anshgupta
would love it if
GMATNinja took a crack at this one!
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(A) extending
Without a helping verb, this -ing word can't be a verb. (For more on that, check out
this article.) And, no, you can't tie "extending" back to "that
is" because that would create a parallelism issue -- "an interwoven filigree" and "extending" aren't parallel.
So we HAVE to treat "extending" as a modifier, making it parallel to the -ed modifier "spawned":
"... an interwoven filigree of mushrooms and rootlike tentacles
spawned by a single fertilized spore {...} and
extending").
You can picture an interwoven filigree of mushrooms and rootlike tentacles extending throughout the soil underneath a forest, so "extending" makes perfect sense as a modifier. Keep (A).
(If you want to learn more about -ed modifiers and why they can be parallel to -ing modifiers, check out
this article.)
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(B) extends
This one is a simple present verb, and it's parallel to the verb "is" ("... a giant fungus that
is an interwoven filigree {...} and
extends..."). That means that those two verbs ("is" and "extends") share the same subject ("a giant fungus").
That's not terrible. After all, the fungus does indeed extend in the soil of the forest. But putting those two verbs in parallel seems to separate them, making it sound like the fungus does two
distinct things: it IS an interwoven filigree, and (separately) it EXTENDS for more than 30 acres. And since it's the filigree of mushrooms and tentacles that actually extends in the soil, the modifier in (A) seems more appropriate.
(B) isn't bad, but it's a little hard to follow, since there's lots of stuff in between the verbs, and that creates a subtle meaning issue. Since the parallelism in (A) is completely clear and logical, it's the better option.
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(C) extended
This
could be a past tense verb, parallel to "is". But that wouldn't make much sense because the sentence refers to this LIVING organism in the present tense: it IS an interwoven filigree, so it presumably still EXTENDS for more than 30 acres.
So we have to treat "extended" as an -ed modifier, but "extended" seems to suggest that there's some other thing doing the extending. So some external force is actively stretching out the filigree of mushrooms/tentacles?
The modifier in (A) makes more sense, so (C) can go. (For more on "extending" vs "extended", check out
this thread.)
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(D) it extended
(D) has all sorts of issues. For starters, it takes some work to figure out what "it" even refers to here. Most readers will figure out that "it" refers to the "giant fungus", but it's not the clearest thing ever. That's not an automatic elimination -- after all,
pronoun ambiguity is NOT an absolute rule on the GMAT. But it creates a bit of confusion that's not ideal.
Related: "it" becomes the subject of a completely new independent clause, and that's not awesome. There's an independent clause at the beginning of the sentence ("Scientists have recently discovered..."), and now we have a brand-new independent clause ("it extended...") that starts up towards the end of the sentence. At minimum, that's unnecessary. Worse, I'd argue that it's a little bit confusing: why are we starting a new clause here? Is this a completely separate idea, somehow? Why not just have parallel modifiers instead, as we see in (A), so that it's 100% obvious that we're still talking about the "giant fungus"?
The biggest problem with (D) is probably the verb tense. In the non-underlined portion, the giant fungus is discussed in the present tense ("is an interwoven filigree..."), since it still exists. So it doesn't make sense to use "extended" here -- that would suggest that the fungus still exists, but no longer extends for more than 30 acres of soil.
Lots of problems with (D), so we can get rid of it.
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(E) is extending
The phrase "is extending" is definitely a verb, so much of what we said about (B) applies here. This one is probably a tiny bit worse than (B) because the simple present tense ("extends") seems more logical than the present progressive ("is extending"). The latter seems to imply that the "extending for 30 acres" part is happening right now -- as if the fungus is suddenly and rapidly expanding in the soil at this very moment?
(B) is better than (E), and (A) is better than (B). So that leaves (A) as our winner.
And if you want a video explanation of the question instead, please
check out this YouTube thing on parallelism and meaning.
I hope that helps!