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Hi Guys,

I am targeting to apply in Round 3. Could you please evaluate my profile?

Age: 28 Years

Experience: 54 months (4.5 Years)

Industry: Civil (Infrastructure)

Education:
• 10th: 86%
• 12th: 80%
• Engineering: B.E. Civil, passed first class with distinction (GPA 3.83/4.00)
• PGP in Project Management from National Institute of Construction Management and Research (NICMAR), Pune. (CGPA 8.87/10.00)
• GMAT Score: 680 (Q-48, V-34)

Work Experience:
• Post my PGP, have worked on a Road Project in the state of Maharashtra for a period of 2 years. Responsible for execution of road works as well as structural works (a stretch totaling 40 Km, which involved major as well as minor structures). In addition, independently responsible for Client, Sub-contractor and Vendor Management (for a total length of 10 Km out of the project length of 140 Km). Part of a team which successfully achieved the commercial operation of the road and toll collection (BOT Project) [Execution Profile]
• 1.5 years of work experience in Ethiopia as a part of the central co-ordination team for 3 world bank road projects in the country. My responsibilities included planning and monitoring of the works, budget and cash flow preparation, client and sub-contractor management. I was also responsible for development and implementation of internal monitoring systems and MIS reporting of the projects. Singlehandedly assisted the project managers in all contractual matters including matters pertaining to dispute resolution and arbitration proceedings for the 3 projects (successfully managed to get an extension of time of completion for the project and subsequently prevented imposition of liquidated damages on us). [Planning and Monitoring of Works]
• 1 year of working as a contracts administrator – handling contractual matters of multiple projects across various sectors – road works, metro projects, irrigation projects, nuclear power plant projects. Responsible for overseeing the extension of time of completion of the projects as well as preparation of cost claims. [Contracts Administration]

Extra Curriculars:
• A trained tabla player with the required certifications.
• Represented my college in various football tournaments.
• Responsible for hosting a number of events in colleges (although no certificates have been provided for the same)

Post MBA Goals:
• Leveraging my experience from working in the 3 main domains of construction project (execution, planning and contracts), I aim to switch to a role in the strategy management/business development side, OR
• Risk Advisory and Consulting (Infrastructure and Capital Projects)

What I expect to gain from the course:
• Understanding how a business works and the intricacies of the same.

Appreciate an honest evaluation and feedback on the same.

Thanks.


Hi

Your experience, industry, education all look fine.

GMAT is a concern.it would be great if you could retake the GMAT.

Being the final round a lot will depend on the story that you have for the adcom.

I would encourage you to go ahead and apply in the present admitssion round

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Hi, kindly review my profile for ISB.

Btech. - CGPA - 6.5 From Jamia Millia Islamia (E&C). Class of 2011, however, I failed one exam and got my degree in 2017 instead of 2015.
10th Standard - 85% in CBSE
12th Standard - 80% in CBSE

Work experience.
1) Managed P&L at a Multi-city level in a logistics startup for 3 years.
2) Leading Expansion at a regional level in a leading Fintech company - 1 year and ongoing.

Extracurriculars:
1) Cofounded a midnight food delivery startup during my college time. Duration - 2.5 years.
2) Cofounded the Entrepreneurship club during graduation.

Expected GMAT score - 680+
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Hi AC203,

Thank you for sharing your profile.

I am an Indian School of Business alum, CO14, and have been assisting applicants get into global business schools for the last 4 years. Below is my evaluation of your profile:
Academics: Below Average; <Low CGPA and year back has to be compensated by other parts of your application>

Professional Work Experience:
• Length: 4 years of pre- MBA experience will be a good fit to the classroom
• Quality: Good. Combination of corporate and startup experience will add to your candidature.

Extracurricular: Good. However, you need to clearly explain what happened to the startup and your learning from the experience

GMAT: Score needs to be ~700. This is critical to compensate for the LOW CGPA

Overall: I believe your profile has a number of sparks in it to get the attention of the admission committee. However, you will need to demonstrate how you add value to the classroom basis your diverse experiences. Traditionally, Logistics and Fin-tech are completely different industries. Hence, you need to be absolutely logical in what your next career move post ISB would be and you’re your experiences from these industries coupled with food tech have laid the foundation for your next career role.

