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Among all of the students in the classical music course, Annie is the most enthusiastic; she prefers Bach's concertos and Beethoven's operas rather than any modern composer.
A. the most enthusiastic; she prefers Bach's concertos and Beethoven's operas rather than any modern composer
B. the more enthusiastic; she prefers Bach's concertos and Beethoven's operas rather than the compositions of any modern composer
C. the more enthusiastic; she prefers Bach's concertos and Beethoven's operas to the compositions of any modern composer
D. the most enthusiastic; she prefers Bach's concertos and Beethoven's operas to the compositions of any modern composers
E. the most enthusiastic; she prefers Bach's concertos and Beethoven's operas to the compositions of any other modern composers
KAPLAN OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONRead the Original Sentence Carefully, Looking for Errors
When the superlative adjective most appears in an underlined segment, use context clues to determine how many entities are involved in the comparison. Most is appropriate for comparisons among three or more entities, while more is needed for comparisons between two entities. In this sentence, Annie is being compared to all the other students in the class, so "most" is appropriate.
The underlined portion also contains the verb "prefers." Idiomatically, a person prefers one thing to another (not over another or rather than another or instead of another). For example, it would be correct to say, I prefer ravioli to spaghetti. Here, the construction is "prefers ... rather than." Moreover, the comparison is illogically between "concertos and ... operas" and "any modern composer." The sentence should either compare musical works to other musical works or composers to composers. (A) is incorrect.
Scan and Group the Answer Choices
A scan of the beginnings of the choices reveals that (B) and (C) incorrectly change the superlative "most" to the comparative "more."
Eliminate Choices Until Only One Remains
(A) is out for the reasons noted in the initial analysis. Get rid of (B) and (C) for using the incorrect comparative form. Compare (D) and (E) in more depth.
Both (D) and (E) use the correct idiom "prefers ... to." However, by adding the word "other" to describe modern composers, (E) alters the meaning of the original sentence. This choice implies that Bach and Beethoven are other modern composers rather than two of the classical composers Annie is enthusiastic about, as the original sentence indicates. Only (D) corrects the original idiom issue without changing the meaning of the sentence.
TAKEAWAY: When a sentence contains a comparison, use the context clues to determine how many entities are being compared and, thus, whether the comparative or the superlative form of an adjective is needed.