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The largest trade-book publisher in the United States has announced the creation of a new digital imprint division, under which it will publish about 20 purely digital works to be sold online as either electronic books or downloadable copies that can be printed upon purchase.

(A) works to be sold online as either electronic books or
(B) works to sell them online, either as electronic books or
(C) works and it will sell them online as either electronic books or as
(D) works, and selling them online as either electronic books or as
(E) works, and it will sell them online either as electronic books or


regarding choice e

choice e should be " under which it will publish and sell" or "under which it will publish and under which it will sell". we have to make "will sell" parallel with "will publish". writing of choice e means "i will sell" is parallel with "have anounced" and this is not logical.

the clause "it +verb" at the end of the sentence could be wrong for parallelism. this clause could be parallel to more than 1 one preceding clause and create ambiguity. we need some pattern to make paralelism logical

regarding choice b

" it will publish works to sell them " is wrong "them" is redundant. " it will publish works to sell" is correct. this is clear mistake

Originally posted by thangvietnam on 21 Mar 2019, 02:54.
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"and under which it will sell them...." is a better version regarding this parallelism.

However, this will change the meaning of the original sentence. This is one of those SC questions where the passive voice (to be sold online) is actually preferred over active voice (it will sell them).

This is because in the original sentence, we are not told as to who will sell the books.

So, if we choose an option that says it will sell them, we are basically suggesting that the publisher will sell the books.

This is not what the original sentence suggests.
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The largest trade-book publisher in the United States has announced the creation of a new digital imprint division, under which it will publish about 20 purely digital works to be sold online as either electronic books or downloadable copies that can be printed upon purchase.
(A) works to be sold online as either electronic books or
(B) works to sell them online, either as electronic books or

"it" here is "a new digital imprint division". Below options, the subject is "division" while verb is mainly "sell"? It does not make sense. ( Subject-verb agreement error)
(C) works and it will sell them online as either electronic books or as
(D) works, and selling them online as either electronic books or as ( lacking subject here )
(E) works, and it will sell them online either as electronic books or
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The largest trade-book publisher in the United States has announced the creation of a new digital imprint division, under which it will publish about 20 purely digital works to be sold online as either electronic books or downloadable copies that can be printed upon purchase.
(A) works to be sold online as either electronic books or
(B) works to sell them online, either as electronic books or

"it" here is "a new digital imprint division". Below options, the subject is "division" while verb is mainly "sell"? It does not make sense. ( Subject-verb agreement error)
(C) works and it will sell them online as either electronic books or as
(D) works, and selling them online as either electronic books or as ( lacking subject here )
(E) works, and it will sell them online either as electronic books or
I'm not sure whether you're asking a question, but the verb in the other options is not sell, at least not in the portions that you're focusing on, so we can't look at subject-verb agreement with sell. I've marked the subject-verb pairs (apart from the that clauses) in all 5 options:

A The largest trade-book publisher in the United States has announced the creation of a new digital imprint division, under which it will publish about 20 purely digital works to be sold online as either electronic books or downloadable copies that can be printed upon purchase.

Here, to be sold is an infinitive.

B The largest trade-book publisher in the United States has announced the creation of a new digital imprint division, under which it will publish about 20 purely digital works to sell them online, either as electronic books or downloadable copies that can be printed upon purchase.

Here, to sell is an infinitive.

C The largest trade-book publisher in the United States has announced the creation of a new digital imprint division, under which it will publish about 20 purely digital works and it will sell them online as either electronic books or as downloadable copies that can be printed upon purchase.

Here, will sell is a verb.

D The largest trade-book publisher in the United States has announced the creation of a new digital imprint division, under which it will publish about 20 purely digital works, and selling them online as either electronic books or as downloadable copies that can be printed upon purchase.

Here, selling is not a verb.

E The largest trade-book publisher in the United States has announced the creation of a new digital imprint division, under which it will publish about 20 purely digital works, and it will sell them online either as electronic books or downloadable copies that can be printed upon purchase.

Here, will sell is a verb.

No matter which one we take (infinitive/verb), we'll not be able to apply subject-verb agreement with sell to take any of these options out.

In the sentences below, the verb does change with the subject, but the verb is has been asked.
The division has been asked to sell X. (singular subject, but sell does not change)
The divisions have been asked to sell X (plural subject, but sell does not change)

In these sentences, we have a will in the verb. With a will, the verb will not change.
The division will sell X. (singular subject, but sell does not change)
The divisions will sell X. (plural subject, but sell does not change)
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The largest trade-book publisher in the United States has announced the creation of a new digital imprint division, under which it will publish about 20 purely digital works to be sold online as either electronic books or downloadable copies that can be printed upon purchase.

(A) works to be sold online as either electronic books or
(B) works to sell them online, either as electronic books or
(C) works and it will sell them online as either electronic books or as
(D) works, and selling them online as either electronic books or as
(E) works, and it will sell them online either as electronic books or


The right answer should be A. In the use of either/or, we should see

"Either as x or as y"
OR
"As either x or y"

This parallelism is broken in options B, C, D. OUT

Between A and E, the crux of the question is in the meaning. In A, it is not suggested whether the publisher will sell the books themselves or not. In E, the meaning is limited to the publisher doing the selling. But since we have not been told clearly that it is one or the other, E is too extreme to be correct. OUT

Hence, A is right.

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Hi VeritasKarishma GMATNinja egmat ChiranjeevSingh

Could you please correct me if I'm wrong about this eliminating choice E

Since, "them" in the second IC refers to the "digital works" in the subordinate clause, is this flaw enough to eliminate this choice E?
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Hi VeritasKarishma GMATNinja egmat ChiranjeevSingh

Could you please correct me if I'm wrong about this eliminating choice E

Since, "them" in the second IC refers to the "digital works" in the subordinate clause, is this flaw enough to eliminate this choice E?

I don't see how that's a flaw at all! "Digital works" is the only plural noun in the sentence that precedes "them" -- so there's nothing else "them" could possibly refer to.

If you're thinking that pronouns can't refer to nouns that appear in subordinate clauses (or dependent clauses or modifiers or whatever), that's simply not true. I've seen all sorts of weird variations of that "rule" online, and I can't think of any that are legitimate.

I hope that helps!
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Hi, I have understood the meaning difference between A and the other options and have another issue. Can anyone explain why C is grammatically incorrect. These are two changes I made, and, after these changes, I feel the sentence is grammatically correct. Can someone please help me.

1) Is it because of the "it." What if the "it" is removed, would the sentence be correct then?

2)If we put a comma before the "and" in option C. Is it correct then? Does the comma make a difference?

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Hi, I have understood the meaning difference between A and the other options and have another issue. Can anyone explain why C is grammatically incorrect. These are two changes I made, and, after these changes, I feel the sentence is grammatically correct. Can someone please help me.

1) Is it because of the "it." What if the "it" is removed, would the sentence be correct then?

2)If we put a comma before the "and" in option C. Is it correct then? Does the comma make a difference?

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Hi gauranggarg,

Option C is not parallel:
as either X or as Y

There's an as outside the either... or, so we really should not include that second as after or.
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C and D are out right away because "as either" should be "either as" to match "or as." B is out because "or" should have "as" after it to match "either as." These are very easy parallelism issues to catch.

The easiest way to get rid of E is to notice that "them" is trying to refer to something in the subordinate clause.

A's parallel structures and pronouns are all correct.


Hey rjacobsMGMAT,
What is the issue with a pronoun referring to the subordinate clause? Is it a rule or a preference?
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