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Hi Viplav,

Nice work experience. I see that you have a variety of experience. I am just wondering how your short term goal connects with your long term goal. If you already have a startup, why would you wait for 8-10 years post MBA, the period that comes to mind for long term goals, to expand it? Why would you not do it immediately after MBA? Your short term goal prepare you for your long term goal, but I don't see a connect there. Think deeper about your story or reach out for help.



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I am targeting to apply in Round 3. Could you please evaluate my profile?

Age: 28 Years

Experience: 8 years

Industry: Hospitality
• GMAT Score: 670 (Q-48, V-32)


• In 2018, I was moved to ITC Kohenur to set up a brand new convention space right from ground zero. From procurement of equipements to new processes for operations, it was absolutely a brand new expereince.
After setting up the place up and running, I realized that I haven't done anything new recently and then I decided to look out.

Got to know about one of the opportunities in an IT company that seemed old enough in the industry to let me learn the traits yet with a startup environment allowing me to apply my learnings real time.
I decided to join Microland as manager customer experience. Managing the customers in a sales support role enabled me to learn the business nuances and apply them benefiting the company and to my own self.

Entrepreneurial experience :
In the year 2013, while I was managing the Food & Beverage marketing for ITC Maratha, I relaized my inclination towards the creative designing and noticed the potential of this as a business. I learned the basics and started a small company named - 'DreamDezinerz'
While with my connects, I kept adding companies like Kingfisher, Reveilo, Fratelli Wines in my customer base, I couldn't focus on the same for long time since I lacked the specialisation in the design field.
In the year 2017, when I was trying to build up relations with our loyal customers, I noticed the need to come up with more ideas towards client handling part. This was further reemphasized when I joined Microland and realized that the expertise to handle niche clientele is something that could be practiced more professionaly.
And that's when I added one more vertical in dreamdezinerz, end to end client service management which involved experience consulting taking care of finer details ensuring optimum customer satisfaction.
With Bangalore as the base, it helped me connect with quite a few start ups who had expats & niche clientele but not the expertise to manage them well.
Today as dreamdezinerz has reported little over 6 lacs of business in this year, it still isn't a very sustainable model and that's what I intend to improvise on post MBA.

Extra Curriculars:
• Fond of learning new skills - skilled with softwares like Adobe Photoshop, Illustrator etc.
• Represented my college in speech competition
• Professional Anchor/Host of Live Shows

Post MBA Goals:
• Leveraging my experience from working in two different industries handling different types of client, masses or niche, managing teams of 10 - 50 members including assistant managers and superviosrs, I intend to get into a leadership position in allied services of hospitality and grow into CX
• In the long run I intend to expand my business and add more to its services and client base.

Looking forward to an honest evaluation and feedback on the same.

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Hey

Please review my profile for ISB:

GMAT Score: 680 [Quant:50 , Verbal:32, I.R.:8 , AWA:5]

Educational Qualifications:

Graduation: B.E in Electronics and Communication from NIT Surat in 2017 - 94.5% (Silver Medalist)
XII : Non - Medical stream in 2013 - 95.4% (Silver Medalist; scholarship holder)
X: CBSE (2011 pass out) - 95%

Work Experience: 2yrs 9 months (Techno - Managerial Role)
Started as a Young Technical Leader at Airtel Center - Project Lead in Core Quality
Promoted to an Assistant Manager in June 2018 - Currently Project Lead in Core Strategy responsible for end to end launch of new services and technologies with exposure to cross functional teams and work closely with multiple vendors.

Extra Curricular:
- India Representative at JAPAN-SAARC Student exchange program in final year of college
- Awarded with Appreciation certifications for exceptional contribution at workplace for successful delivery of projects
- Completed Coursera courses on data analytics and finance
- Anchored fests in college and school
- Dancing, drawing and organizing fests

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Please review my profile for ISB:

GMAT Score: 680 [Quant:50 , Verbal:32, I.R.:8 , AWA:5]

Hi Shubhra, very decent profile; GMAT score is the only area that's bit of a concern. However, rest of the profile (undergrad school, your academic accomplishments, work-profile etc.) and a very good application will hopefully compensate for your GMAT score.
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Hi kj28191,

Thank you for sharing your profile.

