ritumaheshwari02
Although many people assume that excessive use of the saltshaker fully accounts for the overly salt-rich diet of the United States, the fact is that
about 77 percent of the salt, even with Americans who sprinkle liberally, comes from processed foods such as lunch meats, commercial soups, packaged cakes, and potato chips.
A. about 77 percent of the salt, even with Americans who sprinkle liberally, comes
The addition of several commas distorts the meaning and makes it akward
B. about 77 percent of the intake of salt even on the part of Americans who sprinkle liberally will come
will addition at the end , even on the part of Americans are all wordy and makes the meaning completely akward
C. even Americans who sprinkle liberally derive about 77 percent of their salt
The meaning is perfect and it's consice let us hang on to it
D. even Americans sprinkling liberally should derive about 77 percent of their salt
should addition is akward and distorts the meaning therefore out
E. even sprinkling liberally, about 77 percent of the American intake of salt comes
it should be Americans intake and not the country itself that's taking the intake
Therefore IMO C