Bunuel wrote:
A vocal opponent of the unequal distribution of wealth, the itinerant activist has spent time in several countries across the world,
railing against the callousness and injustices of governments, the negligence of the upper classes, and trying to forge a transnational people’s movement.
(A) railing against the callousness and injustices of governments, the negligence of the upper classes, and trying to forge a transnational people’s movement
(B) to rail against the callousness and injustices of governments and the negligence of the upper classes, and trying to forge a transnational people’s movement
(C) railed against the callousness and injustices of governments, the negligence of the upper classes, and tried to forge a transnational people’s movement
(D) railing against the callousness and injustices of governments and the negligence of the upper classes, and trying to forge a transnational people’s movement
(E) railing against the callousness and injustices of governments, the neglecting of the upper classes, and trying to forge a transnational people’s movement
Official Explanation:
(A) The activist has done two things that need to be made parallel—
railed against the callousness and the negligence and tried to forge something. Hence, there needs to be an
and between
callousness and
negligence.
(B) The use of the infinitive
to rail after the comma is incorrect. Also,
to rail is not parallel
to trying.
(C) This construction tries to make three things parallel –
has spent, railed, and tried. This is obviously incorrect as the sentence does not try to convey this. Also, the
and is missing before
negligence.
(D) The correct answer.
(E) The
and is missing before
neglecting. Also, the use of
neglecting changes the meaning of the sentence by suggesting that the upper classes are being neglected.