GraceSCKao wrote:
The two options have other splits, such as "excepted" vs "apart from," as well as "departure" vs "depart." But because I cannot determine which is better, I choose not to discuss them in this post. If experts you have some insights to these splits, I would also be happy to know.
Appreciate your time and thoughts.
Thank you for helping me learn.
Hello,
GraceSCKao. I am satisfied with the response
avigutman provided to your numbered queries. I thought I would take the opportunity to address these other points you brought up at the end of your post, because believe it or not, I used just those differences to arrive at my answer (in 24 seconds... and I am guessing that this question is from one of the paid Practice Exams, since these are the only official questions I have not touched in my own practice—I thought it would be okay to spoil an easier one).
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Few of the corporate contributions to the earthquake relief fund, aside from Pterocom, were a sigificant difference from the usual amounts given by large companies for major international disasters.
(A) aside from Pterocom, were a significant difference from the usual amounts
(B) Pterocom's excepted, were a substantial departure from the usual amount of those
(C) Pterocom excepted, broke the usual mold of those
(D) notwithstanding Pterocom, veered much from the usual levels
(E) apart from Pterocom's, departed significantly from the usual amounts
As you said yourself, answer choices (A), (C), and (D) all name the corporation rather than referring correctly to the earlier
corporate contributions, in which
corporate serves as an adjective. We do not need to concern ourselves with the quirks of any of these options. (
Broke the usual mold as a one-off has to be one of the stranger considerations I have seen centering on tone. Is it too casual? And in (D),
notwithstanding goes in the opposite direction, as though we are reading a legal document. Again, we do not need to get bogged down in such detail when we find an easy target in
Pterocom. Phew!) So, how about we look at just (B) and (E), side by side?
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Few of the corporate contributions to the earthquake relief fund, aside from Pterocom, were a sigificant difference from the usual amounts given by large companies for major international disasters.
(B) Pterocom's excepted, were a substantial departure from the usual amount of those
(E) apart from Pterocom's, departed significantly from the usual amounts
You may have noticed that I marked
excepted in red above. Although such usage is more common in British English, I can think of a single use for the word in American English:
present company excepted, almost as a sarcastic remark. In a sentence such as the one we see above, I would put money on
except for every time. (Interestingly enough, certain other languages such as French bypass such specificity, using the same word, in this case
sauf, to mean any of
except for,
excepted, or, perhaps in a more antiquated sense,
save, depending on whatever the context dictates.) In terms of American English, I can only interpret
excepted in (B) as a poor substitute for
excluded. Even that word would be stretching the way Americans would typically express the thought. However, I understand if this usage eluded you.
We then have to consider why, in (B), a reference to the plural
contributions is followed up by the singular
a... departure. I know you asked about the plural
amounts in (E). Well, now it should make more sense:
contributions pairs well with
amounts, and in SC, such plural-plural matches are safer than their mismatched counterparts. Another nod to (E).
Finally, although I would not consider this a reason to make a hard elimination, active verbs tend to express the vital meaning of a sentence more clearly and concisely than noun phrases. Some people, even Experts, have touted the "V-A-N rule" on this forum (for verb-adjective-noun). I do not subscribe to such a so-called rule, but I do find that in many cases, the
tendency holds true. Compare the barebones sentence:
(B)
Few of the contributions were a substantial departure from the usual amount of [contributions] given...(E)
Few of the contributions departed significantly from the usual amounts given...Avi brought up a fine point about the meaning that (B) conveys. It is a little murky. Answer choice (E) leads to a single reasonable interpretation.
On balance, I have zero reasons to favor (B) and three to select (E) on just these few issues. I do not like to work hard for my answers, so I would select (E) and move on.
Thank you for thinking to ask me about the question.
- Andrew