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The most vexing problem faced by researchers exploring wind-powered generation of electricity is achieving a constant flow of power from an unpredictable natural source that meets demand, but so the flow does not overload electrical grids with sudden voltage increases

A. achieving a constant flow of power from an unpredictable natural source that meets demand, but so the flow does not overload
B. achieving a constant flow of power from an unpredictable natural source, which meets demand but without overloading.
C. how to achieve a constant flow of power from an unpredictable natural source, a flow that meets demand but does not overload.
D. how to achieve a constant flow of power from an unpredictable natural source, but a flow that meets demand without overloading
E. how a constant flow of power from an unpredictable natural source can be achieved, which meets demand but does not overload.

The most vexing problem is "NOUN" the parallelism is maintained only when before and after part of "is" in same

but in option C "how to achieve a constant flow" is a phrase

Can some one explain
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The most vexing problem faced by researchers exploring wind-powered generation of electricity is achieving a constant flow of power from an unpredictable natural source that meets demand, but so the flow does not overload electrical grids with sudden voltage increases

A. achieving a constant flow of power from an unpredictable natural source that meets demand, but so the flow does not overload
B. achieving a constant flow of power from an unpredictable natural source, which meets demand but without overloading.
C. how to achieve a constant flow of power from an unpredictable natural source, a flow that meets demand but does not overload.
D. how to achieve a constant flow of power from an unpredictable natural source, but a flow that meets demand without overloading
E. how a constant flow of power from an unpredictable natural source can be achieved, which meets demand but does not overload.

The most vexing problem is "NOUN" the parallelism is maintained only when before and after part of "is" in same

but in option C "how to achieve a constant flow" is a phrase

Can some one explain

Hi RaviChandra

The basic structure of a sentence is: Subject + Verb + Object (S-V-O)
We do not have any rule that requires S and O must be parallel. S and V, however, must follow the subject-verb agreement rules.

For example:
My weakness is that I don't know how to spend on my salary

Subject: my weakness is a noun
Object: "that I don't know how to spend on my salary" is even a clause.

Hope it helps.
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Hi Thankyou for the explanations. I was referring to "Watch out for Link verbs" Section in Chapter 4 "Parallelism Strategy" (MGMAT)

This part says,

Wrong: The bouquet of flowers WAS a giving of love.

The two sides of the linking verb was are the bouquet and a giving. These two sides are not as structurally
parallel as possible. In order to achieve true parallelism, we can rewrite the sentence replacing giving
with the noun gift, so that the two sides of the linking verb are as structurally similar as possible.

Right: The bouquet of flowers WAS a gift of love.

Can you please tell if i have inferred this wrong.... i bit a confused
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Hi Thankyou for the explanations. I was referring to "Watch out for Link verbs" Section in Chapter 4 "Parallelism Strategy" (MGMAT)

This part says,

Wrong: The bouquet of flowers WAS a giving of love.

The two sides of the linking verb was are the bouquet and a giving. These two sides are not as structurally
parallel as possible. In order to achieve true parallelism, we can rewrite the sentence replacing giving
with the noun gift, so that the two sides of the linking verb are as structurally similar as possible.

Right: The bouquet of flowers WAS a gift of love.

Can you please tell if i have inferred this wrong.... i bit a confused

Hi RaviChandra

I gotcha :)

You misunderstood what MGMAT wants to convey. The book means subject and object should be parallel in terms of meaning.

For example: The bouquet of flowers WAS a giving of love.
The bouquet is something real, physical. It can't be an action "giving" (gerund form of verb give) ==> You must change a giving to a gift.

That's the idea the book wants to tell you.

Please see the sentence right below the example you quoted in page 60 ==> see the underlined part "in meaning".

Hope it's clear now.
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Need help to understand why 'C' is a better option than 'E'
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Need help to understand why 'C' is a better option than 'E'

On GMAT "which" should refer to a noun. In case of E "which" modifies the entire clause, and this is unacceptable (tho in speaking language we do so)
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Option B says that natural source meets the demand and option C says that the flow meets the demand. I guess option B should be correct as the natural source which is unpredictable is meeting the demand.

Please advise if I am wrong.
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The most vexing problem faced by researchers exploring wind-powered generation of electricity is achieving a constant flow of power from an unpredictable natural source that meets demand, but so the flow does not overload electrical grids with sudden voltage increases

A. achieving a constant flow of power from an unpred-ictable natural source that meets demand, but so the flow does not overload
B. achieving a constant flow of power from an unpredictable natural source, which meets demand but without overloading.
C. how to achieve a constant flow of power from an unpredictable natural source, a flow that meets demand but does not overload.
D. how to achieve a constant flow of power from an unpredictable natural source, but a flow that meets demand without overloading
E. how a constant flow of power from an unpredictable natural source can be achieved, which meets demand but does not overload.
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Option B says that natural source meets the demand and option C says that the flow meets the demand. I guess option B should be correct as the natural source which is unpredictable is meeting the demand.

