following a sometimes difficult path and have doggedly stayed on course, citing clear examples to illustrate your steadfastness. Nothing commonplace will work here—you must make your reader truly understand your journey and leave them more impressed by your effort than the outcome.

[b]2) Describe the community that has been most meaningful to you. What is the most valuable thing you have gained from being a part of this community and what is the most important thing you have contributed to this community? (500-word limit)[/b]

In working with business schools and MBA applicants, we hear references to “community” quite a bit, and these days, it seems to be just as important (and ubiquitous) as ever. Each school has its own unique community and, understandably, wants to ensure that the applicants it accepts will not only fit with and enhance that community but also benefit from it. This essay is clearly a tool the Yale SOM admissions committee will use to identify candidates who would make fitting matches with the school’s community. It will also help the committee determine which applicants view and value the concept of community in the same way (or at least very similar to how) the members of Yale’s do. More specifically, the school wants to see that you have been an engaged member of a community before, how you personally define what a community is, that you know how to be an additive member (and in what way[s] you actively are one), and that you are aware of how you yourself profit from your participation and inclusion.

The prompt does not specify that you must discuss a strictly professional community or a  personal one, so you can draw from any facet of your life. The community involvement you discuss could have been a long-term engagement or a short-term one, and it might even still be ongoing. Share what you value about your inclusion in this group and the motivations behind your contributions to it. We caution you against discussing your family as your meaningful “community,” given that it is not one you had agency in choosing and would not therefore be as revelatory of your individuality and personality.

We are going to assume that you have thoroughly researched the Yale SOM MBA experience and familiarized yourself well with its particular characteristics and qualities—what it values, the kinds of people who excel there, and so on.  (If you have not, start doing so immediately; contact students and alumni, read student blogs, watch videos on the[url=https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC-NVYNjSpxgnZorM1t2TF1w] Yale SOM YouTube channel[/url], visit campus or participate in admissions events online or in your area, and download a free copy of mbaMission’s [url=https://shop.mbamission.com/products/yale-school-of-management-insider-s-guide]Yale School of Management Insider’s Guide[/url].) If any of the attributes you appreciate in the community you describe overlap with any of those of the Yale SOM community, be sure to emphasize them in your essay.

[b]3) Describe the most significant challenge you have faced. How have you confronted this challenge and how has it shaped you as a person? (500-word limit)[/b]

A challenge or obstacle can be the catalyst for a powerful learning experience, whether you were able to completely overcome the impediment or not. So, for this essay, you can discuss a one-time occurrence or an ongoing issue that you deal with regularly. And because the school does not stipulate that the challenge you share be strictly professional or personal, you can (and should) consider every possible option you have from the various facets of your life—your workplace, academic background, family, personal life, community engagements, and so on. The one you ultimately choose should be the one that has made the most significant impact on how you view and/or operate in the world today. The Yale SOM admissions committee wants to understand how and what you learn from situations in which things do not go as planned. Your goal is to convey that you are not easily discouraged by setbacks but that you instead use them as learning tools or stepping-stones on your path forward.

Consider using a narrative approach to tell your story, rather than simply stating the facts outright. Including vivid anecdotal details will help you most effectively convey the nature of your challenge. You want to ensure that the admissions reader fully grasps your struggle. Then, your explanation of how you have been “shaped” by the experience—and of the way in which you dealt (or are dealing with) the obstacle—will reveal your character. Avoid clichéd lessons, such as “gained resilience.” In what substantial way has the situation changed you, and how do you apply what you learned from it (or expect to do so in the future)?

One important note: do not be afraid to reveal a weakness or error on your part. Although this is not a “failure” essay, if your own actions helped create the obstacle or you failed to see the obstacle right before you (and should have), you should not shy away from an honest discussion of your responsibility. Such incidents are usually very effective learning opportunities and could therefore make for a compelling essay. The key is in conveying what your takeaways are from the experience and explaining how it has influenced you and your life since.

[b]Optional Information: If any aspect of your application requires additional explanation, you can address it in the Optional Information section below.  Please note, you should use the specific prompts provided in the Work Experience section to address gaps in work experience or choice of recommender.  The Optional Information section is truly optional – if no aspect of your application requires further explanation, you should leave this section blank. (200 words maximum)[/b]

Yale’s optional information prompt invites you to address any potential problem areas in your profile if you feel you need to. The use of the adjective “brief” clearly conveys that the school wants you to focus on imparting key information rather than offering a detailed and long-winded explanation of the issue in question. This is absolutely not an opportunity to share another cool story or otherwise try to impress or pander to the admissions committee. If you do not truly need to explain an issue or potentially confusing element of your candidacy, we do not recommend that you complete this section; if you do have issues to clarify, keep things concise. In our free [url=https://shop.mbamission.com/products/mbamission-optional-essays-guide]mbaMission Optional Essays Guide[/url], we offer detailed advice on when and how to take advantage of these kinds of opportunities, with multiple examples.

For a thorough exploration of the Yale SOM academic program/merits, defining characteristics, crucial statistics, social life, academic environment, and other key features, check out the mbaMission [url=https://shop.mbamission.com/products/yale-school-of-management-insider-s-guide][b]Insider’s Guide to the Yale School of Management[/b][/url].

[b]The Next Step—Mastering Your Yale SOM Interview[/b]
Many MBA candidates find admissions interviews stressful and intimidating, but mastering this important element of the application process is definitely possible—the key is informed preparation. To help you on your way to this high level of preparation, we offer our [url=https://shop.mbamission.com/collections/interview-guides][b]free Interview Guides[/b][/url]. Download your free copy of the [url=https://shop.mbamission.com/products/yale-school-of-management-interview-guide][b]Yale School of Management Interview Guide[/b][/url] today.

To learn more about the essays for other top business schools, visit our [url=https://www.mbamission.com/mba-essay-examples/]MBA Essay Tips and Examples Resources Page[/url].
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The McCombs School of Business at the University of Texas at Austin requires just one relatively brief yet still revelatory written essay from its applicants. Candidates are directed to compose a cover letter for the admissions committee in which they essentially make a pitch for why they want (or need) a Texas McCombs MBA. In addition, all applicants must respond to four recorded video questions within one week of submitting their application. Anyone with a potential problem area in their profile can submit an optional essay to address the issue. While on the minimal side, the Texas McCombs essay components nevertheless give you ample opportunity to provide meaningful insight into your character and strengths. Our more in-depth analysis of the program’s essay prompt(s) for 2024–2025 follows.

[b]Texas McCombs Essay Analysis, 2024–2025[/b]
[b]Essay 1: Please write an application cover letter summarizing your aspirations, qualifications, and personal and professional experiences that make you a strong candidate for the Texas McCombs MBA program. (Limit: 500 words)[/b]

We can understand that this essay prompt might initially be intimidating, but once we break things down for you, we hope you will feel more confident in your ability to write a strong response. Along with this prompt, McCombs offers the following elaboration: “The application cover letter is a critical means of assessing an applicant’s motivation for attending the McCombs School of Business, their background and goals, and their communication and writing skills. Strong applications convey careful research on Texas McCombs and enthusiasm for the program.” In short, the admissions committee wants to know (1)what your professional path and goals are, (2) why you feel you need an MBA, and (3) why you want to earn your MBA at McCombs. These are all basic components of a traditional personal statement that many schools ask for. Not so scary now, right?

The broad scope of this essay prompt allows you a great amount of freedom to choose and share the information you believe is most important for your candidacy. And the 500-word maximum is equal to roughly four or five short paragraphs. Basically, McCombs wants to know about your professional past, your goals, and why you need its MBA program to facilitate or accelerate your career. Be sure to relate your strengths to your professional aspirations, sharing illustrative examples. Definitely take the time to research your desired path and potential firms, if you have not done so already, to understand what is involved and the skills and qualities required.

After discussing your accomplishments, along with any other elements of your profile that you feel make you a strong candidate for the Texas McCombs MBA program, strive to relate these achievements and qualities to the school’s offerings and community. Without using the actual words “why McCombs?” and “how do you expect to engage with our community?,” the school is nevertheless asking you for precisely this line of information. The admissions committee essentially wants to know what has compelled you to choose McCombs in particular for your MBA and how you will take advantage of specific resources and experiences it offers. The assumption is that something you have learned about McCombs leads you to believe that its program will provide the experience, knowledge, skills, exposure, and/or other element you need to reach your goals. Likewise, something has convinced you that you would fit well with the McCombs environment and be comfortable there. So, what has given you that impression?

McCombs is not simply seeking warm bodies with which to fill its classrooms; it is striving to add to a long history of effective global business leaders and a network of alumni dedicated to the school and each other. The admissions committee wants to know that you are truly excited to be a part of its community and to benefit from the specific learning experience it offers. Demonstrating your authentic interest in the program by providing concrete examples and drawing clear connections between who you want to be and what the school offers is key to crafting a compelling essay response.

If you have targeted McCombs because you feel it is the right program for you, you likely already have an idea of why that is true and how you would function as part of its community. If you do not yet have a handle on these points, you definitely need to start (now!) researching the school thoroughly, including interacting directly with students and/or alumni. Identify at least one (ideally more) resource, offering, or quality that McCombs has that is unique or that it excels in that directly relates to what you need to attain your post-MBA goals. And do not just offer a list—you must explain how the identified element(s) will fulfill particular needs for you.

