Aashi127 wrote:
Can you please describe why option A can’t be the answer???
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Hello,
Aashi127 and others. In the interest of helping the community, I will provide a full analysis of the answer choices below.
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The key to this question, as often proves the case in tougher SC questions, is to focus on meaning. The first three words provide a frame:
two seismic shocks. The rest of the sentence needs to deliver on this setup. Ask yourself,
What are these two shocks? The first is easy enough:
the terrorist attacks. We expect to encounter the second after
and. Instead, we get
commencing. But the beginning of a chain reaction may not be the same as the reaction in its entirety—our second shock—and that proves to be the case here. The second
seismic shock is
the global financial crisis, and we understand the
commencing phrase to be modifying that crisis:
the collapse of Lehman Brothers in some way
led to the global financial crisis.
Choice (A) contains parallel
which clauses that correctly reach back to the subject before the comma,
the terrorist attacks and
the global financial crisis, respectively. About the only questionable aspect of the original sentence is the lack of a comma after
and. The barebones version of our sentence would be the following:
Two seismic shocks affected the entire world—the terrorist attacks and, commencing with the collapse of Lehman Brothers, the global financial crisis.The comma would make it clear that the
commencing phrase was NOT the second seismic shock, and clarity of meaning is always a plus. This peccadillo aside, I see nothing to gripe about in (A).
(B) loses sight of the dual seismic shocks and opts for a list instead, a list that contains, well, more than two items: terrorist attacks, long-drawn wars, commencement of the collapse of Lehman Brothers, and, finally, the global financial crisis. The sentence breaks down altogether, and the answer ought to be easy to eliminate.
(C) appears to create a parallel consequence of
the terrorist attacks by way of the phrase modifier. Apparently, the attacks both led to wars and started with the collapse of Lehman Brothers. That makes no sense. Furthermore, with the
and already taken, we have no grammatical way to join our two seismic shocks with what remains. We get
the terrorist attacks, [modifier], the global financial crisis. We do not even need to consider whether
leading to on its own is justifiable. The pieces
together do not fit.
(D) creates the opposite of what we just saw, a run-on sentence with multiple instances of
and without a comma. Now, the terrorist attacks led to wars, commenced the collapse of Lehman Brothers, and
which raised questions. Hmm... something is definitely off. The first
which has been deleted, so why does the second remain? And where is our second seismic shock? The sentence is not at all clear and should be another easy elimination.
(E) also lacks the vital
and to join the two seismic shocks. The sentence places one right after the other in an unclear manner. Also, the modifying phrase appears to be reaching back to
the long-drawn wars of the previous clause, and I am pretty sure the sentence does not mean to convey that the wars started with the collapse of a business. (E), then, is gone.
There you have it. Of the five answer choices, only the original sentence can work. I hope this analysis may prove useful to others. As always, good luck with your studies.
- Andrew
Please explain what is the role of commencing in Option A/ is it verb or modifier how it is parallel to the sentence?