Anandanwar wrote:
Hello,
Here is my doubt:
Choice C: its molecules prevented from evaporating by an insufficient level of KN...
(Essentially meaning: An insufficient level of KN prevented the evaporation of molecules)
'insufficient level of Kinetic energy' is essentially a 'level' (may be a number). How can 'level of KN' prevent something from happening?
Moreover it is a non living and non tangible thing. It cannot perform the action of preventing molecules from evaporating.
The molecules may be prevented from evaporating 'because of' the insufficient level of KN...
Choice D looked better to me.
Please explain where I am mistaken
Thanks and Regards!
Hello!
It's true that there are similar examples of what should be similarly illogical constructions proving correct. For instance:
The passage of the bill was blocked by a small number of assembly members.
Her depression was caused by low levels of serotonin.
Even though
number and
levels refer very literally to a quantity, the GMAT won't be a huge stickler on that point. That said, there's nothing wrong with
as a result of in answer (D), and to some degree it would help avoid this (minor, by GMAT standards) issue. However, while it may resolve that small potential problem, (D) introduces a more serious problem of its own:
prevented from being evaporated is problematic because it makes evaporation seem like a transitive process (something that can be done
to something else). Evaporation is generally intransitive (something that just happens). For instance, while I can say, "The water evaporated," it would be a bit more strange to say, "I evaporated the water."
And there's another problem: even if we
do accept that maybe molecules can
be evaporated by something else, it's very easy to read (D) as implying that the molecules
would have been evaporated as a result of the low level of kinetic energy but that this process was prevented in some way. To put it another way,
as a result of the low level of kinetic energy could be read as modifying
being evaporated rather than
prevented, which should be its logical target. That ambiguity of modification/meaning doesn't occur in (C), as (C) doesn't invoke the passive verbal
being evaporated, a construction that tends to look for a
by whom/what? answer.
Basically, while this question and answer (C) aren't perfect, in a head-to-head comparison, (C) still has less of a serious meaning issue than (D).
I hope that helps!