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Re: Correct Usage of "Included/Including" [#permalink]
Eli

Can you please explain the difference btevven among these/amng them in this context

please

KapTeacherEli wrote:
sungoal wrote:
At the annual stockholders meeting, investors heard a presentation on the numerous challenges facing the company, including among them the threat from a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent infringement suit and the declining sales for the company’s powerful microprocessor chip.
A. including among them the threat from a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit and the declining sales for
B. which includes the threat of a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit and declining sales of
C. included among these the threat from a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit as well as a decline in sales for
D. among them the threat of a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit and the decline in sales of
E. among these the threat from a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit as well as the decline in sales for

Experts please explain why options A and C are wrong?
Hi sungoal,

if you are 'among' something, then by definition you are included in that group--the word included is redundant and unnecessary.

Hope this helps!
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