I am an Indian School of Business alum, CO14, and have been assisting applicants get into global business schools for the last 4 years. Below is my evaluation of your profile:
Academics: Average; <As you’re part of the over-represented group i.e. Male Engineer, it has to be compensated by other parts of your application>

Professional Work Experience:
• Length: 4.5 years of pre- MBA experience will be a good fit to the classroom
• Quality: Good. Having 1.5 years of international experience makes your profile impressive.

Extracurricular: Good. However, if you can show some achievements in football too then it’d be better.

GMAT: Score needs to be ~700. This is critical to compensate for the Average CGPA and your field of work. Consider re-taking GMAT before applying if possible OR present your Professional Work Experience as the main attraction of your profile.

Overall: I believe your profile has a number of sparks in it to get the attention of the admission committee, you have realistic post-MBA goals aligned with what you have done in the past. However, you will need to demonstrate how you add value to the classroom being a part of the over-represented group. Make sure you can convey your aim to switch to a management/consulting role to the Adcom.

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Hi Viplav Shrivastava,

Thank you for sharing your profile.

I am an Indian School of Business alum, CO14, and have been assisting applicants get into global business schools for the last 4 years. Below is my evaluation of your profile:

Academics: Above Average, You come from a diverse field it can definitely help you in your application.

Professional Work Experience:

• Length: 8 years of work experience is usually on the higher side, you’ll have to make it clear that ISB is only going to help you.
• Quality: Good. Combination of corporate and entrepreneurial experience will add to your candidature

Extracurricular: If possible show some recognized certificates/achievements to validate your time spent in the activities.

GMAT: Below Average<Your GMAT score has to be compensated by other parts of your application>

Overall:
I believe your profile has a number of sparks in it to get the attention of the admission committee. However, you will need to demonstrate how you add value to the classroom basis your diverse experiences. Traditionally, Hotel Management and IT are completely different industries. Hence, you need to be absolutely logical in how your work experience can help you with your company and how ISB can bridge the gap.


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Hi Piklu,

Thank you for sharing your profile.

I am an Indian School of Business alum, CO14, and have been assisting applicants get into global business schools for the last 4 years. Below is my evaluation of your profile:

Academics: Above Average, being from a top IIT definitely helps your chances.

Professional Work Experience:
• Length: 3 years of experience is good, make sure that you properly highlight your achievements at work.
• Quality: Average, working in one company and in a specific field needs to be put in a non-negative way in your application.

Extracurricular: If possible show some recognized certificates/achievements to validate your time spent in the activities.

GMAT: Above Average, you can go ahead with this score.

Overall: You have a good profile with a decent GMAT score. However, you belong to the over-represented group i.e. Male Engineer. You’ll have to explain your goals post MBA and how you can add value and diversity to the classroom.



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Hi all!

I am a 25 year old male from India, currently working as an Assistant Project Manager (APM) for a small construction contracting firm (40 employees) in the Greater New York City area. I have been with this company for the past 24 months and will accrue about 6-8 more months of experience before I move back to India next year. In my capacity as an APM, I have been entrusted with progressively increasing responsibilities that involve multi-faceted management of several construction projects with budgets ranging from 0.5 to 20 million USD. I led a team of 3 of our own employees along with 12 other subcontractors towards the successful completion of a $2M residential building renovation project. I am working on several other similar projects and will be promoted to the Project Manager position by the end of the year.



Hi WeAreTheChampions,

Thank you for sharing your profile.

I am an Indian School of Business alum, CO14, and have been assisting applicants get into global business schools for the last 4 years. Below is my evaluation of your profile:

Academics: Above Average <Having a post-graduate degree from the US can definitely help you stand out from others but you need to make it clear to adcom why you need another one>

Professional Work Experience:
• Length: Below Average, usually a typical classroom consists of average 3-5 years of experience.

• Quality: Good, having a promotion within such a short period is impressive while working outside India. Having international work experience is always a plus.

Extracurricular: It would be great if you can show some recognized certificates/achievements to validate your responsibilities held.

GMAT: 720+ is a good score, it’ll boost your candidature.

Overall: I believe your profile has a number of sparks in it to get the attention of the admission committee. However, you will need to demonstrate how you add value to the classroom being a part of the over-represented group i.e. Male Engineer. Also, you’ll have to show how less work experience is not going to affect your time while pursuing MBA in a negative way.

