If a song is played on the radio often, a practice favored by popular radio stations,it increases the chance that the singer will become famous.
(A) If a song is played on the radio often, a practice favored by popular radio stations, it -
the second clause is a modifier clause that modifies the action of 'playing the song frequently' on the radio. So, if you remove this modifier clause, you are left with "If a song is played...often, it increases the chances that the singer will become famous". (A) has no error in it. Hence, (A) is the right answer choice.
(B) If a song is played on the radio often, and favored by popular radio stations, it -
here, the actions of 'played' and 'favored' are placed in parallel; this indicates that these two actions are two individual actions that must occur together. However, the action 'favored' occurs as a direct consequence of the action 'played' and hence cannot be treated as two independent events. Hence, we can eliminate (B).
(C) A practice favored by popular radio stations, a song played on the radio often, -
Here, the intended meaning of the sentence changes. Now, it is the favored 'practice' that is expected to help the singer become famous, and not the actual act of 'playing' the singers song frequently (which is the intended meaning of the sentence). Hence, eliminate (C).
(D) A song played on the radio often, a practice favored by popular radio stations, -
Has the same error as described in (C). Hence, eliminate (D).(E) The playing of a song on the radio often, and a practice favored by popular radio stations, -
with (E), the sentence now becomes "The playing....., and a practice....., increases the chance that the singer will become famous.". There is a parallelism error here - the verb 'playing' is placed in parallel with the noun 'practice'. Hence, eliminate (E).
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