Bunuel wrote:
The scale and complexity of a natural disaster, such as a hurricane or an earthquake,
greatly influence the length of time to assess associated losses.
A. greatly influence the length of time to assess associated
B. greatly influences the length of time required to assess associated
C. influences greatly the length of time to assess associated
D. influence greatly the length of time required to assess associated
E. greatly influence the length of time required to assess associated
Explanation Choice A: No. The colloquially acceptable phrase
length of time to assess lacks a logical word that would connect the two thoughts.
Choice B: No. The modifier
required appropriately connects the thoughts in the sentence, but the singular verb
influences does not match the compound subject
the scale and complexity of a natural disaster.
Choice C: No. The colloquially acceptable phrase
length of time to assess lacks logical word that would connect the two thoughts, moving the modifier
greatly changes the meaning of the sentence, and the singular verb
influences does not match the compound subject
the scale and complexity of a natural disaster.
Choice D: No. The modifier
required appropriately connects the thoughts in the sentence, but moving the modifier
greatly is not stylistically preferable to its placement in E. Do not place an adverb between a transitive verb (influences) and its direct object (the length of time).
Choice E: Yes. The modifier
required appropriately connects the thoughts in the sentence, and the plural verb
influence matches the compound subject
the scale and complexity of a natural disaster.
The correct answer is choice E.