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Please review my profile for ISB:



Hi Shubhrabudhwar,

Thank you for sharing your profile.

I am an Indian School of Business alum, CO14, and have been assisting applicants get into global business schools for the last 4 years. Below is my evaluation of your profile:

Academics: Average; <As you’re part of the over-represented group i.e. Male Engineer, it has to be compensated by other parts of your application>




Professional Work Experience:
• Length: 2.9 years of work ex is slightly below average, usually a typical ISB classroom consists of average 3-5 years of experience.
• Quality: Good, having a promotion to a mid-management level role in a short time can make your profile stand out from others.

Extracurricular: If possible show some recognized certificates/achievements to validate your time spent in the activities.

GMAT: Score needs to be ~700. This is critical to compensate for the Average CGPA and your field of work. Consider re-taking GMAT before applying if possible OR present your Professional Work Experience as the main attraction of your profile.

Overall: I believe your profile has a number of sparks in it to get the attention of the admission committee. However, you will need to demonstrate how you add value to the classroom being a part of the over-represented group. Make sure you can convey your idea of how ISB can help you achieve your goals.


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Hello Everyone,

Would be really grateful if someone could judge my profile for ISB's YLP

College: BITS Pilani
Grade: 7.93/10.00 (As of pre-final year, expecting to graduate at ~8.30), Scored 7.5+ each year
Past Scores: Xth 95.33% (School Topper), XIIth 85.69%
GMAT: Yet to be taken but expecting 680-710
Summer Internships: Mid Sized Market Research Firm, Mid Sized Social Consulting Firm, Startup
Positions of Responsibility: Founder and President of the consulting club
Extracurriculars: Won 2 Case Study Competitions at IIT Bombay and BITS Pilani, 100k+ views of Quora, On boarded clients for live projects, Junior Journalist with Times of India

I am crystal clear about my short term and long term goals; I would say I write excellent essays.

Looking forward to constuctive criticism.
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Hello Everyone,

Would be really grateful if someone could judge my profile for ISB's YLP

College: BITS Pilani
Grade: 7.93/10.00 (As of pre-final year, expecting to graduate at ~8.30), Scored 7.5+ each year
Past Scores: Xth 95.33% (School Topper), XIIth 85.69%
GMAT: Yet to be taken but expecting 680-710
Summer Internships: Mid Sized Market Research Firm, Mid Sized Social Consulting Firm, Startup
Positions of Responsibility: Founder and President of the consulting club
Extracurriculars: Won 2 Case Study Competitions at IIT Bombay and BITS Pilani, 100k+ views of Quora, On boarded clients for live projects, Junior Journalist with Times of India

I am crystal clear about my short term and long term goals; I would say I write excellent essays.

Looking forward to constuctive criticism.


Hi,
Nothing there to criticize. And you say you write excellent essays. So put your best foot forward and sail along.
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Hello Everyone,

Would be really grateful if someone could judge my profile for ISB's YLP



Hi Viralvortex,

Thank you for sharing your profile.

I am an Indian School of Business alum, CO14, and have been assisting applicants get into global business schools for the last 4 years. Below is my evaluation of your profile:

Academics: Above Average, being from BITS Pilani with good CGPA definitely helps your chances

Internship Experience:

• Quality: Good, multiple internships can show that you are familiar with the industry

Extracurricular: If possible show some recognized certificates/achievements to validate your time spent in the activities.


GMAT: Any score above 700 works fine, the more you can score the better

Overall: You have a good profile with a decent GMAT score. However, you belong to the over-represented group i.e. Male Engineer. You’ll have to explain your goals post MBA and how you can add value and diversity to the classroom.



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Hello there,

I am planning to apply to ISB in round three. Have taken the GMAT and my scores are as follows:
Overall: 710 | Verbal: 38 | Quant: 49 | IR:8 | AWA: Awaiting Results

My academic scores are as follows:
Secondary Schooling (ICSE): 94.6%
Higher Secondary (ICSE): 93%
B.Tech(SRM University - Software Engineering): 9.21/10 CGPA

WORK EXPERIENCE:
I graduated in 2014 and since then I have bee working in the field of analytics. I started off as a Trainee Decision Scientist at Mu Sigma where I worked for 1.2 years. Post which I joined a leading Marketing Intelligence company as a Senior Business Analyst. In the past 3.5 years, I have grown from a Senior Business Analyst to Manager - Analytics and look after accounts which are worth 16M Dollars to the organization in revenue and managing 6 people directly. I have excellent domain understanding of advertising - especially digital and am very proficient in Machine Learning and Analytics.
I have taken several initiatives in the company to improve taskforce management, resource management, training, retention and career progression. I was awarded the Best Performer at the organizations' annual awards. I was also selected for the Future Leaders Program which selects 22 individual all over the world and provides leadership training to them. I am the youngest manager in my company.

