**I address the difference between B and D more thoroughly in this post, here
I address (C) more thoroughly hereTHE PROMPTUnlike regulators in Europe who aim to prevent airlines from building monopoly positions at European airports, in America there are no such endeavors, as evidenced by the fact that at 40 of America’s 100 biggest airports, a single airline accounts for more than half the capacity of the airport.
THE ANSWER CHOICESQuote:
A. Unlike regulators in Europe who
•
Unlike in a comparison must compare two nouns that are parallel
•
in America is a prepositional phrase, not a noun
• Wrong comparison:
regulators are compared to
in America• The
who in this option is not problematic because the preposition
unlike needs to be followed only by a noun, not by a clause (compare to C)
Quote:
B. Whereas in Europe regulators
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Whereas is a conjunction that usually does no more than contrast two things—in other words,
whereas does not suggest that the contrast is surprising.
• This sentence contrasts what Europe and America do in situation ABC. What each does is simply different and not surprisingly so. (Compare to
although in option D)
• the two items compared are parallel:
in Europe and
in America.
Quote:
C. Whereas European regulators who
• Wrong comparison:
European regulators are compared to
in America• The
who leaves a fragment.
Whereas is a subordinating conjunction that must be followed by a clause containing a subject and a verb
Whereas European regulators who do X, in America there are no such endeavors as X
-- that red part is not a clause with a subject and a verb.
No verb exists for
European regulators. The who-clause "eats" the only verb.
Quote:
D. Although in Europe regulators
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Although is slightly different from
whereas.
--
Although suggests that the contrast is surprising.
--
Whereas merely highlights a contrast without suggesting surprise.
-- In Europe, efforts are made to prevent airplane monopoly positions. In America, no such efforts are made.
That difference is not inherently a surprise.
Whereas is better than
although.
Quote:
E. Even though European regulators
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Even though is a slightly less formal version of
although.
Same problem as that in D. (Even though suggests contrast that is surprising. The sentence suggests
just difference, not surprising difference.)
• Wrong comparison:
European regulators are compared to
in America******
In options A, C, and E, we first hear about
regulators or
European regulators.
Strip this sentence to figure out what the heck is being compared.
Unlike regulators in Europe who [try to stop problem XYZ] aim to prevent airlines from building monopoly positions at European airports,
in America there are no such endeavors [attempts to stop problem XYZ],
as evidenced by the fact that at 40 of America’s 100 biggest airports, a single airline accounts for more than half the capacity of the airport. The sentence, stripped:
Unlike regulators in Europe who try to stop problem XYZ,
in America there are no attempts to stop problem XYZ.
Unlike X, YAs
Arro44 notes, in a comparison, X and Y must be the
same kind of thing.
A regulator is a
person. in America is a
prepositional phrase (PREPOSITION + place)
In A, C, and E, the introductory phrases lead with a noun
X = people
Y = IN a place
Right after the X element ends with a comma, we have the Y element
That Y element,
in America, is in the non-underlined portion, and thus
we are locked into that second structure.The comparison must be between (what happens)
in America and
in Europeabhisheksemwal and
Shashwatp , I hope that analysis helps.
If it does not, be specific about what is still confusing and tag me. I will be happy to try to help.