I kindly request a
profile review for the Indian School of Business (ISB) as I am preparing to submit my application in Round 1.
GMAT: I achieved a score of 700 (V35, Q50, AWA 5.5, IR 8). Considering that I had an unfavourable test day experience, I am considering that I should retake the GMAT in the coming weeks to improve my verbal score.
I am going to attempt gmat again in mid August, aiming for 730+
Current Profile:
Academic Background:
Bachelor of Engineering in Electrical and Electronics Engineering (B.E. EEE) from BITS Pilani, with a GPA of 7.77. (Graduated in 2020)
XII: Secured 92% from the Central Board of Secondary Education (CBSE).
X: Achieved a CGPA of 10 from CBSE.
Work Experience:
1. Software Development Intern at Samsung Research for 6 months.
2. Energy Market Analyst at Energy Exemplar, where I have completed 3+ years and received a promotion.
In my full-time role, I have been engaged in technical customer success, providing custom on-site and off-site training and workshops to clients across the EMEA region.
Extracurricular Involvement:
Participated in a 6-month leadership workshop organized by my current employer.
Secured first place in the company-wide Hackathon held in 2021.
Won a prestigious ideation event named "Futurethon," where I proposed a product for the company’s portfolio expansion in the next 5 years.
Recognized with the "Share the Future" award, a quarterly CEO award honouring exceptional client engagement.
Actively involved as a member of the Nirmaan organization.
Interests:
Apart from my professional pursuits, I enjoy reading books and painting. Recently, I have also taken up new activities such as swimming and surfing.
Long-term and Short-term Goals:
My short-term goal is to secure a strategy consulting role, while my long-term aspiration is to either establish an Ed Tech venture or work in a senior corporate strategy position.
My Questions:
1. Considering that my application was rejected last year in Round 2 (without being waitlisted), I would greatly appreciate any feedback on potential weaknesses in my profile. I am committed to addressing these areas, apart from my GMAT score, of course.
2. In light of my intention to retake the GMAT, I would like to know which other aspects of my application I should focus on improving.
3. I believe my extracurricular involvements may require further work. Could you kindly provide suggestions on how I can work on them over the next few months or present them more effectively?
4. I have obtained a Letter of Recommendation (LOR) from my direct manager in the Indian team. Would it be advisable to also secure a LOR from a manager in the EMEA team, given my close collaboration with them?
5. If anyone would be willing to review my essays, I would be grateful to share them, as they may have contributed to my previous rejection.