RahulHGGmat wrote:
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generisRequest you to provide OE for this one
There was civil unrest, which contributed to the instability of the nation's economy, along with no clear monetary policy.
A) There was civil unrest, which contributed to the instability of the nation's economy, along with no clear monetary policy.
The core of this sentence seems to be "There was civil unrest along with no clear monetary policy." The intended meaning is that the civil unrest helped contribute to a lack of a monetary policy. The 'which' modifier is set apart from the rest of the sentence. If I wanted to use a 'which' modifier, I should say "There was civil unrest, which, along with a lack of clear monetary policy, contributed to the instability of the nation's economy."B) Contributing to the instability of the nation's economy was civil unrest and no clear monetary policy.
This is a subject-verb issue. Sometimes subjects come after verbs. Here 'civil unrest' and 'no clear monetary policy' WERE contributing to the instability.C) The absence of a clear monetary policy and civil unrest contributed to the instability of the nation's economy.
Here it seems that 'civil unrest' is also 'absent.' The parallelism is ambiguous. Is 'Civil unrest' parallel with 'monetary policy' (and therefore, civil unrest is also 'absent'), or is civil unrest parallel with 'the absence' and therefore something that contributed to the economy's instability.D) Civil unrest contributed to the nation's economic instability, and so did the absence of a clear monetary policy.
This might not be grammatically wrong, but the structure could be cleaner. Either 'X and Y did Z' or 'X along with Y did Z' is much cleaner than "X did Z, and so did Y." 'And so' is also an unusual double-conjunction that raises my eyebrows a little bit.E) Civil unrest, along with the absence of a clear monetary policy, contributed to the instability of the nation's economy.
This is correct and unambiguous