Please advise if I am wrong.
Hi tapasgupta, To clarify this let us understand the intended meaning of sentence
- that the flow should be constant
- that the flow should not overload the system
Now, refer here the subtle diff. that the system is not overloaded by the natural source but the flow and that the natural source does not meet the demand but the flow driven from the natural source meets the demand. Also, note that natural source by itself can not overload the system there has to be something from the unpredictable natural source that may overload it.
Also, check that the demand has to be met but overload has to be avoided but option B puts it as in the demand would be met even if the system is overloaded but the overloading should be avoided. For the sake of quick reference I am pasting both the options below.
Hope this helps :-)

B. achieving a constant flow of power from an unpredictable natural source, which meets demand but without overloading.
C. how to achieve a constant flow of power from an unpredictable natural source, a flow that meets demand but does not overload.
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Can someone explain why C is not a run-on? The two clauses before and after the comma seem to capable of standing alone as sentences.
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arvindsiv No, option C is not run-on. The second part of the sentence is an absolute phrase modifying preceding clause.
absolute phrase = noun+'that' clause.
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yo - remove those periods...wtf?!
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The most vexing problem faced by researchers exploring wind-powered generation of electricity is achieving a constant flow of power from an unpredictable natural source that meets demand, but so the flow does not overload electrical grids with sudden voltage increases.

(A) achieving a constant flow of power from an unpred-ictable natural source that meets demand, but so the flow does not overload

(B) achieving a constant flow of power from an unpredictable natural source, which meets demand but without overloading

(C) how to achieve a constant flow of power from an unpredictable natural source, a flow that meets demand but does not overload

(D) how to achieve a constant flow of power from an unpredictable natural source, but a flow that meets demand without overloading

(E) how a constant flow of power from an unpredictable natural source can be achieved, which meets demand but does not overload


Only C are E are close . In option C , "a flow " is referring to " a constant flow of power from an unpredictable natural source". So "a flow" is an appositive. The structure is fine.

In option E , "which" should refer to " flow " but is far from the 'flow". "which" is referring to anything clearly here.

Option C is the correct option.
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the first thing is
" how to do" can work as a noun. evidence is that
how to learn gmat is a problem. this sentence is correct.
so, "how to do" working as a noun can be parallel with "problem".

the second point is why not "achieving" but "how to do". we can not say " problem is achieving" because it is not logic to say so. the problem can not be achieving logically. logically, we have to say " problem is how to achieve".

in short, "how to achieve" is parallel grammatically to "problem" and are logically to go with "problem".

this logic thinking can be seen in different view. look at the point from idiomatic perspective.

" how to achieve" is idiomatic. "achieving" is not idiomatic.
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I was between option B and C. I went with B because I thought option C is a run on sentence. "a" was used a s a connector between the two sentences.

Can someone clarify the concept for me? why "a flow" is used to connect the two sentences?

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I was between option B and C. I went with B because I thought option C is a run on sentence. "a" was used a s a connector between the two sentences.

Can someone clarify the concept for me? why "a flow" is used to connect the two sentences?

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Hi azoz7,

A flow doesn't join two clauses here.

The most vexing problem faced by researchers exploring wind-powered generation of electricity is how to achieve a constant flow of power from an unpredictable natural source, a flow that meets demand but does not overload electrical grids with sudden voltage increases.

a flow that meets demand... is just a modifier that tells us a little more about the flow mentioned earlier in the sentence. The option would be incorrect if we actually had a clause there. Let's remove the that so that the second flow has a verb:

The problem is how to achieve a constant flow of power, a flow meets demand... ← This is wrong (comma splice).
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I was between option B and C. I went with B because I thought option C is a run on sentence. "a" was used a s a connector between the two sentences.

Can someone clarify the concept for me? why "a flow" is used to connect the two sentences?

Thanks
Hi azoz7,

A flow doesn't join two clauses here.

The most vexing problem faced by researchers exploring wind-powered generation of electricity is how to achieve a constant flow of power from an unpredictable natural source, a flow that meets demand but does not overload electrical grids with sudden voltage increases.

a flow that meets demand... is just a modifier that tells us a little more about the flow mentioned earlier in the sentence. The option would be incorrect if we actually had a clause there. Let's remove the that so that the second flow has a verb:

The problem is how to achieve a constant flow of power, a flow meets demand... ← This is wrong (comma splice).

Wow. Thanks Ajitesh Arun. This is very clear. Thank you very much for the clear explanation.
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