aaba wrote:
Advocates of organic food believe they will be able to foster consumer communities that can avoid the negative side effects of pesticides, eat healthier, and coexist with the environment as the societies of old did—communities that will be able to build a strong local economy, maintaining a close connection with the soil, or other goals such as these.
A. as the societies of old did— communities that will be able to build a strong local economy, maintaining a close connection with the soil, or other goals such as these
-"Use of as" - correctly used of comparing clauses
-"use of maintaining"- verb-ing = shows the result of previous clause.
Meaning wise- maintaining connection or maintaining other goals. Meaning wise fine.
- "goals such as these" - but the previous statement is referring to a single goal. "These" is wrong.
-Wrong
B. as the societies of old did, which may be able to achieve such goals as building a strong local economy or maintaining a close connection with the soil
-"which" refers to ability to coexist.
But "which" can only refer to a noun
C. like the societies of old— communities that will be able to achieve such goals as building a strong local economy and maintaining a close connection with the soil
-"like" comparing two societies. Hence is correct
-there are 2 goals - "building" & "maintaining"
- Correct
D. like the societies of old, the achievement of which would be for goals like the building of a strong local economy or the maintenance of a close connection with the soil
-"the achievement of which". Here "which" is used in the same as it is used in option B - wrong
- "goals like" - such as is better
-Erong
E. like the societies of old, to be achieved by building a strong local economy, maintaining a close connection with the soil, or the like
- "or the like" - wrong
- "to be achieved" - wrong
-wrong
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