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After taking a new approach with its application essay questions last year and moving away from its previously rather traditional focus, the Saïd Business School at the University of Oxford has elected to maintain its newer prompts for this season. The program probes into applicants’ perception of the world with its first essay question, which asks candidates about a surprising trend and how it might be altered. And its second required essay gives applicants an essentially open invitation to share whatever additional information they believe the admissions committee should have in evaluating them, though they have only 300 words in which to do so. Our more detailed analysis of Oxford Saïd’s essay prompts follows.

Essay #1: Consider a statistic or trend that shocks you. Why it is important to you and how could it be changed for the better? (Maximum 500 words)

Few could argue that the news and social media outlets today are void of eye-opening and often surprising events, ideas, information, practices, and fashions. We are sure that at least a few things have struck a chord with you and caught your eye in recent months. The school’s use of the word “shock” here and its subsequent request for possible ways of “chang[ing] things for the better” imply to us that the admissions committee expects to hear about something you view as a negative within this context, something in need of improvement. On the Welcome page of its website, Saïd says, “We aim to provide the world’s future business leaders with the skills, knowledge and personal qualities needed to meet the world-scale challenges of the 21st century,” a statement with which this essay question clearly resonates. The school wants candidates it can equip with the tools necessary to make the world a better place, and this is your opportunity to frame yourself as such.

That said, if the issue that resounds with you most strongly is actually a positive one, with some careful finessing, you should be able to still use it as your topic for this essay. For example, perhaps you are pleasantly surprised to know that childhood obesity rates have fallen. In this case, you would need to approach the “how could it be changed for the better” portion of Saïd’s prompt by explaining how this trend could be encouraged and continued, perhaps by incorporating new initiatives in elementary schools or rethinking marketing tie-ins between products perceived as unhealthy and movies aimed at young audiences. As long as your choices and ideas are authentic to you and speak to the concept of improving the world as a whole, you will likely be on a successful track.

A successful essay response will of course address all three components of this prompt—the shocking statistic/trend, why it matters to you, and your thoughts on how to rectify the situation—but the 500-word limit does not provide a massive amount of space in which to accomplish this, so you need to be clear and concise. One of your goals here is to show the school your values and passion, what motivates you and why. The nature of topic you choose will do this in part, but you must also respond directly to the portion of the query that asks why your chosen issue is significant to you personally.

You will likely not be able to present a guaranteed solution to the issue you have chosen in your essay, and especially not within a few hundred words. However, you must demonstrate that you are a problem solver at heart. You want the admissions committee to understand that when you encounter something amiss, you do not just see it but instinctively try to figure out some way of addressing it. Show that you have the spirit of a doer. Tying your ability to execute your projected solution to a skill you would learn or an experience you would have in the Saïd MBA program—if truly appropriate and not forced—could make your response even more compelling.

Essay #2: Is there anything not covered in the application form which you would like the Admissions Committee to know about you? (Maximum 250 words)

If you are not paying close attention as you read through Oxford Saïd’s application information (though of course, you are, right?), you might accidentally dismiss this question as a standard optional essay prompt. This is certainly almost verbatim what we have seen from other schools as an add-on essay invitation, but in this case, an essay is required, so this is not a mistake you want to make. Perhaps Saïd is hoping to check candidates’ attention to detail with this query?

If you have a problem or issue in your candidacy, this would be the right place to address it, given that the school does not offer a typical, separate optional essay opportunity with which to do so. However, this is an essay that allapplicants must submit, so if your profile is free of questionable components, you must still provide some key additional information here for the school to use in deciding whether to include you in its next incoming class. You will therefore need to determine what is most important for the admissions committee to know to evaluate you thoroughly and fairly, whether that is the story behind a seemingly unfavorable or deleterious part of your application or whether it is one about a significant learning experience or impressive accomplishment (or something else altogether). As always, take time to consider everything the admissions committee will already be able to learn about you from the other parts of your application, from your statistics and resume to your recommenders’ contributions. The goal here is to round out that information in a positive way that pushes your candidacy forward in the direction of acceptance.

Even though this piece is not optional, we still recommend downloading a free copy of our mbaMission Optional Essays Guide. It might help you in determining whether you need to write this essay on a problem area/issue or not (or perhaps which one, if your candidacy somehow includes multiple questionable elements), and if so, the advice and many examples within will direct you in how to do so most effectively.

