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rhyme
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Essay Review [#permalink] New post   21 Nov 2006, 04:27
I've been buried. I have over 30 essays sent to me in the last three or four days. I'm trying to get through it, but it might take a while. Someone paypal me $4 so I can go buy coffee. Hah! Hang tight crew, I see em. Also I recieved the following from someone:

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Though I am not a gay but I want to kiss you. Kiss
Thanks a lot.


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[#permalink] New post   21 Nov 2006, 04:56
Keep up the good work Rhyme.
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[#permalink] New post   21 Nov 2006, 05:02
I start thinking about sending you mine... :)
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[#permalink] New post   21 Nov 2006, 05:09
helg wrote:
I start thinking about sending you mine... :)


I've edited your essay:

I'm starting to think about sending you mine.

Comments:

A good start to your essay, but you've failed to really say much. I'd suggest adding a second or third sentence.
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[#permalink] New post   21 Nov 2006, 05:23
rhyme wrote:
helg wrote:
I start thinking about sending you mine... :)


I've edited your essay:

I'm starting to think about sending you mine.

Comments:

A good start to your essay, but you've failed to really say much. I'd suggest adding a second or third sentence.


OK, you passed the test. Watch out for the PM! :lol: :lol: :lol:
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[#permalink] New post   21 Nov 2006, 05:23
helg wrote:
rhyme wrote:
helg wrote:
I start thinking about sending you mine... :)


I've edited your essay:

I'm starting to think about sending you mine.

Comments:

A good start to your essay, but you've failed to really say much. I'd suggest adding a second or third sentence.


OK, you passed the test. Watch out for the PM! :lol: :lol: :lol:


sh**!

heh.

It's gonna be a long day of reading essays!
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[#permalink] New post   21 Nov 2006, 05:27
rhyme wrote:
helg wrote:
rhyme wrote:
helg wrote:
I start thinking about sending you mine... :)


I've edited your essay:

I'm starting to think about sending you mine.

Comments:

A good start to your essay, but you've failed to really say much. I'd suggest adding a second or third sentence.


OK, you passed the test. Watch out for the PM! :lol: :lol: :lol:


sh**!

heh.

It's gonna be a long day of reading essays!


No worries. I will bide my time. I decided to postpone my Tuck app till January, when I will already know the Chicago, Wharton and (hopefully) Kellogg results.
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