As we noted earlier, this essay covers the core components of a traditional personal statement, just presented in a different form. To better prepare yourself to write your essay response, download a free copy of our [url=https://shop.mbamission.com/products/personal-statement-guide]Personal Statement Guide[/url], which offers more in-depth advice on addressing these topics, along with illustrative examples.

[b]Optional Statement: Please explain any gaps in work experience, choice of recommender, and/or academic performance issues that may help the admission committee in reviewing your application. (Limit: 250 words)[/b]

In prior years, McCombs has offered applicants some leeway with its optional essay to share anything they felt might be pivotal or particularly compelling about their candidacy, rather than stipulating that they must use it strictly to explain problematic issues in their candidacy. This application season, that has changed, and the admissions committee has revised the prompt to very clearly direct candidates to address only certain circumstances. So we caution you against trying to step too far outside the framework the prompt outlines and discussing a topic that does not fall under the umbrella of one of the topic areas mentioned. If you need to, then, this is your chance to proactively answer any questions an admissions officer might have about your professional history, the individuals you selected to write your recommendations, and/or your academic background. Consider downloading a free copy of our [url=https://shop.mbamission.com/products/mbamission-optional-essays-guide][b]mbaMission Optional Essays Guide[/b][/url], in which we offer detailed advice on deciding whether to submit an optional essay and on how best to approach writing such a submission, with multiple examples.

[b]Video Assessment: All applicants will be required to complete the Video Assessment shortly after submitting their application and paying the fee. Applicants have 7 days to complete the assessment upon receiving access to the video submission platform. There will be 4 question prompts and applicants will have 90 seconds to answer each prompt.[/b]

Okay, start by taking a deep breath. We know that video essays tend to be intimidating and nerve-racking, but McCombs is simply interested in getting to know you in a more dynamic way than a written essay will allow. The admissions committee is not looking for the next prime-time anchor or expecting an Oscar-worthy performance—it just wants to get a sense of your spoken communication style, personality, and perhaps demeanor. Because the questions you will encounter are not provided in advance, the admissions committee is likely also using the video as a way of gauging how you deal with the unexpected, think on your feet, and convey relevant answers in a time-conscious way. This is, after all, similar to what you will be doing in the McCombs classroom as an MBA student.

In addition, the school [url=https://blogs.mccombs.utexas.edu/mba-insider/2023/06/21/ft-video-assessment/]states on its MBA Insider blog[/url] that it will be looking for evidence of the following characteristics and abilities when it watches applicants’ submissions: motivation, adaptability/resilience, ambition, goals, empathy/inclusivity, verbal communication, well-roundedness, and professionalism/poise. Be sure to take time to review the school’s post to ensure that you understand how it defines each of these capabilities. So again, even though you do not know exactly what you will be asked, you can keep these qualities in mind and strive to construct your responses so that they demonstrate your possession of the school’s desired attributes.

Although the prompt for McCombs’ video component mentions four questions, the associated blog post notes that candidates will actually receive five questions. However, it goes on to clarify that the admissions committee will see each applicant’s response to their first question but will not factor it into their assessment of the individual, so that initial query is meant to give you a chance to familiarize yourself with the process—and ideally, feel more prepared when the “official” questions begin. When the time comes to record your video submission, you will be asked each question individually and given 90 seconds to record your response.

Despite not having the specific questions supplied for you, you can still prepare for these videos in advance. For example, you could find practice questions by Googling “MBA interview questions” and/or downloading a free copy of the [url=https://shop.mbamission.com/products/mbamission-interview-guide][b]mbaMission Interview Guide[/b][/url], which includes a list of 100 questions commonly posed in MBA admissions interviews. Then, you could ask a friend or family member to randomly select from these questions, pose them to you, and then provide feedback on the content and presentation of your responses. And by timing yourself, you will develop a feel for what delivering an oral response within a 90-second timeframe is like (ideally without speaking at lightning speed!). As you practice, strive to minimize your use of filler words and phrases (e.g., “um,” “uh,” “like,” “you know”) so that you are less likely to depend on or default to them when the time comes for your actual video submission. Do not feel that you must fill the entire 90 seconds if you do not have good content with which to do so, but also, take care to not be too brief. This is the admissions committee’s chance to get to know you better as an animated, three-dimensional person, so do not shortchange them on getting to see how you speak and behave. And do not panic. If you make a small mistake or bungle your words, just pause, smile, and get back on track.

Let us reassure you that none of the questions will have a “correct” answer, and you are not going to be judged on how energetic or enthralling you are in delivering your response. You should speak as naturally as possible so that the admissions committee can get a feel for your true character and bearing. If possible—meaning you can do so without forcing the issue—sharing a story from your life that illustrates or supports your answer will make it even more compelling. Otherwise, simply breathe, relax, and give the school insight into the unique individual you are. Respond to each query honestly and as smoothly as you can (despite any nervousness you might be feeling), and be yourself.

To learn more about the essays for other top business schools, visit our [url=https://www.mbamission.com/mba-essay-examples/]MBA Essay Tips and Examples Resources Page[/url].
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London Business School (LBS) has been posing the same core application essay question since 2015. Clearly, the admissions committee feels the prompt elicits precisely what it needs when evaluating candidates for the school’s next class. Although LBS strictly requires only one essay—one that largely constitutes a traditional personal statement—you might want to seriously consider submitting the optional essay as well if you feel that doing so will facilitate a fairer or more thorough evaluation of your candidacy. In our analysis, we offer our advice on crafting your approach, whether you ultimately decide to write just one submission for LBS or two.

LBS 2024–2025 Essay Tips


Question 1: What are your post-MBA goals and how will your prior experience and the London Business School programme contribute towards these? (500 words)
As we have noted, LBS’s required essay covers several basic elements of a traditional personal statement. You will need to show that you have a long-term vision for yourself and your career and that you have a clear plan for how to get there via the LBS MBA program. The basic assumptions, of course, are that business school is the next logical step in your progress and that you need to pursue your degree at LBS in particular because the school provides specific experiences, knowledge, skills, exposure, and/or other elements that are necessary for you to attain your aspirations and thrive in your chosen career. Ideally, you have already researched the program thoroughly to discover these important resources and areas of fit, but if not, do not skip this important step and/or refer only to basic offerings most business schools have. Your essay must be LBS specific. Demonstrating your authentic interest in the program by giving concrete examples and drawing clear connections between what the school offers, what you need, and who you are is key to crafting a compelling essay response here.

Because 500 words is not a lot, avoid going into excessive detail about your past, though you will need to offer enough information to provide context and support for your stated goals. Given this essay’s significant overlap with a standard personal statement, we encourage you to download your free copy of the mbaMission Personal Statement Guide. In this complimentary guide, we present a much more detailed discussion of how to approach and craft this kind of essay, along with multiple illustrative examples.

Question 2 (Optional): Is there any other information you believe the Admissions Committee should know about you and your application to London Business School? (500 words)
Applicants typically use the optional essay to explain confusing or problematic elements of their candidacy—a poor grade or GPA, a low GMAT or GRE score, a gap in work experience, etc.—and LBS’s can certainly be used this way. If you feel you need to clarify an aspect of your profile, first check the other parts of the school’s application, which already includes several opportunities to address certain issues (such as academic performance and disciplinary instances). If you can discuss your concern elsewhere instead, do so, and avoid using this essay to simply repeat any information provided via that avenue. If you have a problem to address that is not mentioned in the LBS application, we suggest downloading a copy of the mbaMission Optional Essays Guide, which is also available for free, and in which we offer detailed advice on deciding whether to take advantage of the optional essay and, if so, how to do so to effectively mitigate any concerning elements of your application.

If you do not feel that your candidacy includes any elements that need further clarification, however, you might use this essay to instead offer a more rounded, positive representation of yourself—but be thoughtful about this opportunity. Do not just copy and paste an existing essay you wrote for a different school here and hope for the best. Take a step back and carefully consider what the admissions committee already knows about you from the other parts of your application, including, of course, your required essay. Then, do your utmost to develop and convey a narrative that is truly crucial to understanding your character. Because this question is so open-ended, your options are somewhat limitless. You will need to honestly check your instincts and ask yourself whether you are simply tacking something extra onto your application with this essay or whether you are offering something that is truly additive and would be helpful for the school to know to fully and fairly evaluate you. Be mindful and respectful of the admissions committee’s time, and remember that each additional file you submit requires more resources on behalf of the admissions office, so whatever you write must be truly worthwhile and clearly reveal that you made good use of this opportunity to provide further insight into your candidacy.

To learn more about the essays for other top business schools, visit our MBA Essay Tips and Examples Resources Page.
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Harvard Business School (HBS) has introduced brand new essay prompts for the 2024–2025 application season. In doing so, it has stepped away from the single open-ended essay question it has consistently posed since 2016 in favor of three questions that are far more direct. The previous prompt—which could be summarized as “What else would you like us to know about you?” and had no word limit—was actually so broad that when the time came to submit their essay responses, some applicants had difficulty knowing whether or not they had succeeded in answering it in full. With the program’s new essay questions, you should have no such concerns, because each one is clearly focused on a specific topic. For the school’s first required essay, you will need to reflect on your past and explain how certain experiences have influenced your professional choices. Leadership is the central theme of the second, and for the third essay, you must discuss how your curiosity has led to growth. So, the challenge in HBS’s application essays now lies in the miserly word count allowed for each, especially given that the new questions ask for more than the recounting of a single anecdote. Instead, the essays require a fuller discussion of “cause and effect” for each story you share. You will need to present a past experience and then reveal how it has either shaped you into the person you are today or will inform your behavior or anticipated impact going forward. That is a lot to accomplish in 300, 250, and 250 words, respectively. In this post, we discuss how you can meet this challenge and craft effective essay responses to HBS’s new prompts for 2024–2025.

