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18 Oct 2019, 21:04
Im relatively new to the test format and just begun studying for IELTS about a month ago, but i dont participate in any class so i dont really know how to improve my skill effectively, so can you help me rate my writing about charts analysis:
The two charts give reasons about why people choose cycling or driving to work over the other.
The most popular reasons for cycling are because people care about their health and the pollute condition of the environment, with 30% for of those who favour cycling for each category. About 15% said that they prefer bicycle because of easier parking. The last two reasons are cheaper travelling costs and ,surprisingly, people think that bicyle is faster than car, with 13% of the cylist for the former and 12% for the latter.
In contrast, 40% of the drivers said it is more comfortable to travel to work by car, and also 21% of them have to travel long distances, which is a disadvantage of bicyle. Other reasons said by people who choose car are that they have to carry things to work (14%), car's safety compare to bicycle (11%), and lastly 14% consider car to be faster, this is oppose to 11% of the cyclist said above.
In conclusion, most bicyle-goers choose it for their's and the environments health. While in contrast, most car driver do so for comfort over long distance travels.