Pls evaluate my essay.....when someone acheives greatness in
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12 May 2010, 07:44
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WHEN SOMEONE ACHEIVES GREATNESS IN ANY FIELD..SUCH AS ARTS,SCIENCE,SPORTS ETC. - THAT PERSON'S ACHEIVEMNTS ARE MORE IMPORTANT THAN ANY OF HIS/HER PERSONAL FAULTS.
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Whether the acheivements of a person, who excelled in any field be considered more important than his/her personal faults is a controversial one. On the one hand some people believe that personal acheivements eclipse the faults, on the other side their are people who beleive that personal faults outshine any acheivements that individual have made. In this argument I shall present my views against the issue,that personal acheivements are more important than the personal faults.
First of all, Successful persons represent their country and their people in the outside world. They also serve as role model for millions of their fans.If these persons make mistakes and their mistakes are ignored ,then it sends a bad message to the society. This case can be best explained by the recent example of number one golfer Tiger woods, who was caught involved in sex scandal. If his mistakes would have beeen neglected ,many other youngsters who are his fans,might have thought that such things are ok in society .Its common human nature to mimic the acts of their famous superstars or role models. Ultimately leading the society towards deterioation.
Secondly, their should not be no discrimination .No individual should be exempted for his faults ,just because he/she is very sucessful in his career.Law and order and other Rules of humanity should be equally applicable to every individual. We have enough examples from history that prove that humanity is above any individual. For example , Sanjay Dutt is a superstar in bolloywood, But he was also arressted under TADA and imprisoned for illegal possesion of AK 47 and suspicious involvement in Bombay blasts. Similarly another superstar Salman khan was arrested in Jaipur for illegal hunting of animals . Clearly individuals achievemnts are one thing and his/her faults another.They should always be considered seperately.
Thus , I conclude that nobody's acheivements should be considered above his faults for reasons such as no discrimination and avoidance of sending a bad message to the society. .