[b]Harvard Business School Essay Analysis, 2024–2025[/b]
Applicants to the MBA Class of 2027 (matriculating fall 2025) need to respond to these three essay prompts:
Business-Minded Essay: Please reflect on how your experiences have influenced your career choices and aspirations and the impact you will have on the businesses, organizations, and communities you plan to serve. (up to 300 words)
As you read this first prompt, pay special attention to the word “experiences.”  HBS asks “how your experiences have influenced your career choices and aspirations” (emphasis ours). Your experiences can be personal, professional, extracurricular, or community-oriented. Do not feel that you can only write about how a business-related event influenced your career choice. As you consider possible stories, keep “cause and effect” in mind. You need to create a clear connection between your experiences and your professional decisions to date, and then another connection to the impact you will have on others going forward. Although this essay is not a conventional “[url=https://shop.mbamission.com/products/personal-statement-guide]personal statement[/url]” (What are your goals? Why do you need an MBA? Why our school?), it covers many of the same elements. We mention this only because—as we focus on “cause and effect”—your plan going forward must be ambitious yet plausible.

Again, do not feel compelled to discuss aspirations that you perceive the admissions committee “wants.” Authenticity is key here, and HBS is not seeking a specific “right” answer (no “right” answer actually exists). Also, do not be daunted by the phrase “impact you will have on the businesses, organizations, and communities you plan to serve” and subsequently believe that you must write about a purely social mission in your future work—especially if you have nothing in your background that would suggest you are prepared for such a role or path. Rather than trying to guess what the admissions committee might want to hear or attempting to force an embellished answer, take some time to seriously consider your actual goals and what kind of impact you believe you could have in your pursuit and eventual achievement of them. Not everyone needs to be striving to save the world, and HBS knows that. So, sincerely reflect on where you can make a positive difference, and then express that vision with authenticity.

Leadership-Focused Essay: What experiences have shaped who you are, how you invest in others, and what kind of leader you want to become? (up to 250 words)
Are you tired of reading the phrase “cause and effect” yet? We hope not, because this is another prompt that forces you to consider that equation. As for HBS’s first essay, you are not restricted to choosing stories from any one particular area of your life; your focus should be on identifying experiences that are most revelatory of who you are. Brainstorm thoroughly, combing through all the different parts of your life, and focus on the catalysts that have driven your choices, paying special attention to those that have resulted in your having a meaningful impact on others. If you can create that linkage via a powerful narrative, then the discussion of the leader you want to become should flow pretty naturally from there. It might tie directly to your prior experience (e.g., you want to amplify your existing impact), or it might be an aspect of your leadership profile that you want to develop so you can enhance your impact going forward. Focus on the logical connections that link the different questions within the school’s prompt together.

One thing to keep in mind as you brainstorm for this essay is that you need to ensure that the admissions committee learns something new about you from essay to essay. So, the backward-looking component (the “cause” in your cause-and-effect scenarios) should be different for each of your three submissions, so that you maintain the admissions reader’s attention and, to an extent, impress them with your range of experiences and accomplishments. You do not want HBS to think you have had only one or two formative experiences in your life; the broader a lens you can offer into your story and background, the better. So, consider the school’s three application essays as a suite, rather than discrete submissions, and give the admissions committee a new window into who you fundamentally are with each one.

Growth-Oriented Essay: Curiosity can be seen in many ways. Please share an example of how you have demonstrated curiosity and how that has influenced your growth. (up to 250 words)
Where does your sense of curiosity manifest most strongly in your life? Through a hobby? An intellectual interest? A personal practice? The key with this essay is not what that area of interest is but rather the passion with which you have pursued it—your level of commitment to satiating that curiosity! So, for example, you might have been drawn in by veganism and a desire to master the art of meatless cuisine; you might have become enticed by your family’s history and gone down the genealogy rabbit hole; maybe learning to play an obscure instrument has become a preoccupation for you; or you could have even become absorbed by something as abstract as “understanding yourself.”  Take a step back and truly reflect on times when you have been insatiable in your quest to learn more and grow, and focus in particular on areas for which you can offer the admissions committee clear examples that bring your quest to life. Again, your success with this essay will not lie in the topic you choose, but in the way you demonstrate your inordinate pursuit of knowledge about it or mastery of it.

So, if you state that you are a coffee aficionado, that will not say much about your character or soul for the admissions committee. However, if you share how you have travelled to coffee farms around the world to learn firsthand about the techniques used to produce the finest beans, or how you have filled multiple journals—or perhaps even Instagram —with copious notes on the years of espressos you have enjoyed in different cities across the country, you will convey that you have an inordinate sense of curiosity—one that is not truly just about coffee. You could thereby demonstrate how you appreciate nuance or enjoy exploring niches, or maybe that you admire the development of expertise or the observance of tradition in the world. Whatever it is, you need to fully understand what motivated you to go on whatever journey you have pursued, because you will need to explain to HBS how it has influenced your growth. Where else have you learned to apply your intense level of commitment? Again, you must offer a cause-and-effect relationship, sharing how your passion manifests in your lived experience and other pursuits. 

Joint degree applicants for the Harvard Medical School, Harvard School of Dental Medicine, Harvard Graduate School of Arts and Sciences, Harvard Law School, and Harvard Kennedy School must provide an additional essay: How do you expect the joint degree experience to benefit you on both a professional and a personal level? (up to 400 words)
This is the kind of straightforward prompt that applicants appreciate! In this essay, you should simply and clearly provide your rationale for applying to the joint-degree program, thoughtfully revealing its role in your intellectual and professional growth. While the prompt does not explicitly ask for any professional or personal context, providing this foundational information before illustrating the connection to your educational and professional goals will help the admissions committee better understand your trajectory. Further, in discussing how the program will benefit you, note specific resources it offers that you intend to take advantage of. You should not be afraid to commit as much as one-half of your essay to sharing your plan for your time in the program, citing classes, clubs, professors, extracurriculars, and other key resources that will enhance your experience and your future!

Joint degree applicants for the Harvard Paulson School of Engineering and Applied Sciences must provide an additional essay: The MS/MBA Engineering Sciences program is focused on entrepreneurship, design, and innovation. Describe your past experiences in these areas and your reasons for pursuing a program with this focus. (recommended length: 500 words). Applicants will also be able to respond to an optional essay.
Again, HBS provides a very straightforward prompt! In this essay, you should clearly showcase your experience, offering key anecdotes, presented in a narrative form, that showcase your accomplishments in entrepreneurship, design, and innovation. If you have a true depth of experience in these areas, you might commit 300–350 words to the past and then 150–200 words to your reasons for applying to the program and your expectations for it. Make sure to call out specific resources available in the program that you feel are key to your future success, and lay out a clear plan for your education to show the admissions committee that you have a deep understanding of the program and how it will contribute to your growth. If you have less experience in these areas, you might use 250 words to discuss your background and then 250 words to emphasize how the program will help you develop the abilities you need to achieve your post-HBS goals.

For a thorough exploration of HBS’s academic offerings, defining characteristics, crucial statistics, social life, community/environment, and other key facets of the program, please download your free copy of the [url=http://shop.mbamission.com/products/harvard-business-school-insider-s-guide][b]mbaMission Insider’s Guide to Harvard Business School[/b].[/url]

The Next Step—Mastering Your HBS Interview
Many MBA candidates find admissions interviews stressful and intimidating, but mastering this important element of the application process is definitely possible—the key is informed preparation. Download your complimentary copy of the [url=http://shop.mbamission.com/products/interview-primer-harvard-business-school][b]Harvard Business School Interview Guide[/b][/url] today, and be sure to also check out our tailored [url=http://shop.mbamission.com/collections/services/products/hbs-mock-interview-and-post-interview-reflection-support][b]HBS Mock Interview and Post-Interview Reflection Support[/b][/url].

[b]Reapplicant Essay: Please use this space to share with the Admissions Committee how you have reflected and grown since your previous application and discuss any relevant updates to your candidacy (e.g., changes in your professional life, additional coursework, and extracurricular/volunteer engagements).[/b] (250 words)
Thankfully, this essay is pretty straightforward. Whether you have improved your academic record, received a promotion, begun a new and exciting project, increased your community involvement, or taken on some sort of personal challenge, the key to success with this essay is conveying a very deliberate path of achievement. HBS wants to know that you have been actively striving to improve yourself and your profile, and that you have seized opportunities during the time since you last applied to do so, because a Harvard MBA is vital to you. The responses to this essay question will vary greatly from one candidate to the next, because each person’s needs and experiences differ. We are more than happy to provide one-on-one assistance with this highly personal essay to ensure that your efforts are presented in the best light possible.
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Harvard Business School (HBS) has introduced brand new essay prompts for the 2024–2025 application season. In doing so, it has stepped away from the single open-ended essay question it has consistently posed since 2016 in favor of three questions that are far more direct. The previous prompt—which could be summarized as “What else would you like us to know about you?” and had no word limit—was actually so broad that when the time came to submit their essay responses, some applicants had difficulty knowing whether or not they had succeeded in answering it in full. With the program’s new essay questions, you should have no such concerns, because each one is clearly focused on a specific topic. For the school’s first required essay, you will need to reflect on your past and explain how certain experiences have influenced your professional choices. Leadership is the central theme of the second, and for the third essay, you must discuss how your curiosity has led to growth. So, the challenge in HBS’s application essays now lies in the miserly word count allowed for each, especially given that the new questions ask for more than the recounting of a single anecdote. Instead, the essays require a fuller discussion of “cause and effect” for each story you share. You will need to present a past experience and then reveal how it has either shaped you into the person you are today or will inform your behavior or anticipated impact going forward. That is a lot to accomplish in 300, 250, and 250 words, respectively. In this post, we discuss how you can meet this challenge and craft effective essay responses to HBS’s new prompts for 2024–2025.

