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While all states face similar industrial waste problems, the predominating industries and the regulatory environment of the states obviously determines the types and amounts of waste produced, as well as the cost of disposal.

a) The same as underlined sentence

b) each state faces a similar industrial waste problem, their predominant industries and regulatory environment obviously determine

c) all states face a similar industrial waste problem; their predominating industries and regulatory environment obviously determines

d) each state face similar industrial waste problems, the predominant industries and the regulatory environment of each state obviously determines

e) all states face similar industrial waste problems, the predominant industries and the regulartory environment of each state obviously determine
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1. No need of while.
2. the predominating industries and the regulatory environment of the state - 2 identities. so plural verb. We want "determine"

So E is correct one.
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I'm sorry, while is not included in the underline sentence.


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1. No need of while.
2. the predominating industries and the regulatory environment of the state - 2 identities. so plural verb. We want "determine"

So E is correct one.
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Two - step solution; 1. ‘Determines’ is wrong- ACD are gone. In B, each state and the pronoun ‘their’ do not tally. Hence, E is correct
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While all states face similar industrial waste problems, the predominating industries and the regulatory environment of the states obviously determines the types and amounts of waste produced, as well as the cost of disposal.

a) The same as underlined sentence

b) each state faces a similar industrial waste problem, their predominant industries and regulatory environment obviously determine

c) all states face a similar industrial waste problem; their predominating industries and regulatory environment obviously determines

d) each state face similar industrial waste problems, the predominant industries and the regulatory environment of each state obviously determines

e) all states face similar industrial waste problems, the predominant industries and the regulartory environment of each state obviously determine


The important usage here is of similar. We cannot say each of you is similar. All of you are similar is the correct version.
Hence, B, and D are out.
subject verb agreement issues - we have a compound subject here the industries and the regulatory environment. This is a plural subject, the correct verb is determine.
A and E are out.
There is also an issue of pronouns here. Something to fall back on if the use of similar were not known to us.
choice B uses a plural pronoun their for singular subject each - disagreement.
and D has determines error.
Hence the correct answer is E :)
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also, pay attention to ; in C.
One take-away here is that whenever you see a ; on the GMAT sentence correction choice, check if both the sides of the ; are complete sentence.
This is something very important because we often happen to miss the punctuation!
Choice C is actually a fragment.
Without knowing that similar can be used only with all and not with each, we can solve the question using subject-verb agreement grammar. the compound sub would need determine as explained earlier. So out of choices B and E, we can actually select a choice based on correct meaning. It would be wrong to say that - Although all Xs are similar, their Ys determine their blah blah. The point is to provide a contrast. So it would be more correct to say that - although all Xs are similar, each one's Y determines blah blah. Hope that makes sense! :)
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While all states face similar industrial waste problems, the predominating industries and the regulatory environment of the states obviously determines the types and amounts of waste produced, as well as the cost of disposal.

a) The same as underlined sentence

b) each state faces a similar industrial waste problem, their predominant industries and regulatory environment obviously determine

c) all states face a similar industrial waste problem; their predominating industries and regulatory environment obviously determines

d) each state face similar industrial waste problems, the predominant industries and the regulatory environment of each state obviously determines

e) all states face similar industrial waste problems, the predominant industries and the regulartory environment of each state obviously determine


A, C and D out. Between B and E, B is awkward.
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One more way to eliminate B based on Meaning.

Jasontuyj2012 wrote:
While all states face similar industrial waste problems, the predominating industries and the regulatory environment of the states obviously determines the types and amounts of waste produced, as well as the cost of disposal.

a) The same as underlined sentence

b) each state faces a similar industrial waste problem, their predominant industries and regulatory environment obviously determine
This means each state faces 1 problem which is similar. Question says, each state face multiple problems which are similar.

c) all states face a similar industrial waste problem; their predominating industries and regulatory environment obviously determines

d) each state face similar industrial waste problems, the predominant industries and the regulatory environment of each state obviously determines

e) all states face similar industrial waste problems, the predominant industries and the regulartory environment of each state obviously determine


OA E.
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The important usage here is of similar. We cannot say each of you is similar. All of you are similar is the correct version.
Hence, B, and D are out.
subject verb agreement issues - we have a compound subject here the industries and the regulatory environment. This is a plural subject, the correct verb is determine.
A and E are out.
There is also an issue of pronouns here. Something to fall back on if the use of similar were not known to us.
choice B uses a plural pronoun their for singular subject each - disagreement.
and D has determines error.
Hence the correct answer is E :)[/quote]

hI DAAGH,
i have 2 doubts in this...

firstly===>apart from all errors....the predominating industries and the regulatory environment====>is this also a parallelism error in option A and C.?

secondly ====>as per OG 13 explanation in option C SEMICOLON creates a fragment...but as per my understanding.

c) all states face a similar industrial waste problem; their predominating industries and regulatory environment obviously determines

clearly we have subject verb pair and moreover both the clause seems to be independent...so i am unable to figure out the fragment...
please suggest where i am wrong....
although i am neglecting the singular verb determines as an error...

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2. apart from all errors....the predominating industries and the regulatory environment====>is this also a parallelism error in option A and C.?

I see no parallelism error in the given phrase. Predominating is an adjective that modifies industries and regulatory is an adjective that modifies environment. So, no issue about//ism
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Your problem is because of wrong transcription. The correct one is:
While all states face similar industrial waste problems, the predominating industries and the regulatory environment of the states obviously determines the types and amounts of waste produced, as well as the cost of disposal.

a) The same as underlined sentence

b) each state faces a similar industrial waste problem, their predominant industries and regulatory environment obviously determine

c) all states face a similar industrial waste problem; their predominating industries and regulatory environment obviously determines

d) each state face similar industrial waste problems, the predominant industries and the regulatory environment of each state obviously determines

e) all states face similar industrial waste problems, the predominant industries and the regulatory environment of each state obviously determine

The word’ while’ falls under the non-underline. So please read all choices with ‘while]; In C, the first clause is a subordinate clause. But a subordinate clause is always followed by a comma and a main clause. In this case, it intervened by a semicolon. A subordinate clause that does not have a proper main clause of its own but that which loosely hangs is also called a fragment, apart from the subject-less or the verb-less clauses that are also normally called fragments
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