SajjadAhmad wrote:
South Korea and Japan, which have the two most robust capitalist economies in northeastern Asia, have clawed their way back from the brink of financial ruin and now they take an active role in the success of both companies that are newer and smaller as well as larger conglomerates.
A. now they take an active role in the success of both companies that are newer and smaller as well as
B. now take an active role in the success both of newer, smaller companies as well as that of [parallelism, too: both is improperly placed]
C. they take an active role now in the success both of newer, smaller companies, as well as those of
D. take an active role now in the successes of both companies that are newer and smaller as well as those of
E. take an active role now in both the success of newer, smaller companies as well as [that of]
Rakeshtewatia wrote:
Anyone please confirm about ....presence of "both ....and" in the sentence.
Also in "D" if instead of successes we have "success" dr than it would be correct or not?
globaldesi jorgetomas9 ,
thangvietnam ,
Ritwick91 and
RakeshtewatiaBoth X as well as Y is unidiomatic.See, for example,
Official Guide 2018 SC #681,
which you can find hereThat unidiomatic expression shows up in every single answer.
I tried to work with what was left.
None of the answer choices is correct.B is not parallel.
SajjadAhmad , this question just does not work.
Both . . . . as well as is wrong.
Split #1:A and C incorrectly insert THEY into a compound predicate
(compound predicate means that the sentence contains
compound verbs = two or more verbs that point to one subject)
If we have a compound predicate?
We do not use a comma. AND we do not repeat the subject in the second predicate.
We should not insert a pronoun in the second predicate.
Correct: Anne and Kim walked to the gym and worked out for an hour.
Wrong: Anne and Kim walked to the gym and they worked out for an hour.
Eliminate A and C
Split #2: confusionIn option D, does BOTH mean that there are TWO smaller, new companies?
Or does BOTH refer to smaller, newer companies AND large conglomerates.
Eliminate D
Split #3: lack of parallelismB incorrectly puts SUCCESS before BOTH
No parallelism in BSouth Korea and Japan . . . now take an active role in the
success both of newer, smaller companies as well as
that ofParallelism?
ACTIVE ROLE IN:
the successBOTH
of smaller, newer companies
AS WELL AS
that oflarge conglomerates
IN the
success BOTH of X as well as [
that of] Y?
No.
Not parallel.
BOTH ruins the parallelism.
I think that this OE is wrong.
See the correct sentence in green typeface, below.Lack of parallelism in EE. role now in
both the success of newer, smaller companies
as well as [
that ofrole now in
BOTH
the success of newer, smaller companies
AS WELL AS
larger conglomerates
What happened to
the success of?
Option E needs to include THAT OF as indicated.
Not parallel.
Conclusion: no answer is correct.
We do have a takeaway:
BOTH and AS WELL AS should not be in the same sentence.Finding SC questions to post is incredibly difficult.I would know.
I and two colleagues just posted 288 SC questions in Project SC Butler,
here Occasionally we will find a poor quality example.
This phrasing is parallel:
South Korea and Japan . . . now take an active role BOTH in the success of newer, smaller companies and in THAT OF larger conglomerates.South Korea and Japan . . . now take an active role in the success of newer, smaller companies AS WELL AS in THAT OF larger conglomerates. [no BOTH]
No such option exists. I am going to archive this question.
All, I hope that analysis helps.