Harvard Business School Essay Analysis, 2024–2025
Applicants to the MBA Class of 2027 (matriculating fall 2025) need to respond to these three essay prompts:
Business-Minded Essay: Please reflect on how your experiences have influenced your career choices and aspirations and the impact you will have on the businesses, organizations, and communities you plan to serve. (up to 300 words)
As you read this first prompt, pay special attention to the word “experiences.”  HBS asks “how your experiences have influenced your career choices and aspirations” (emphasis ours). Your experiences can be personal, professional, extracurricular, or community-oriented. Do not feel that you can only write about how a business-related event influenced your career choice. As you consider possible stories, keep “cause and effect” in mind. You need to create a clear connection between your experiences and your professional decisions to date, and then another connection to the impact you will have on others going forward. Although this essay is not a conventional “[url=https://shop.mbamission.com/products/personal-statement-guide]personal statement[/url]” (What are your goals? Why do you need an MBA? Why our school?), it covers many of the same elements. We mention this only because—as we focus on “cause and effect”—your plan going forward must be ambitious yet plausible.

Again, do not feel compelled to discuss aspirations that you perceive the admissions committee “wants.” Authenticity is key here, and HBS is not seeking a specific “right” answer (no “right” answer actually exists). Also, do not be daunted by the phrase “impact you will have on the businesses, organizations, and communities you plan to serve” and subsequently believe that you must write about a purely social mission in your future work—especially if you have nothing in your background that would suggest you are prepared for such a role or path. Rather than trying to guess what the admissions committee might want to hear or attempting to force an embellished answer, take some time to seriously consider your actual goals and what kind of impact you believe you could have in your pursuit and eventual achievement of them. Not everyone needs to be striving to save the world, and HBS knows that. So, sincerely reflect on where you can make a positive difference, and then express that vision with authenticity.

Leadership-Focused Essay: What experiences have shaped who you are, how you invest in others, and what kind of leader you want to become? (up to 250 words)
Are you tired of reading the phrase “cause and effect” yet? We hope not, because this is another prompt that forces you to consider that equation. As for HBS’s first essay, you are not restricted to choosing stories from any one particular area of your life; your focus should be on identifying experiences that are most revelatory of who you are. Brainstorm thoroughly, combing through all the different parts of your life, and focus on the catalysts that have driven your choices, paying special attention to those that have resulted in your having a meaningful impact on others. If you can create that linkage via a powerful narrative, then the discussion of the leader you want to become should flow pretty naturally from there. It might tie directly to your prior experience (e.g., you want to amplify your existing impact), or it might be an aspect of your leadership profile that you want to develop so you can enhance your impact going forward. Focus on the logical connections that link the different questions within the school’s prompt together.

One thing to keep in mind as you brainstorm for this essay is that you need to ensure that the admissions committee learns something new about you from essay to essay. So, the backward-looking component (the “cause” in your cause-and-effect scenarios) should be different for each of your three submissions, so that you maintain the admissions reader’s attention and, to an extent, impress them with your range of experiences and accomplishments. You do not want HBS to think you have had only one or two formative experiences in your life; the broader a lens you can offer into your story and background, the better. So, consider the school’s three application essays as a suite, rather than discrete submissions, and give the admissions committee a new window into who you fundamentally are with each one.

Growth-Oriented Essay: Curiosity can be seen in many ways. Please share an example of how you have demonstrated curiosity and how that has influenced your growth. (up to 250 words)
Where does your sense of curiosity manifest most strongly in your life? Through a hobby? An intellectual interest? A personal practice? The key with this essay is not what that area of interest is but rather the passion with which you have pursued it—your level of commitment to satiating that curiosity! So, for example, you might have been drawn in by veganism and a desire to master the art of meatless cuisine; you might have become enticed by your family’s history and gone down the genealogy rabbit hole; maybe learning to play an obscure instrument has become a preoccupation for you; or you could have even become absorbed by something as abstract as “understanding yourself.”  Take a step back and truly reflect on times when you have been insatiable in your quest to learn more and grow, and focus in particular on areas for which you can offer the admissions committee clear examples that bring your quest to life. Again, your success with this essay will not lie in the topic you choose, but in the way you demonstrate your inordinate pursuit of knowledge about it or mastery of it.

So, if you state that you are a coffee aficionado, that will not say much about your character or soul for the admissions committee. However, if you share how you have travelled to coffee farms around the world to learn firsthand about the techniques used to produce the finest beans, or how you have filled multiple journals—or perhaps even Instagram —with copious notes on the years of espressos you have enjoyed in different cities across the country, you will convey that you have an inordinate sense of curiosity—one that is not truly just about coffee. You could thereby demonstrate how you appreciate nuance or enjoy exploring niches, or maybe that you admire the development of expertise or the observance of tradition in the world. Whatever it is, you need to fully understand what motivated you to go on whatever journey you have pursued, because you will need to explain to HBS how it has influenced your growth. Where else have you learned to apply your intense level of commitment? Again, you must offer a cause-and-effect relationship, sharing how your passion manifests in your lived experience and other pursuits. 

Joint degree applicants for the Harvard Medical School, Harvard School of Dental Medicine, Harvard Graduate School of Arts and Sciences, Harvard Law School, and Harvard Kennedy School must provide an additional essay: How do you expect the joint degree experience to benefit you on both a professional and a personal level? (up to 400 words)
This is the kind of straightforward prompt that applicants appreciate! In this essay, you should simply and clearly provide your rationale for applying to the joint-degree program, thoughtfully revealing its role in your intellectual and professional growth. While the prompt does not explicitly ask for any professional or personal context, providing this foundational information before illustrating the connection to your educational and professional goals will help the admissions committee better understand your trajectory. Further, in discussing how the program will benefit you, note specific resources it offers that you intend to take advantage of. You should not be afraid to commit as much as one-half of your essay to sharing your plan for your time in the program, citing classes, clubs, professors, extracurriculars, and other key resources that will enhance your experience and your future!

Joint degree applicants for the Harvard Paulson School of Engineering and Applied Sciences must provide an additional essay: The MS/MBA Engineering Sciences program is focused on entrepreneurship, design, and innovation. Describe your past experiences in these areas and your reasons for pursuing a program with this focus. (recommended length: 500 words). Applicants will also be able to respond to an optional essay.
Again, HBS provides a very straightforward prompt! In this essay, you should clearly showcase your experience, offering key anecdotes, presented in a narrative form, that showcase your accomplishments in entrepreneurship, design, and innovation. If you have a true depth of experience in these areas, you might commit 300–350 words to the past and then 150–200 words to your reasons for applying to the program and your expectations for it. Make sure to call out specific resources available in the program that you feel are key to your future success, and lay out a clear plan for your education to show the admissions committee that you have a deep understanding of the program and how it will contribute to your growth. If you have less experience in these areas, you might use 250 words to discuss your background and then 250 words to emphasize how the program will help you develop the abilities you need to achieve your post-HBS goals.

For a thorough exploration of HBS’s academic offerings, defining characteristics, crucial statistics, social life, community/environment, and other key facets of the program, please download your free copy of the [url=http://shop.mbamission.com/products/harvard-business-school-insider-s-guide][b]mbaMission Insider’s Guide to Harvard Business School[/b].[/url]

The Next Step—Mastering Your HBS Interview
Many MBA candidates find admissions interviews stressful and intimidating, but mastering this important element of the application process is definitely possible—the key is informed preparation. Download your complimentary copy of the [url=http://shop.mbamission.com/products/interview-primer-harvard-business-school][b]Harvard Business School Interview Guide[/b][/url] today, and be sure to also check out our tailored [url=http://shop.mbamission.com/collections/services/products/hbs-mock-interview-and-post-interview-reflection-support][b]HBS Mock Interview and Post-Interview Reflection Support[/b][/url].

Reapplicant Essay: Please use this space to share with the Admissions Committee how you have reflected and grown since your previous application and discuss any relevant updates to your candidacy (e.g., changes in your professional life, additional coursework, and extracurricular/volunteer engagements). (250 words)
Thankfully, this essay is pretty straightforward. Whether you have improved your academic record, received a promotion, begun a new and exciting project, increased your community involvement, or taken on some sort of personal challenge, the key to success with this essay is conveying a very deliberate path of achievement. HBS wants to know that you have been actively striving to improve yourself and your profile, and that you have seized opportunities during the time since you last applied to do so, because a Harvard MBA is vital to you. The responses to this essay question will vary greatly from one candidate to the next, because each person’s needs and experiences differ. We are more than happy to provide one-on-one assistance with this highly personal essay to ensure that your efforts are presented in the best light possible.
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Sometimes, MBAs are so eager to land their next role that they say yes to the first job offer they get, but we want to caution you to be more intentional. Your goal is not to find just any job; it is to find the right job for you. And, to be clear, there is very likely more than one job that would be right for you. So, how do you avoid the wrong ones?

