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Hi folks! Here’s a new SC question. Try your hand at applying the process to solve this one. We will post the complete solution after we see some of your responses. :-)

Pluto was discovered in 1930 and once considered the ninth planet in the solar system, losing its planetary status in 2006, which prompted the International Astronomical Union (IAU) to create a new definition for the term ‘planet’, and is now categorized as just one out of 70,000 icy objects in the Kuiper Belt measuring 100 kilometers across or more.

A. Once considered the ninth planet in the solar system, Pluto was discovered in 1930, lost its planetary status in 2006, which prompted the International Astronomical Union (IAU) to create a new definition for the term ‘planet’, and is now categorized as just one out of 70,000 icy objects in the Kuiper Belt measuring

B. Discovered in 1930 and once considered the ninth planet in the solar system, Pluto lost its planetary status in 2006, a development that prompted the International Astronomical Union (IAU) to create a new definition for the term ‘planet’, and is now categorized as just one out of 70,000 icy objects in the Kuiper Belt that measure

C. Discovered in 1930, Pluto, once considered the ninth planet in the solar system, lost its planetary status in 2006, a development prompting the International Astronomical Union (IAU) to create a new definition for the term ‘planet’, now categorized as just one out of 70,000 icy objects in the Kuiper Belt to measure

D. Pluto, discovered in 1930 and once considered the ninth planet in the solar system, lost its planetary status in 2006, a development that prompted the International Astronomical Union (IAU) to create a new definition for the term ‘planet’, is now categorized as just one out of 70,000 icy objects in the Kuiper Belt to measure

E. Discovered in 1930 and once considered the ninth planet in the solar system, Pluto lost its planetary status in 2006, prompted the International Astronomical Union (IAU) to create a new definition for the term ‘planet’, and is now categorized as just one out of 70,000 icy objects in the Kuiper Belt that measure


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Hello,

Option A does not match the underlined part, anyhow I picked A.
I thought that "BElT THAT MEASURE" is wrong, as that I think should refer back to Pluto

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Hello,

Option A does not match the underlined part, anyhow I picked A.
I thought that "BElT THAT MEASURE" is wrong, as that I think should refer back to Pluto

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Hi Kassim,

You are right. Thanks for bringing that to our notice. The underlined portion should have been the same as option A. We have now corrected this error.

However, option A is incorrect. 'That' can't refer to Pluto since Pluto is singular and the plural verb 'measure' does not agree with the singular subject. Would you like to present your analysis for the rest of the choices? We will provide the complete solution after we see some of your responses. :-)


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Originally posted by egmat on 12 Jun 2014, 05:55.
Last edited by egmat on 12 Jun 2014, 11:15, edited 1 time in total.
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A. Once considered the ninth planet in the solar system, Pluto was discovered in 1930, lost its planetary status in 2006,which prompted the International Astronomical Union (IAU) to create a new definition for the term ‘planet’, and is now categorized as just one out of 70,000 icy objects in the Kuiper Belt measuring which modifies the preceding noun

B. Discovered in 1930 and once considered the ninth planet in the solar system, Pluto lost its planetary status in 2006, a development that prompted the International Astronomical Union (IAU) to create a new definition for the term ‘planet’, and is now categorized as just one out of 70,000 icy objects in the Kuiper Belt that measure - looks fine; read next

C. Discovered in 1930, Pluto, once considered the ninth planet in the solar system, lost its planetary status in 2006, a development prompting the International Astronomical Union (IAU) to create a new definition for the term ‘planet’, now categorized as just one out of 70,000 icy objects in the Kuiper Belt to measure - unsure about the subject of the second clause

D. Pluto, discovered in 1930 and once considered the ninth planet in the solar system, lost its planetary status in 2006, a development that prompted the International Astronomical Union (IAU) to create a new definition for the term ‘planet’, is now categorized as just one out of 70,000 icy objects in the Kuiper Belt to measure - same as C - also missing conjunction

E. Discovered in 1930 and once considered the ninth planet in the solar system, Pluto lost its planetary status in 2006, prompted the International Astronomical Union (IAU) to create a new definition for the term ‘planet’, and is now categorized as just one out of 70,000 icy objects in the Kuiper Belt that measure - the development prompted
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Got it right but took a lot of time ( 2:21). need to seriously pick up speed :(
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Once considered the ninth planet in the solar system, Pluto was discovered in 1930, lost its planetary status in 2006, which prompted the International Astronomical Union (IAU) to create a new definition for the term ‘planet’, and is now categorized as just one out of 70,000 icy objects in the Kuiper Belt measuring 100 kilometers across or more.