If you are applying under the 1+1 scheme you also need to submit the following essay:

Explain why you see this as particularly beneficial for you and how it fits with your careers and personal development aims (Maximum 250 words)

For this essay, Saïd provides a very straightforward prompt. Oxford has created an innovative two-year program through which you can earn two master’s degrees simultaneously. But the school has a simple request first—explain why you want/need that non-MBA master’s degree. If you hope to participate in this program, you will need to help the school understand exactly why and how it will affect your career. With a mere 250 words in which to detail precisely how this particular program will contribute to your management education and where you will apply that learning, you have no room to be vague. You must clearly demonstrate a cause-and-effect relationship between the dual-degree program and the achievement of your goals. Your underlying message needs to be readily comprehensible: “I will complete X degree, which will benefit me by manifesting in Y part of my career.”

Re-applicants will need to complete the essays mentioned above and another essay on the topic: What improvements have you made in your candidacy since you last applied to the Oxford MBA? (Maximum 250 words)

Whether you have improved your academic record, received a promotion, begun a new and exciting project, increased your community involvement, or accepted some sort of personal challenge, the key to success with this essay is conveying a very deliberate path of achievement. Saïd wants to know that you have been actively striving to improve yourself and your profile, and that you have seized opportunities during the previous year to do so, because a Saïd MBA is vital to you. The responses to this essay question will vary greatly from one candidate to the next, because each person’s needs and experiences differ. We are more than happy to provide one-on-one assistance with this highly personal essay to ensure that your efforts over the past year are presented in the best light possible.
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The highly ranked one-year Oxford Said MBA program exposes students to an international, diverse network at a world class institution. Correspondingly, Oxford seeks engaged students and mature leaders with extensive work experience.

Upon visiting Oxford or researching the school by reading student blogs, you’ll notice that there is a strong culture of improving the world through business. In fact, this emphasis on making the world a better place comes through clearly in this set of essays and is a core motivator for a successful applicant. Note that you can describe your career goals in a short answer section within the application.
REQUIRED ESSAY 1
Consider a statistic or trend that shocks you. Why it is important to you and how could it be changed for the better? (Maximum 500 words)

Dean Peter Tufano’s welcome on the Oxford Said website clearly states that, “we believe that business can play an integral part to address the systemic issues that will alter the future for generations to come: planetary threats; rising inequality; the mismatch of education, skills and employment opportunities; and growing nationalism and challenges to the institutions of democracy.”

In particular, this question seeks to understand what you view as the systematic issues that drive you personally, so ask yourself: What societal problems do you want to solve in your career and life? Perhaps you have a social enterprise career goal and will address poverty or education. Maybe you plan to volunteer and raise money for an important cause in your spare time.

Most importantly, whether your goal is personal or professional, you should show that you’re passionate about improving the world and that you have a specific concern about systematic issues.

To the extent your career goal is related to the statistic or trend that shocks you, this essay is a great place to explore that connection. However, if there’s no obvious connection, you can devote all of your space in this essay to discussing other ways in which you will change the world for the better.
REQUIRED ESSAY 2
Is there anything not covered in the application form which you would like the Admissions Committee to know about you? (Maximum 250 words)

Finally, if you need to explain anything challenging in your background, you can do so in this entirely open-ended essay. Above all, issues such as a low GPA or GMAT, resume gaps, issues with recommenders, or issues with your undergraduate record are areas you will need to explain here.

Likewise, if you need to address a challenge, use this essay to explain the situation and how you have improved and developed as a person. Ideally, you can show improvement to any challenging aspect of your application and demonstrate that any issues are behind you.

In short, if you feel comfortable with your application and have nothing to clarify, use this essay to further emphasize your career goals, add information about your international experience, or highlight your diverse background to enhance the admissions committee understanding of your candidacy. Remember, Oxford is looking for maturity, leadership and diversity in applicants and use this opportunity to shine.

 

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ImageSaid Business School at the University of Oxford has published the following mandatory essays within the 2018-2019 Oxford MBA application.
Required Essay 1
  • Consider a statistic or trend that shocks you. Why it is important to you and how could it be changed for the better? (Maximum 500 words)
Required Essay 2
  • Is there anything not covered in the application form which you would like the Admissions Committee to know about you? (Maximum 250 words)

For additional information on applying, please visit the Oxford MBA admissions website.
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The Oxford MBA program at Said Business School has posted the following MBA application deadlines for the 2018-2019 admissions season.
Stage 1
Application due: September 7, 2018
Decision released: October 19, 2018
Stage 2
Application due: November 2, 2018
Decision released: December 14, 2018
Stage 3
Application due: January 11, 2019
Decision released: March 22, 2019
Stage 4
Application due: April 5, 2019
Decision released: June 7, 2019

Final decisions will be emailed to all candidates on the final decision deadline of the stage in which you have applied. For more information, please visit the Oxford MBA admissions website.
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