[b]Be introspective. [/b]
Look for advice and exercises that can help you figure out what is most important for you to gain from your career. The following articles and books are good places to start:

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[url=https://hbr.org/2023/10/4-ways-to-make-work-more-meaningful#:~:text=Curiosity%20about%20ourselves%2C%20our%20work%2C%20and%20our%20colleagues,work%20to%20service%2C%20and%20investing%20in%20positive%20relationships.]4 Ways to Make Work More Meaningful[/url]. Harvard Business School graduate John Coleman talks about focusing on your curiosity as a means of unlocking your purpose and meaning at work. [/*]
[url=https://www.mbamission.com/blog/making-progress-on-your-career-goals-while-in-business-school/]Identifying Your Career Goals: Advice for Starting Business School[/url]. mbaMission shares exercises and tools to help you uncover your motivations and priorities for work. [/*]
[url=https://www.amazon.com/Designing-Your-Work-Life-Happiness/dp/0593467450/ref=sr_1_3?adgrpid=1330409640429184&dib=eyJ2IjoiMSJ9.QxCsh0-mkd76Quzh0NkJQ6jBNzoUIB5nbGdvE03EzEBfEHcX0_8kt4YtqT1L-VMrL5rq_qRLZ1sI7GKXtyuBKdO-04m7c5N7TuCwP6VziSRu9knHVvZQiVICyqSjO5S0pbsoplV9GhmD3ho-j57db3ah6fIVkMjYBZjIFzHFbvguorzHuMUJTmQNDh3aaTZh6GP-2K5Vo5Ob9wiPaj-gQuhiKNbpjE2osVniQ2gijqZN6zLLiNQgl2qPUAA5NZzmzX95F8jMWvvieVtRVKTW8T9HvHm1RATj3qU5G3cZplo.dshrOd8OOg_KjH0mF7dOoI0XC1W1ZsF7Ea5Xf_3GU0Y&dib_tag=se&hvadid=83150841242811&hvbmt=be&hvdev=c&hvlocphy=95240&hvnetw=o&hvqmt=e&hvtargid=kwd-83150959343040%3Aloc-190&hydadcr=22538_13494488&keywords=designing+your+life&qid=1717458056&sr=8-3]Designing Your New Work Life[/url]. Stanford professors Bill Burnett and Dave Evans share ideas on how you can design and build your work life into a meaningful dream job.[/*]
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[b]Be strategic. [/b]
Use the following exercises to create a list of things you want from your next job/career. Then, assess your current role (and/or your target roles) using that list. Where are the gaps? What small (or big) steps can you take to get closer to your ideal?

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Initiate conversations with people in your target roles to learn about their experiences and get advice on how to pivot toward their role. [/*]
Sign up for an online class or certification course to supplement your on-the-job experiences. [/*]
Ask for projects that are outside the typical scope of your job but that will expose you to new people or help you develop new skills that would be valued in your target role.[/*]
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[b]Be intentional.[/b]
Evaluate each new opportunity with a critical eye. Compare it to what you have determined you want in your next role. How does it stack up? Will you need to make any trade-offs? And if so, are you compromising on the things that are most important to you? Know exactly why you are accepting—or not—the position you have been offered.

[b]Bottom line.[/b]
Find your purpose, and let it guide you.

mbaMission’s Career Coaches are happy to explore with you any career-related topics, including selecting a path, crafting your professional narrative, and maximizing the effectiveness of your job search, during a complimentary, 30-minute career consultation. [url=https://www.mbamission.com/consult/career-coaching/][b]Sign up[/b][/url] for your free session today!
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As you consider the next application season, what kind of strategy do you have in mind? More than a few candidates, having likely read about the supposed advantages of applying in Round 1 on various Web sites and discussion boards, plan to submit all their applications in that first round—with the idea that if no acceptances are forthcoming, they will just submit another set of applications in Round 2. If this is your plan, we would like to explain why it is probably not your best course of action.

Most Round 1 deadlines are in October, and even though often applicants may receive a kind of “progress report” in the form of an interview invitation in November, this is no guarantee of eventual acceptance. Ultimately, then, applicants will not know for sure whether they have won a spot at any of their target schools until mid- to late December. So let us imagine the worst-case scenario: you submit all your applications in Round 1 but are not accepted at any of your target schools. Now, feeling discouraged and unsure of your application strategy—not to mention dealing with the hustle and bustle of the holidays—you must quickly research and select new schools, rethink your approach, and crank out still more applications in the space of just a few weeks to be able to submit in Round 2—to schools that you may not even be that enthusiastic about. And do not forget that you will also need to pressure your recommenders during this busy time of year to produce more documents on your behalf on a very tight deadline! Are you rethinking your strategy yet?

We recommend that instead, you change your mind-set from “If I do not get accepted in R1, I will apply in R2” to “I am applying to some schools in R1 and some in R2, and hopefully I will not have to finish my R2 applications.” With luck, you will not need to complete the applications you have slated for Round 2. But if you plan ahead, do not overload yourself with too many applications in the first round, and work steadily on your applications over several months, you will be in a much better place both mentally and with your required workload should you have to move ahead with your Round 2 submissions. And if, in the end, you get accepted early or receive multiple offers of admission from your first-round applications, you will have lost nothing more than a little time!

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Candidates for Georgetown University’s McDonough School of Business must provide just one written essay (of a somewhat succinct 500 words) in response to their choice of three question options. Applicants can discuss how their personal attributes and experiences can add to the school’s community, what they envision as their lasting impression or influence as a Georgetown MBA, or a particularly significant “win” from their professional life. McDonough also requires a short video essay in which candidates reveal up to ten facts about themselves that help illustrate who they are as a professional and/or leader. The school’s optional essay gives applicants the leeway to discuss anything they feel is necessary, so it should be sufficient to meet everyone’s needs. Our full analysis of McDonough’s essay prompts for 2024–2025 follows.

Georgetown McDonough 2024–2025 Essay Tips
We want to hear your story. When responding to our required essays, be authentic and take time to reflect on your goals and past experiences. Craft a response that explains how these experiences led you to pursue an MBA.

Our goal at Georgetown McDonough is to craft a diverse class with people who have had varying personal and professional life experiences. As such, we want to give our applicants the opportunity to select one essay (from a list of three) that allows them the ability to best highlight their experiences, characteristics, and values that showcase the value proposition that they can bring to the McDonough community. Please select one of the following three essays to complete in 500 words (approximately two pages, double spaced) and include the essay prompt and your first/last name at the top of your submission.

[b]Essay Option One – Georgetown Community[/b]

[b]Our mission is rooted in Jesuit principles of equality and respect for everyone and an ethos of caring for the whole person. Inclusivity and diversity are core to supporting a community of people with an intersectional understanding of themselves and the world around them. Share how your educational, familial, cultural, economic, social, and/or other individual life experiences will contribute to the diversity of perspectives and ideas at Georgetown University. [/b]
This essay is a great opportunity to provide the McDonough admissions committee with a better understanding of you as a unique individual. Start by thinking about the aspects of your personality that you believe truly define you—not just what you do and have done, but who you are—and fully explore your background, hobbies, talents, values, motivations, and quirks. You want to provide a well-rounded picture of yourself that draws from multiple areas and shows that you possess characteristics and/or knowledge that would make you a positive addition to the school’s diverse community. In addition, you will need to describe the situations and circumstances that have helped you develop these qualities and understandings. Although your personal background, strengths, and abilities might overlap with those of other McDonough applicants in some way, you can differentiate yourself here via the stories you choose to illustrate them.

A good way to start identifying your best options for this essay is by making a list of things you believe are notable about you and that would be helpful to have in an MBA environment. Then, pinpoint the experiences you have had that engendered these qualities. Especially consider situations from your past that both allow you to discuss your strengths and standout characteristics and in which you worked with or alongside individuals who were different from you. Instances when you helped create an inclusive atmosphere for others would also, understandably, be great fodder for this essay. If you can show the admissions committee concrete evidence that you know how to collaborate and communicate effectively with others who have disparate backgrounds, mind-sets, and/or styles, your essay will be even more powerful.

You will then need to demonstrate both self-awareness and a thorough understanding of McDonough by drawing connections between (1) what you have done and who you are and (2) what you can subsequently provide at the school as a member of its community. To do this effectively, you will need to truly familiarize yourself in depth with what the McDonough MBA experience is like. Go beyond the school’s website and published materials and connect directly with students, alumni, and other people who can provide firsthand, insider knowledge. Absolutely visit campus if at all possible, and sit in on a class. Read news articles about the school as well as student blogs, check out [url=https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCKHeuijPU7-NutC90tnqzbw]McDonough’s YouTube channel[/url], and, if offered, attend admissions events in your area. As you do all this research, look for places where your skills, strengths, and personality would not just fit but also contribute in some way. You want to make sure that in your essay, you are not merely showcasing traits, events, and achievements that you think are interesting or singular. They also need to clearly fit with McDonough specifically.

