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The original sentence contains a subject-verb problem: "the spectacular rise and fall of Napoleon" is a plural noun, but the corresponding verb "was" is singular. Moreover, "having been created" is unnecessarily complex. "Created by" would have been sufficient. Finally, it is not the "toppled monarchy" that created the vacuum but rather the fact that the monarchy was toppled.
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I am really confused here, and this discussion is making everything more blurry.

Can anyone please help here. My doubt is:

first it is rise then it is fall. it cant be one even , it have to be two events. if you say A and b it sounds plural. so subject is plural. 'were' is needed.

'created by' is correct idiom. so probably E, still not sure.
lets see the meaning of both parts.
toppled monarchy created the vacuum or toppling of the monarchy created the vacuum.
Not sure here E seems better though. some one please help.
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The correct answer is E. The original sentence contains a subject-verb problem: "the spectacular rise and fall of Napoleon" is a plural noun, but the corresponding verb "was" is singular. Moreover, "having been created" is unnecessarily complex. "Created by" would have been sufficient. Finally, it is not the "toppled monarchy" that created the vacuum but rather the fact that the monarchy was toppled. Choice A repeats the original sentence. Incorrect. Choice B does not correct the subject-verb problem. Incorrect. Choice C corrects the subject-verb problem but not the "toppled monarchy" issue. Incorrect. Choice D does not correct the subject-verb issue. Incorrect. Choice E corrects all the problems without creating any new ones. Correct.
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"Rise and Fall" is a compound subject and hence requires a plural verb.
So, it's C vs E

C. were the necessary outcome of the political vacuum that the toppled monarchy created:
that the toppled monarchy created changes the meaning by implying that toppled monarchy is the doer of the action- rise and fall of Napoleon.

E. were the necessary outcome of the political vacuum created by the toppling of the monarchy:
created by the toppling of the monarchy is the correct version as the toppling of monarchy is the cause that led to the rise and fall of Napoleon in the decades after the French Revolution.
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"Rise and Fall" is a compound subject and hence requires a plural verb.
So, it's C vs E

C. were the necessary outcome of the political vacuum that the toppled monarchy created:
that the toppled monarchy created changes the meaning by implying that toppled monarchy is the doer of the action- rise and fall of Napoleon.

E. were the necessary outcome of the political vacuum created by the toppling of the monarchy:
created by the toppling of the monarchy is the correct version as the toppling of monarchy is the cause that led to the rise and fall of Napoleon in the decades after the French Revolution.



You are correct rise and fall is a compound subject, But rise and fall is a compound which happen together , Like winning and loosing is a part of game: We don't say ARE part of game. By this idea, Rise and fall should be singular . If subject is joined by AND, and are two different things, like her mother and sister : we can use plural, But why here ?
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Can anybody clarify why the sentence formed as "were outcome" not as "were outcomes"?
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OFFICIAL EXPLANATION

The correct answer is E. The original sentence contains a subject-verb problem: "the spectacular rise and fall of Napoleon" is a plural noun, but the corresponding verb "was" is singular. Moreover, "having been created" is unnecessarily complex. "Created by" would have been sufficient. Finally, it is not the "toppled monarchy" that created the vacuum but rather the fact that the monarchy was toppled. Choice A repeats the original sentence. Incorrect. Choice B does not correct the subject-verb problem. Incorrect. Choice C corrects the subject-verb problem but not the "toppled monarchy" issue. Incorrect. Choice D does not correct the subject-verb issue. Incorrect. Choice E corrects all the problems without creating any new ones. Correct.


Kindly let us know why it is " were become" not 'were becomes"?
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You mean outcome and outcomes I suppose rather than become and becomes.
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Rise and fall need not go together always. There are so many instances of only a rise but not a fall. Alexander the great, never lost a war in his life time and remained the emperor of Greek and Persia until his very death. Can any one say describe anything as the rise and fall of the US. This compounding is appropriate only when the factors happen to belong to one and the same person as in for example, the director and the producer Spielberg or the producer and the actor Raj Kapoor.
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Is "the toppling of the monarchy" right? Please help.
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Is "the toppling of the monarchy" right? Please help.
Hi Im279,

The toppling of the monarchy is fine. Do you have a specific doubt about that phrase?
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Rise and fall need not go together always. There are so many instances of only a rise but not a fall. Alexander the great, never lost a war in his life time and remained the emperor of Greek and Persia until his very death. Can any one say describe anything as the rise and fall of the US. This compounding is appropriate only when the factors happen to belong to one and the same person as in for example, the director and the producer Spielberg or the producer and the actor Raj Kapoor.


can you please explain a bit more , when to consider a compound subject separated by and as singular and in which cases to be considered as plural.
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the director and the producer Spielberg , since both of the items are describing Spielberg we will consider singular ?
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yes; in all other cases, it should be plural, because they literally refer to two different entities. The notable exception to this is the idiomatic use of 'bread and butter', which is considered singular and refers to one's means of income rather than to the type of staple foods it mentions.
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Is "the toppling of the monarchy" right? Please help.
Hi Im279,

The toppling of the monarchy is fine. Do you have a specific doubt about that phrase?


Thank you!

I am a little confused about the use of "toppling" as a verb in the sentence.

As far as I understand an "-ing verb" can act as a verb, noun, or an adjective, but it can not be taken as a verb if it is not preceded by a linking verb. Please help me understand in what all circumstances an "-ing verb" can be taken as a verb. Any link will also do.
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Thank you!

I am a little confused about the use of "toppling" as a verb in the sentence.

As far as I understand an "-ing verb" can act as a verb, noun, or an adjective, but it can not be taken as a verb if it is not preceded by a linking verb. Please help me understand in what all circumstances an "-ing verb" can be taken as a verb. Any link will also do.
Hi Im279,

Toppling is not a verb or part of a verb (here). One easy way to check for this is to take the the into account. After a the, we will (eventually) get a noun or something acting as a noun.
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isnt, necessary outcomes ( plural form) required?
rise and fall were necessary outcomes....

Exactly the reason why I chose B to E. :/
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Since the sentence is saying that.. Scientists have long debated wether... can we take this as Subjunctive, hence the use of 'were' ?
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