krndatta
AndrewN Can you share your two cents on option D?
I understood your explanation for option C.
A is more concise and straightforward than C.
Option E changes the meaning because the number of women are growing, and not the women themselves.
Option B has subject verb disagreement.
Option D I am not able to get.
The number is considered singular and a number is considered plural. Am I right?
But what is the error in option D?
Please share your reasoning.
Hello,
krndatta. It appears as though the first half of your query has been addressed by a non-Andrew, so I will let that matter be. As for answer choice (D), it uses what I generically refer to as
filler words to convey a similar meaning as a more concise iteration of the sentence. Filler words often include more conversational elements, and in verb form, these words are the three most commonly used in the English language:
- To be
- To have
- To do/to make
This is not to say that you should strike or disfavor any sentence in which you see these verbs—they are the most common for a reason, after all—just that you should be cautious when you see them. Ask yourself whether they are necessary to express the
vital meaning of the sentence. To illustrate, compare answer choices (A) and (D) side by side:
Quote:
According to a recent study by Rutgers University,
the number of women in state legislatures has grown in every election since 1968.
(A) the number of women in state legislatures has grown
(D) a growing number of women have been in state legislatures
Note the common elements and remove them from consideration. Focus on what remains to separate the two:
1)
The/a—Both are articles that can introduce the noun
number. This consideration is a wash.
2)
has grown/growing + have been—This is an interesting one. The former is a verb, while the latter, specifically
growing, is an adjective. On its own, the part of speech does not mean much, but look at what happens when we reach the latter half of the sentence. This
been appears out of nowhere, and it achieves little in the way of clarity that the earlier verb form in (A) lacked. If we use "N" as a substitute for
number of women and "I" as a substitute for
in state legislatures, look at the difference:
(A) The N I has grown
(D) a growing N have been I
I doubt anyone would make a case that (D) is as direct and clear as (A), and that is ultimately what allows us to disfavor (D). So, is there an
error? Not really. If you insert answer choice (D) into the shell of the sentence, that sentence is functional. It is just that the original sentence does a better job of conveying the same
vital meaning that a certain number has grown since 1968. Watch those "filler" words. They may just be taking up space.
Thank you for thinking to ask.
- Andrew