A. Once considered the ninth planet in the solar system, Pluto was discovered in 1930, lost its planetary status in 2006, which prompted the International Astronomical Union (IAU) to create a new definition for the term ‘planet’, and is now categorized as just one out of 70,000 icy objects in the Kuiper Belt measuring - Incorrect use of which. We need something to refer to the event “lost its planetary status in 2006”. Also 'lost its planetary status in 2006' should be used with the subject and not used as a modifier.

B. Discovered in 1930 and once considered the ninth planet in the solar system, Pluto lost its planetary status in 2006, a development that prompted the International Astronomical Union (IAU) to create a new definition for the term ‘planet’, and is now categorized as just one out of 70,000 icy objects in the Kuiper Belt that measure - Correct.

C. Discovered in 1930, Pluto, once considered the ninth planet in the solar system, lost its planetary status in 2006, a development prompting the International Astronomical Union (IAU) to create a new definition for the term ‘planet’, now categorized as just one out of 70,000 icy objects in the Kuiper Belt to measure – Incorrect. Whats the subject and where is the verb?

D. Pluto, discovered in 1930 and once considered the ninth planet in the solar system, lost its planetary status in 2006, a development that prompted the International Astronomical Union (IAU) to create a new definition for the term ‘planet’, is now categorized as just one out of 70,000 icy objects in the Kuiper Belt to measure – Incorrect verbs are not connected properly. Need “and” to separate two verbs.

E. Discovered in 1930 and once considered the ninth planet in the solar system, Pluto lost its planetary status in 2006, prompted the International Astronomical Union (IAU) to create a new definition for the term ‘planet’, and is now categorized as just one out of 70,000 icy objects in the Kuiper Belt that measure – Incorrect. Verb-ed modifier prompted is not used correctly.
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Got it right but took a lot of time ( 2:21). need to seriously pick up speed :(


Do not worry :)

This kind of sentence are really tough so you almost never see such question if not in the upper level of the test, even if you pick it wrong doesnt's hurt your score so much.

Still it is good for practice. Me too the question takes a bit more than usual.

I think the key with this kind of question so nested and convoluted is to try to figure out a critical point on which you can choose (too bad if it is wrong, pick an answer and move one the next one)

Here is: " that measure " so B and E

Bur in E i do not see " a development that prompted" and this is essential for the meaning of the same. So B must be the right choice.

At a certain point, whenever you are lost go straight............

Hope this helps.
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A. Once considered the ninth planet in the solar system, Pluto was discovered in 1930, lost its planetary status in 2006, which prompted the International Astronomical Union (IAU) to create a new definition for the term ‘planet’, and is now categorized as just one out of 70,000 icy objects in the Kuiper Belt measuring which is wrongly modifying the planetary status. which i think is illogical (how can planetary status prompt iau to change the definition)

B. Discovered in 1930 and once considered the ninth planet in the solar system, Pluto lost its planetary status in 2006, a development that prompted the International Astronomical Union (IAU) to create a new definition for the term ‘planet’, and is now categorized as just one out of 70,000 icy objects in the Kuiper Belt that measure looks correct

C. Discovered in 1930, Pluto, once considered the ninth planet in the solar system, lost its planetary status in 2006, a development prompting the International Astronomical Union (IAU) to create a new definition for the term ‘planet’, now categorized as just one out of 70,000 icy objects in the Kuiper Belt to measurecategorized is wrongly modifying the noun definition

D. Pluto, discovered in 1930 and once considered the ninth planet in the solar system, lost its planetary status in 2006, a development that prompted the International Astronomical Union (IAU) to create a new definition for the term ‘planet’, is now categorized as just one out of 70,000 icy objects in the Kuiper Belt to measuresame error as that of option C

E. Discovered in 1930 and once considered the ninth planet in the solar system, Pluto lost its planetary status in 2006, prompted the International Astronomical Union (IAU) to create a new definition for the term ‘planet’, and is now categorized as just one out of 70,000 icy objects in the Kuiper Belt that measurehere prompted is wrongly modifying the planetary status
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My analysis of the sentence:

A. Once considered the ninth planet in the solar system, Pluto was discovered in 1930, lost its planetary status in 2006, which prompted the International Astronomical Union (IAU) to create a new definition for the term ‘planet’, and is now categorized as just one out of 70,000 icy objects in the Kuiper Belt measuring
wrong - "lost its planetary..." has no subject-verb pair. "which" should modify the nearest noun and in this case "which" seems to modify status. We need to emphasize on the description of Kuiper Belt so a clause is required to modify the noun.

B. Discovered in 1930 and once considered the ninth planet in the solar system, Pluto lost its planetary status in 2006, a development that prompted the International Astronomical Union (IAU) to create a new definition for the term ‘planet’, and is now categorized as just one out of 70,000 icy objects in the Kuiper Belt that measure
correct - modifiers are placed correctly.


C. Discovered in 1930, Pluto, once considered the ninth planet in the solar system, lost its planetary status in 2006, a development prompting the International Astronomical Union (IAU) to create a new definition for the term ‘planet’, now categorized as just one out of 70,000 icy objects in the Kuiper Belt to measure
incorrect- incorrect placement of modifiers. The intended meaning is distorted.


D. Pluto, discovered in 1930 and once considered the ninth planet in the solar system, lost its planetary status in 2006, a development that prompted the International Astronomical Union (IAU) to create a new definition for the term ‘planet’, is now categorized as just one out of 70,000 icy objects in the Kuiper Belt to measure
incorrect - intended meaning is distorted. modifiers are not placed correctly.

E. Discovered in 1930 and once considered the ninth planet in the solar system, Pluto lost its planetary status in 2006, prompted the International Astronomical Union (IAU) to create a new definition for the term ‘planet’, and is now categorized as just one out of 70,000 icy objects in the Kuiper Belt that measure
incorrect - distorted meaning. It seems that Pluto prompted the IAU to create new definition. Instead the intended meaning is that Pluto lost its status and this development prompted the IAU to create a new definition.

Please correct me if I am wrong.
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For me, the testing point was "...that measure", so C and D were out. In A, "measuring" is a modifier but it is not clear what it was modifying (the Kuiper belt or the icy objects), so A is Out.

Between B & E, E is out because of it's distorted meaning where it suggests that Pluto is prompting the IAU. so by POE, B is the answer.
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I was shuttling between A & B and then chose A following the below reasoning :

@e-gmat

Wouldnt the clauses in bold act as independent clauses joined by comma and not by FANBOYS/other conjunction option? Considering this as an error, I opted A.

Discovered in 1930 and once considered the ninth planet in the solar system, Pluto lost its planetary status in 2006, a development that prompted the International Astronomical Union (IAU) to create a new definition for the term ‘planet’, and is now categorized as just one out of 70,000 icy objects in the Kuiper Belt that measure
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I was shuttling between A & B and then chose A following the below reasoning :

@e-gmat

Wouldnt the clauses in bold act as independent clauses joined by comma and not by FANBOYS/other conjunction option? Considering this as an error, I opted A.

Discovered in 1930 and once considered the ninth planet in the solar system, Pluto lost its planetary status in 2006, a development that prompted the International Astronomical Union (IAU) to create a new definition for the term ‘planet’, and is now categorized as just one out of 70,000 icy objects in the Kuiper Belt that measure


Option B is correct. It uses an Absolute Phrase. The construction of an absolute phrase is as follows:
NOUN + NOUN MODIFIER.

Here, the absolute phrase is: a development that prompted the International Astronomical Union (IAU) to create a new definition for the term ‘planet’
noun: a development
modifier: that prompted the International Astronomical Union (IAU) to create a new definition for the term ‘planet’

The main subject of the sentence is "Pluto" and it has two parallel main verbs "lost" and "is".

The basic structure of the sentence is:

Pluto lost its status and is now categorized.

Within this main structure a non-essential modifier (Absolute phrase) is inserted and hence separated by comma.

Pluto lost its status, a development that ........ 'planet', and is now categorized.