Extra Curricular:
At my college, I have been the House Vice-Captain and have won several trophies(Gold, Silver Bronze) for Intra and Inter-University dance competitions(solo and group). I have represented my college at National Level Dance competitions as well. I was the Chairman of the Software Engineering association as well.

My organization hosts a corporate Olympics every year and I have won 6 medals (3 Gold, 2 Silver and 1 Bronze) across events such as Carrom, Cricket, Football and Online Gaming.

Why MBA:
I have grown rather quickly in the roles that I have been and being in a demanding industry such as Marketing Analytics it important to keep up with the knowledge. Most of the knowledge(marketing and management) that I have acquired has been mostly driven by intuition and through some resources from the internet. On reading about the course at ISB I realized that courses such as "MARKETING MANAGEMENT", "MANAGERIAL ECONOMICS", "COMPETITIVE STRATEGY", "MARKETING DECISION MAKING" etc. would help me immensely to build my core knowledge base allowing me to leverage my application-focused mindset. The diversity at ISB would also allow me to learn from peers and industry leaders and gain valuable experience. In the short term, I wish to grow in the Advertising Industry as a thought leader who brings technology, analytics and domain knowledge to the table and applied it to a business problem in the most effective manner. In the long term, I might want to have my own advertising firm where we can help a multitude of clients grow.

Thanks for you time. Kindly let me know what are the areas I can work on to strengthen my application and whether the profile is good enough to make it through Round 3.

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I have grown rather quickly in the roles that I have been

Hi arcKnight, hope you don't use this line verbatim in your essays ;)

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Most of the knowledge(marketing and management) that I have acquired has been mostly driven by intuition and through some resources from the internet. On reading about the course at ISB I realized that courses such as "MARKETING MANAGEMENT", "MANAGERIAL ECONOMICS", "COMPETITIVE STRATEGY", "MARKETING DECISION MAKING" etc. would help me immensely to build my core knowledge base allowing me to leverage my application-focused mindset. The diversity at ISB would also allow me to learn from peers and industry leaders and gain valuable experience. In the short term, I wish to grow in the Advertising Industry as a thought leader who brings technology, analytics and domain knowledge to the table and applied it to a business problem in the most effective manner. In the long term, I might want to have my own advertising firm where we can help a multitude of clients grow.

This entire section is straight from your essay...right? :)

Doesn't thought leader sound slightly abstract, especially in the short term?
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I have grown rather quickly in the roles that I have been

Hi arcKnight, hope you don't use this line verbatim in your essays ;)

Quote:
Most of the knowledge(marketing and management) that I have acquired has been mostly driven by intuition and through some resources from the internet. On reading about the course at ISB I realized that courses such as "MARKETING MANAGEMENT", "MANAGERIAL ECONOMICS", "COMPETITIVE STRATEGY", "MARKETING DECISION MAKING" etc. would help me immensely to build my core knowledge base allowing me to leverage my application-focused mindset. The diversity at ISB would also allow me to learn from peers and industry leaders and gain valuable experience. In the short term, I wish to grow in the Advertising Industry as a thought leader who brings technology, analytics and domain knowledge to the table and applied it to a business problem in the most effective manner. In the long term, I might want to have my own advertising firm where we can help a multitude of clients grow.

This entire section is straight from your essay...right? :)

Doesn't thought leader sound slightly abstract, especially in the short term?



Thanks, ISBeacon. I just gave my GMAT yesterday and will be starting my application process today. I have not written the essay yet, hence the section is not from my essay. I have written what I honestly feel. However, my actual essay would also be along the same lines. (with a better language of course) :)

Your feedback is valuable. I will add more concrete short term goals and avoid abstract terms. Do you think the profile is good for round three? Any other feedback is welcome too :)
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