The broad scope of this essay prompt allows you a great amount of freedom to choose and share the information you believe is most important for the admissions committee to know about you, but you have only 500 words for this submission, so focus on conveying your core message(s) clearly and directly. Concentrate on the elements of your identify that you feel are most significant and position you to make a meaningful contribution, explain for the admissions committee how those elements developed or were obtained, and show a connection between them and specific aspects of the program.

[b]Essay Option Two – Leave Your Legacy[/b]
[b]Commitment to service and community is an important value that Hoyas share across Georgetown McDonough’s 40+ MBA student-run clubs and organizations, nine centers and initiatives, and various other co-curricular activities. What do you want your legacy to be as a McDonough student and alumni? Be as specific as possible. [/b]
The key word in this essay prompt is clearly “legacy.” This means that the school is not asking solely about what you expect to add during your two years at McDonough. Rather than thinking strictly in terms of “contribution,” think also along the lines of “permanent impact,” whether as a student or an alumnus/alumna. So, for example, in addition to explaining how you will participate in a specific activity or club, describe how that activity or club will be different after your time at McDonough. Or, start by detailing the nature of the unique contributions you could make in class, and then discuss—humbly, of course—the lasting impact you would have on your peers. You could also describe how you plan to maintain your connection to the school after you graduate and what this enduring relationship will mean for the MBA program. What is important here is that you truly comprehend what you have to offer and then reveal exactly how you intend to make that contribution—this will inevitably require that you have a clear understanding of the McDonough experience (refer back to our suggestions on how best to develop this in our analysis for Essay Option One). So, before you elaborate on how, for example, you intend to establish a course on a subject that is dear to your heart or in which you are particularly well versed, make sure that your plans are within the realm of possibility. If you offer an idea or intent that simply would not work at McDonough because you have not learned enough about the program to realize that, you will ultimately show the admissions committee that you are not sufficiently invested in becoming an MBA student there.

As you do your in-depth research on the McDonough program, keep an eye out for instances in which others have made a lasting mark on the school. You do not want to copycat anyone else, of course, but use this input to assess what kinds of efforts tend to be influential, and from there, brainstorm ideas for yourself, based on your personal strengths and potential contributions.

Pay special attention to the aspects of and areas at McDonough that speak to you personally in some way, and consider social events/clubs and professional development opportunities along with course work and academic offerings. Business school is meant to be a comprehensive environment and experience that enriches students in ways not just related directly to business, and perhaps your best potential for contribution lies in one of these areas.

[b]Essay Option Three – Magis[/b]
[b]Magis is a Jesuit value that instills the sense of achieving “more” or “greater” excellence. Share how you achieved magis during a professional experience as evidenced on your resume. Describe why this experience exemplified excellence and what about your involvement (i.e. strengths or skills) contributed to the excellence. [/b]
We imagine that at this point in your life, you have achieved a number of things professionally that you could use as fodder for an application essay. However, your goal here is not simply to impress the admissions committee with the scale or impact of your accomplishment but also to offer one that best fits this particular prompt. This means you will need to select an achievement that was truly meaningful for you on a profound level. The McDonough admissions committee should take away two important things from your essay. The first is a better understanding of your values, which will be conveyed by the nature of the experience you choose and the reasons you consider it so successful (i.e., how do you define “excellence,” especially in your area of interest?). And the second is an awareness of some of the key skills you already possess and how you employ them to achieve a desired outcome.

In addition to creating a compelling narrative for this essay, you should take care to not sound as though you are in any way bragging. The school is less interested in the specific accomplishment you describe and more interested in how you achieved it and why you consider it so significant and successful. As you tell your story, emphasize your actions, and let the story do a lot of the work for you. Finally, reflecting on the experience is key, so do not consider this portion of your essay just a simple afterthought you can sum up in a single sentence. McDonough asks you specifically “why” this experience is one you view as exemplifying excellence, so you must dedicate a portion of your essay to the reasons behind your choice.

If space allows, consider mentioning how you anticipate potentially being even more successful in a similar circumstance in the future after earning your McDonough MBA, noting what specific skill you will gain or experience you will have at the school would provide this missing piece. Showing that you recognize areas for improvement further demonstrates your capacity for self-assessment, as well as a sense of humility.

[b]Video Essay: Building a cohort of diverse and unique individuals is important to the admissions team. We want you to bring your whole self to Georgetown McDonough. Throughout the application, we’ve learned about what you would add as a professional and leader. Just as important is learning about your interests outside of work. In one minute, please share 5-10 random facts about yourself that are not on your resume and how these facts contribute to who you are as a professional and leader.[/b]
McDonough’s video essay is intended specifically for you to offer the school a more dynamic glimpse into your character and personality as an individual, so your primary focus should be on ensuring that you respond in as authentic and natural a way as possible. The admissions committee wants to hear about facets of your background that did not quite make the cut for your application resume (do not repeat any information that appears there, no matter how impressive or interesting you think it might be). These could include accomplishments, skills, qualifications (such as courses you have taken), and even “extracurricular” efforts in the workplace (such as mentoring a coworker or organizing a volunteer day as a team-building exercise).

Although the prompt notes that the school is interested in “learning about your interests outside of work,” it also stipulates that it wants to know how the information you share “contribute[s] to who you are as a professional and leader.” So, we imagine that you can discuss elements from your personal life and community service activities, but if so, they must fulfill this latter requirement. You will have to clearly show how the fact enriches you within this context.

Go beyond a basic description to really draw a (verbal) picture of your chosen topics for this video. Compare, for example, “I enjoy mentoring people and helped a recent hire at my current job successfully prepare for a difficult exam” with “I feel an incredible sense of fulfillment when I am able to support another person in reaching a goal they’ve set for themselves. My coworkers joke that I am the office cheerleader and know that if they ever need inspiration or advice, they can count on me. I recently helped a new hire at my office study for Level I of the CFA exam, and when she passed the first time, I really couldn’t tell you which of us was more excited.” The latter is much more interesting and entertaining—and would likely make a more lasting impression on the admissions committee. More importantly, it helps illustrate for the school the kind of professional/leader you are.

Given that this is a video, you will obviously need to think beyond what you will say and consider the clothing you will wear, the setting or background of your video, your tone of voice, your language style, and a host of other such details. On a practical note, be sure to speak clearly in your video. You naturally do not want any part of your message to be lost or misunderstood, and the admissions committee might view your communication skills and style as indicators of how you might interact with your classmates and/or speak in the classroom. Spend some time practicing in front of a mirror or a friend, but do not overrehearse. You want to come across as genuine and natural.

[b]Optional Essay: Please provide any information you would like to add to your application that you have not otherwise included (300–350 words, approximately one page, double spaced).[/b]
We tend to believe that the best use of the optional essay is to explain confusing or problematic issues in your candidacy, and this prompt offers an opportunity to do just that. So, if you need to, this is your chance to address any questions an admissions officer might have about your profile—a poor grade or overall GPA, a low GMAT or GRE score, a gap in your work experience, etc. In our [url=https://shop.mbamission.com/products/mbamission-optional-essays-guide][b]mbaMission Optional Essays Guide[/b][/url], we offer detailed advice on how best to take advantage of the optional essay, with multiple examples, to help you mitigate any problem areas in your application.

However, because the question can be interpreted rather broadly, it does open the door for you to discuss anything that is not addressed elsewhere in your application and that you feel is truly critical for the admissions committee to know to be able to evaluate you fully and effectively. We caution you about simply trying to fill this space because you fear that not doing so would somehow count against you. Remember, by submitting an additional essay, you are asking the admissions committee to do extra work on your behalf, so you need to make sure that time is warranted. If you are using the essay to emphasize something that if omitted would render your application incomplete, take this opportunity to write a very brief narrative that reveals this key new aspect of your candidacy.

[b]Re-Applicant Essay: Required for re-applicants. How have you strengthened your candidacy since your last application? We are particularly interested in hearing about how you have grown professionally and personally (300–350 words, approximately one page, double spaced). [/b]
Whether you have improved your academic record, received a promotion, begun a new and exciting project, increased your community involvement, or taken on some sort of personal challenge, the key to success with this essay is conveying a very deliberate path of achievement. McDonough wants to know that you have been actively striving to improve yourself and your profile, and that you have seized opportunities during the previous year to do so, because a McDonough MBA is vital to you. The responses to this essay question will vary greatly from one candidate to the next, because each person’s needs and experiences differ. We are more than happy to provide one-on-one assistance with this highly personal essay to ensure that your efforts over the past year are presented in the best light possible.

To learn more about the essays for other top business schools, visit our [url=https://www.mbamission.com/mba-essay-examples/]MBA Essay Tips and Examples Resources Page[/url].
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By Jen Kedrowski, MBA Admissions Consultant, mbaMission and former GMAT/GRE Instructor & Curriculum Manager

If you are planning to apply to MBA programs in the near future, you might be wondering which admissions exam you should take as part of the application process. You want to be sure to choose the exam that is the best fit for you—the one that will most effectively showcase your abilities and add to your applicant profile.

In this post, we offer insight into the different exam options for applying to business school to help you identify the best one for you.

[b]Do you really [/b][b]need[/b][b] to take an exam to apply to MBA programs? [/b]

The reality is that the majority of MBA programs require a standardized test as part of the application process, typically either the GMAT or the GRE. A smaller number of programs accept the Executive Assessment exam.

