Blonde wrote:
How serious is Adcom about the "how will an MBA from UCLA Anderson specifically help you achieve these goals?" part of the 2nd essay? I am applying for R2. I just saw that part of the question and my essay doesn't answer that bit.
To give you a no-b.s., frank answer, I think one of the more/most important aspects of almost any set of essays, is the "why ____ school?" question. It's the "show _____ school the love" opportunity.
That being said, hopefully your narrative will cover your goals and why the MBA, and maybe you might have more references to the school than you thought. It's easy to be overly-critical and read too much into your essays after submitting them. What's done is done. To keep your sanity, I recommend you NOT read your essays after you submit them.
Personally, I read my essays far too many times after I clicked "submit", and immediately began to second-guess myself. Every minute error or detail was quickly blown out of proportion by a set of eyes that was looking for errors (my own).
The admissions process is such a crap-shoot that you really can't predict the outcome. And while disheartening, if all else fails, there is always next year, at which time I'm sure you'll put together an application that is magnitudes better as you'll have learned from your previous mistakes.