The comma after 'planet' does not indicate end of a main clause but end of an absolute phrase. Therefore a new main clause is not required after 'planet'.
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Wouldnt the clauses in bold act as independent clauses joined by comma and not by FANBOYS/other conjunction option? Considering this as an error, I opted A.

Discovered in 1930 and once considered the ninth planet in the solar system, Pluto lost its planetary status in 2006, a development that prompted the International Astronomical Union (IAU) to create a new definition for the term ‘planet’, and is now categorized as just one out of 70,000 icy objects in the Kuiper Belt that measure

Hi Aditi, following is not an independent clause:

a development that prompted the International Astronomical Union (IAU) to create a new definition for the term ‘planet’

In fact, it is not a clause at all. The structure of this portion is: Phrase (a development) + a Dependent clause (that prompted the International Astronomical Union (IAU) to create a new definition for the term ‘planet’). Grammatically, such structures always function as phrases.

As sayantanc2k has mentioned in the post above, this portion is an Absolute Phrase. A good understanding of Absolute Phrases is important for SC. Our book EducationAisle Sentence Correction Nirvana discusses Absolute Phrases, their application and examples in significant detail. If someone is interested, PM me your email-id, I can mail the corresponding section.
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Hi folks! Here’s a new SC question. Try your hand at applying the process to solve this one. We will post the complete solution after we see some of your responses. :-)

Once considered the ninth planet in the solar system, Pluto was discovered in 1930, lost its planetary status in 2006, which prompted the International Astronomical Union (IAU) to create a new definition for the term ‘planet’, and is now categorized as just one out of 70,000 icy objects in the Kuiper Belt measuring 100 kilometers across or more.

A. Once considered the ninth planet in the solar system, Pluto was discovered in 1930, lost its planetary status in 2006, which prompted the International Astronomical Union (IAU) to create a new definition for the term ‘planet’, and is now categorized as just one out of 70,000 icy objects in the Kuiper Belt measuring

B. Discovered in 1930 and once considered the ninth planet in the solar system, Pluto lost its planetary status in 2006, a development that prompted the International Astronomical Union (IAU) to create a new definition for the term ‘planet’, and is now categorized as just one out of 70,000 icy objects in the Kuiper Belt that measure

C. Discovered in 1930, Pluto, once considered the ninth planet in the solar system, lost its planetary status in 2006, a development prompting the International Astronomical Union (IAU) to create a new definition for the term ‘planet’, now categorized as just one out of 70,000 icy objects in the Kuiper Belt to measure

D. Pluto, discovered in 1930 and once considered the ninth planet in the solar system, lost its planetary status in 2006, a development that prompted the International Astronomical Union (IAU) to create a new definition for the term ‘planet’, is now categorized as just one out of 70,000 icy objects in the Kuiper Belt to measure

E. Discovered in 1930 and once considered the ninth planet in the solar system, Pluto lost its planetary status in 2006, prompted the International Astronomical Union (IAU) to create a new definition for the term ‘planet’, and is now categorized as just one out of 70,000 icy objects in the Kuiper Belt that measure


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Lengthy one but reading the whole sentence is a must to grasp the entire meaning.
The first thing i noticed was the last word 'measure'. We have 'to measure' , 'that measure' and 'measuring' to chose from. Clearly 'to measure' is wrong. Pluto is not in kuiper belt for the purpose of measuring 100 km thus C and D are eliminated.

In choice A 'pluto was discovered...' is not the main clause, pluto losing the title is . The discovery of pluto must be written as a modifier and B, E are doing a great job there.

Now that we are left with two choices only, we can spend time to read the whole sentence to see which one makes sense in terms of meaning and grammar. 'prompted' in E is wrong since it is referring back to pluto instead of 'losing the status'. Prompted should have been prompting but B actually makes the effort of putting a correct reference in the sentence itself, which is absolutely fine. This process takes around 90 secs for a trained mind.
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Great question to test the placement of modifiers in lengthy sentences. E-gmat always comes up with great stuff.
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What if the sentence ended as Kuiper belt that "measures" ? I was scanning through the answer choices to find one, ended up marking B because all others were more flawed. If presented with just one distinction of measure vs measures, which would be right?
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How is categorized serving as a verb here and not a verb-ed modifier?

I mean pluto is not the doer of the verb categorizing rather it is the object that is being categorized.
Can you clear my doubt?
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