A number of U.S. MBA programs have begun offering [url=https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1c8iIp2e-23bw7MRmRf_WeWd6kekkaSEvsEi__YkX9q0/edit?usp=sharing]test waivers[/url] in recent years, but those schools vary from one application season to the next, so be sure to contact the programs you are interested in directly to verify whether applying for a test waiver is an option. Test waivers are typically granted on a limited basis, and the admissions committees will need to see solid alternate evidence of quantitative, analytical, and academic strengths before issuing a waiver to an applicant.

For most applicants, however, an exam is required. Business schools use your exam score, in combination with your academic performance as an undergraduate, in predicting your ability to manage the academic rigor of their MBA program. Exam scores alone do not get applicants “in” to specific programs, but scoring well below a school’s average can hold a candidate back and become a roadblock to acceptance. In addition, at schools that are particularly competitive, many candidates will submit strong test scores, so you need to score as high as possible on your test to maximize your chances.

[b]GMAT versus GRE versus EA: What are the main differences? [/b]

The [url=https://www.mba.com/exams/gmat-exam/scores/understanding-your-score]GMAT[/url] exam is administered by the Graduate Management Admission Council (GMAC) and tests Quantitative Reasoning, Verbal Reasoning, and Data Insights. The GMAT has an extensive history in the business school world. The exam’s first iteration was established more than 70 years ago.

The [url=https://www.ets.org/gre/test-takers/general-test/about.html]GRE[/url] exam is administered by ETS and was initially an admissions test for a broad range of graduate school programs. It tests Quantitative Reasoning, Verbal Reasoning, and Analytical Writing. Business schools began accepting the GRE almost two decades ago, and over time, GRE submissions for MBA programs have been steadily increasing.

A third admissions exam, the  (EA), is accepted by a small but growing number of full-time MBA programs (including Columbia Business School, NYU Stern, UVA Darden, Duke Fuqua, Texas McCombs, and Georgetown McDonough). The EA was created by the same organization that created the GMAT, initially for applicants to Executive MBA (EMBA) programs. It tests a similar range of skills as the GMAT, including Quantitative, Verbal Reasoning, and Integrated Reasoning—which involves data interpretation.

With respect to differences in content, be aware of the following:

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The GMAT prioritizes data analysis and quantitative reasoning most extensively.[/*]
The GRE includes vocabulary, geometry, and analytical writing  (the GMAT and EA do not).[/*]
The EA includes Sentence Correction (grammar) questions.[/*]
The EA is the shortest of the three exams (by a small margin; see chart later in this post).[/*]
Generally, all three exams test a similar range and level of quantitative facts, concepts, and formulas (with the exception of some geometry on the GRE).[/*]
All three are adaptive exams, meaning that the difficulty level adjusts based on your performance while you are in the process of taking the test.[/*]
All three exams also test your time-management and strategic decision-making abilities.[/*]
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[b]GMAT versus GRE versus EA Comparison Chart[/b]

[b]GMAT[/b]
[b]GRE[/b]
[b]EA[/b]

[b]Total Length[/b]
2 hours, 15 minutes
2 hours
90 minutes

[b]Sections[/b]
3 sections, 64 questions (Quantitative Reasoning, Verbal Reasoning, Data Insights)
5 sections, 55 questions (2 Quantitative Reasoning, 2 Verbal Reasoning, 1 Analytical Writing)
3 sections, 40 questions (Quantitative Reasoning, Verbal Reasoning, Integrated Reasoning)

[b]Scoring[/b]
Overall score: 205–805

Subscores: 60–90 for each section
Quantitative score: 130–170

Verbal score: 130–170

Writing score: 0–6
Overall score: 126–174

Subscores: 0–20 for each section

[b]Quantitative Section Details[/b]
21 questions, 45 minutes

Question types: Problem-solving

Topics: Number properties, algebra, arithmetic, statistics
2 sections (12 questions in 21 minutes and 15 questions in 26 minutes)

Question types: Quantitative comparisons, multiple choice, numeric entry, and data interpretation set
14 questions, 30 minutes

Question types: Problem-solving and data sufficiency

Topics: Number properties, algebra, arithmetic, statistics

[b]Verbal Section Details[/b]
23 questions, 45 minutes

Question types: Reading comprehension and critical reasoning
2 sections (12 questions in 18 minutes and 15 questions in 23 minutes)

Question types: Reading comprehension, text completion, and sentence equivalence
14 questions, 30 minutes

Question types: Reading comprehension, critical reasoning, and sentence correction

[b]Data Insights or Integrated Reasoning Section Details[/b]
20 questions, 45 minutes

Question types: Data sufficiency, multi-source reasoning, table analysis, graphics interpretation, and two-part analysis
N/A
12 questions, 30 minutes

Question types: Multi-source reasoning, table analysis, graphics interpretation, and two-part analysis

[b]Analytical Writing Section Details[/b]
N/A
1 question, Analyze an Issue, 30 minutes
N/A

[b]Calculator Usage[/b]
Available on-screen for Data Insights section only
Available on-screen for Quantitative section
Available on-screen for Integrated Reasoning section only

[b]Flexibility within Sections[/b]
Review and edit up to three questions per section, if time allows
Skip, go back, and review any questions within active section
Limited ability to review and change answers at specific points within each section

[b]Exam Attempts[/b]
Five attempts permitted in a rolling 12-month period; eight attempts in a lifetime
Five attempts permitted in a rolling 12-month period; no lifetime limit
Four attempts in a lifetime; two maximum attempts at a test center, and two maximum attempts online

 

[b]Which exam(s) will your target programs accept? [/b]

Virtually all MBA programs (full-time, part-time, EMBA) accept either the GMAT or the GRE exam. Most EMBA programs accept the EA, in addition to the GMAT and GRE.  Multiple full-time and part-time programs now accept the EA as well. GMAC maintains a comprehensive list of [url=https://www.mba.com/exams/executive-assessment/about/accepting-schools]all programs that accept the EA[/url], so check that list regularly for the latest updates.

[b]Do MBA programs prefer one exam over another? [/b]

Many applicants worry that even though a school says it will accept several different exam options, it might prefer one test over another. However, this is simply not true. Programs want you to take the exam that will best showcase your strengths and ability to handle the business school curriculum!

Although the GMAT has a long history of being the primary exam for MBA programs, that does not mean it is “preferred.” And the percentage of MBA applicants who submit GRE scores has continued to increase over the years. At many top programs, [url=https://poetsandquants.com/2024/05/15/gmat-vs-gre-which-schools-prefer-which-test-and-which-still-dont-require-any/]40% or more[/url] of candidates submit GRE scores.

Rather than feeling compelled to take the GMAT simply because it has a longer history with business schools, do your research to determine which of the exams is truly the best option for you, your skills, and your test-taking abilities.

[b]Which exam is best suited for you? [/b]

You will need to consider many different factors as you compare the GMAT, GRE, and EA. Business schools have generally had more consistent GMAT averages over time and strive to ensure that those averages do not dip much. GRE averages have a wider range of variability, and Quant and Verbal subscores are still looked at separately. In addition, the percentage of candidates who submit a GRE score has historically been smaller than the percentage who submit GMAT scores at most programs. Given all of these factors, until recently, at least, some schools were able to be slightly more flexible in accepting applicants with below-average GRE (or EA) scores—but not below-average GMAT scores—if the rest of their profile was strong.

According to Jeremy Shinewald, founder/president of mbaMission,

“Schools are protective over their GMAT averages. If you are naturally a strong-test taker and can see yourself lifting a program’s average, you might want to take the GMAT. If you’re not a natural test taker, you might want to pursue the GRE. That doesn’t mean that business schools will accept any old GRE score, though; test takers should still seek to perform at or near the school averages.”

That said, GMAT scoring has changed this past year, with a new scale and new percentiles, so how focused business schools will be on specific GMAT averages and thresholds going forward remains to be seen.

Here are some scenarios when each exam might be particularly suited for certain applicants:

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You might be best suited for the GMAT exam
[list]
if you consider yourself particularly strong in quantitative reasoning and data analysis, since these are very prevalent across the GMAT.[/*]
if you are a strong test taker in general and feel confident that you can achieve a GMAT score that could benefit programs with respect to their averages.[/*]
if you are a non-native English speaker and/or feel the GRE vocabulary or EA grammar questions would be difficult or time intensive for you.[/*]
if you have taken a GMAT practice test and feel you could excel with this exam! [/*]
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[list]
You might be best suited for the GRE exam
[list]
if you consider yourself particularly strong in verbal reasoning and complex vocabulary.[/*]
if you feel you are not the strongest standardized test taker but prefer GRE questions to EA questions (or your target programs do not accept the EA).[/*]
if you feel your quantitative and/or data analysis skills are on the weaker side.[/*]
if you are applying for any specialized master’s degree programs that require the GRE.[/*]
if you have taken a GRE practice test and feel you could excel with this exam! [/*]
[/list]
[/*]
[/list]
[list]
You might be best suited for the EA exam
[list]
if you are applying to EMBA programs and/or other MBA options that accept the EA.[/*]
if you consider yourself particularly strong in grammar and data analysis.[/*]
if you feel you are not the strongest standardized test taker and prefer EA questions to GRE questions.[/*]
if you prefer the shortest possible exam length available.[/*]
if you have taken an EA practice test and feel you could excel with this exam! [/*]
[/list]
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[b]How should you decide which exam to take for MBA admissions? [/b]

After considering the advice we have presented thus far and confirming which exams your target programs accept, the simplest way to decide which exam is best suited to you is to take practice tests.

Taking a practice test enables you to experience that particular exam to see how you feel about the experience, structure, and/or question types and determine whether you prefer it to any of the other exams. Practice tests also offer you a very rough diagnostic test score, which might not necessarily reflect what your final score will be after you have spent the appropriate amount of time preparing but will allow you to compare your performance on different exams, thereby providing some insight into which test you might have the most potential with.

Here are some links to get you started:

[url=https://www.mba.com/exams/gmat-exam/prep-for-the-exam?utm_campaign=americas_All_Dec_gfocusprep_cenarm_prep-for-the-exam&utm_source=google&utm_medium=paidsearch&utm_keyword=mba%20gmat%20practice%20test&c3api=693220593112,mba%20gmat%20practice%20test&utm_source=google&utm_medium=&utm_campaign=&utm_content=s%7Cpcrid%7C693220593112%7Cpkw%7Cmba%20gmat%20practice%20test%7Cpmt%7Cp&utm_term=mba%20gmat%20practice%20test&hsa_acc=4534211383&hsa_cam=20656829423&hsa_grp=167391919908&hsa_ad=693220593112&hsa_src=g&hsa_tgt=kwd-308512294523&hsa_kw=mba%20gmat%20practice%20test&hsa_mt=p&hsa_net=adwords&hsa_ver=3&gad_source=1&gclid=Cj0KCQjw9vqyBhCKARIsAIIcLMFaT1-Lt-bxvzQIKj388GwWUSODVPbKQdQbj5fo7iZ2xCo3Q_g_UUEaAsVlEALw_wcB]Try a free online practice GMAT Focus exam[/url].

[url=https://ereg.ets.org/ereg/public/testPrep/viewtestPreparation?_p=GRI]Try a free online practice GRE exam[/url].

[url=https://www.gmac.com/executive-assessment/prepare/free-official-questions]Try free online practice EA questions[/url]. (Note: You will need to pay a fee to access a full-length practice EA exam.)

If you have taken several practice exams and still are not sure which one to focus on—or if you would like additional advice on test preparation—feel free to reach out for a free 30-minute [url=https://www.mbamission.com/consult/mba-admissions/]consultation[/url] with one of our MBA admissions experts. We offer these complimentary advice consultations on a weekly basis across multiple time zones.

[b]How should you prepare for your chosen exam? [/b]

Most candidates prepare for the GMAT for somewhere between two and six months. Taking a targeted [url=https://www.kaptest.com/gmat/courses/gmat-courses]prep course[/url] and/or working with a tutor can further strengthen your quantitative and verbal foundations and maximize your score.

[b]Should you take the same exam multiple times? [/b]

Retaking an exam will not negatively affect your chances of admission, because business schools will consider your highest score in their evaluation of your candidacy. We therefore recommend considering a retake if you feel you could improve your score and/or you are below your desired target for your intended business school(s).

[b]Should you take multiple [/b][b]different[/b][b] exams? [/b]

Some applicants take more than one of the three admissions tests (if accepted by their target programs). Why might you choose this approach? A large proportion of the preparation you do for any one exam will carry over and apply to the other exams, as well. If you struggle to reach or surpass the score averages at your target programs after several attempts, you might want to consider trying a different exam, even before devoting extensive prep to it, just to see whether you might perform better on it instead.

[b]What qualifies as a “good” GMAT/GRE/EA score? [/b]

Two key considerations determine a “good” test score. These are the (1) percentiles and  (2) average scores at your target school(s). Do your research on both to get a sense of how your score would compare. Feel free to [url=https://www.mbamission.com/consult/mba-admissions/]reach out to us[/url] with questions about your scores and candidacy anytime.

[b]How have the GMAT and GRE changed recently? [/b]

In 2023, the GMAT exam was revamped and renamed the GMAT Focus. It was shortened overall, and certain elements, such as Sentence Correction (grammar) and Analytical Writing, were removed. As of July 2024, what had been referred to as the GMAT Focus exam became the only GMAT option available and is now therefore known simply as the GMAT exam.

The GRE exam has not changed with respect to content, but the length of the test was shortened. No changes have been made to the EA recently. The three exams are now more similar in length, following the changes to the GMAT and GRE.

Stacey Koprince, curriculum director at Manhattan Prep, has the following to say about the recent GMAT test changes:

“With the recent changes to the GMAT, the testmaker has removed some elements that were less relevant to business school, such as geometry and grammar, and elevated the emphasis on skills more important to business school, such as data analytics.

The GMAT has in fact become notably more friendly for test takers, without grammar rules to memorize. The GRE still maintains testing vocabulary, which can be time intensive for many test takers.”

Overall, we recommend that you be intentional with respect to your test choice. Take several practice tests initially, research your target school requirements, and then determine which approach and exam you should focus on. Feel free to reach out to us with questions along the way.

[b]Do you have questions about your test plan or MBA application profile? [/b]

Our expert admissions consultants can answer any questions you might have. Sign up for a [url=https://www.mbamission.com/consult/mba-admissions/]complimentary 30-minute consultation[/url] today.
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FROM mbaMission Blog: Experience onTrack by mbaMission at GMAC’s The MBA Tour New York City
Join Jeremy Shinewald, Founder and President of mbaMission, as he introduces onTrack by mbaMission at GMAC’s The MBA Tour on Saturday, July 27, 2024, from 11:00 a.m. to 3:00 p.m. at the Sheraton New York Times Square Hotel. During this event, Jeremy will meet one-on-one with aspiring MBAs and take questions about the admissions process and how to stand out among the masses of applicants. Plus, visit the onTrack by mbaMission booth for free swag and an exclusive discount on your subscription to this “master class” in MBA admissions.

What Is onTrack by mbaMission? onTrack by mbaMission is a first-of-its-kind, on-demand MBA application experience that delivers a personalized curriculum for you and leverages interactive tools to guide you through the entire MBA application process. Whether you are just starting to explore MBA programs or putting the finishing touches on your applications, onTrack provides customized guidance and support every step of the way. From selecting the right schools to crafting standout essays and preparing for interviews, onTrack ensures that you present the best possible version of yourself to the admissions committees.

Why Should You Attend GMAC’s The MBA Tour? In addition to gaining valuable information about the MBA experience, you will have the opportunity to participate in the following:

    Meet-Ups: Via group meetings with an admissions representative and up to five peers, you will gain valuable insights into the business school admissions process.MBA Talks: These university-hosted presentations provide helpful application tips, career advice, and information about the various programs the schools offer.Resume/CV Clinic: In one-on-one sessions, admissions representatives will advise you on how to improve this important element of your application.Networking Fair: Meet admissions representatives from all the attending universities, and connect directly with students, alumni, advisors, and other applicants.
Attendees Enjoy Special Offers. Attendees will receive an exclusive discount code for onTrack by mbaMission. This powerful tool will give you a strategic advantage throughout the application process, making sure you stay on track and on target for success.

Register Now. You do not want to miss this invaluable opportunity to kick-start your MBA journey with the guidance of Jeremy Shinewald and mbaMission’s innovative onTrack platform. Whether you want to improve your application, get exclusive GMAT tips, or gain access to admissions decision-makers from top business schools, GMAC’s The MBA Tour will empower your ambitions.

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    Date: Saturday, July 27, 2024Time: 11:00 a.m. – 3:00 p.m.Location: Sheraton New York Times Square Hotel, West 53rd Street, New York, New York 10019
Participation is completely free, but spots are limited. Reserve your place now to ensure that you do not miss this opportunity to accelerate your MBA aspirations with onTrack by mbaMission. Register here.

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This post was written by our resident Career Coach Elissa Harris. To sign up for a free 30-minute career consultation with Elissa, please click here.

Whether you are getting ready for business school, looking to change jobs, or wanting to excel in your current role, we think you will appreciate these recent career-related articles that caught our attention.

  • Landing a Job Is All About Who You Know (Again) (Read time: three to four minutes) This article reminds readers that networking is more critical than ever for finding a job in our current market, and for most people, applying for roles online has lost its effectiveness as a result of employee referral programs and new artificial intelligence–related tools. The solution to landing a job is going back to the basics: networking.

  • The No. 1 AI Mistake Job Seekers Make (Read time: three minutes) Artificial intelligence (AI) can be tremendously helpful to you in your job search, if you use it effectively. Without knowing the right ways to ask ChatGPT for help, you could end up with inaccurate or vague resumes and cover letters. This article shares four tips for optimizing the value of AI in drafting job search–related documents.

  • 9 Questions to Help You Figure Out Why You’re Burned Out (Read time: three to four minutes) Burnout is real, and it affects more than just your job performance. Identifying the factors contributing to your burnout is the first step in making changes that will address it and enable you to avoid it in the future.

  • How to Stand Out at Work Without Stepping on Toes (Read time: three to four minutes) The author of this article offers four reframes for people who grew up in “quiet cultures” but want to get noticed in the “loud culture” of the United States without feeling harsh, aggressive, or boastful. Her step-by-step framework provides specific guidance for individuals who do not want to sacrifice their personal traits to succeed.

mbaMission’s Career Coaches are happy to explore with you any career-related topics—including selecting potential paths, crafting your professional narrative, and maximizing the effectiveness of your job search—during a complimentary, 30-minute career consultation. Sign up for your free session today!
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