librega wrote:
jimmybananas wrote:
Hello, I would be grateful if someone could give me an opinion on my 2+2 application below.
School: HBS, (I do not feel Stanford, should I try tho?)
- 23 years old, African male
- 320 GRE - expected (from mock test results)
- 3.7 GPA ( hoping to get a 3.8 for major GPA) - from low-tier school in Europe - delayed graduation due to depression - thoroughly explained in the essay and supported by recommenders
- Got admitted to study a Masters degree in Public policy from a top 20 school in Europe; Top school in the country
- Current ECs include:
Mentor for youths that are depressed or rejected at an association, using my experience gave talks & advice about failure & depression and how to overcome it,
Member of the LGBT community where I give talks about mental and sexual health,
Charity fundraiser for an association in an African country
- Started 2 startups during my first year at uni, one I sold to a family friend and the other failed;
- interned in finance, in investment management
- working now on another startup before starting my masters next semester
- pre-mba goals: working in development banking/consulting & entrepreneurship
- Post MBA short-term goals: entrepreneurship in healthcare/pharmaceuticals sector in Africa
- Post MBA long-term goals: Building startup incubators in Africa
I personally think you have a great profile, though I think that the exact details of your school and startups would aid better judgement.
I'd say apply to Stanford as well, because from what I've read in several places, they love candidates who have suffered and overcome their challenges and are helping others overcome the same. Never a bad thing to have two offer letters!
Do put yourself well in your essay, I'd say that would be your strongest cord is showing your story.
All the best!
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GMAT Club Forum mobile appThank you for your reply Librega. Let me provide a clearer picture so perhaps you may give me a more informed opinion.
My first startup was focused on solving the supply chain gap between Africa and Europe
My second startup started off as a car search services in Europe for clients in Africa but it terribly failed, I did not have time with all my classes;
The startup I'm working on now aims to help designers in Africa earn some money while designing clothes for sale in Europe
My post-MBA startup already has foundations, to work on innovating pharmaceuticals in Africa.
As for my school, it is a vocational school which nationally ranks 3rd but is not present in global rankings
, its a university of applied sciences or a Fachhochschule in German.
I will indeed work on my essay as you suggested.
My "problem" with Stanford is that out of the United States it is not as well recognized by people as Harvard, I would love to open several doors for my projects to work so leveraging a name would be important to me. Am I wrong? What do you think?
Thank you again for your feedback, I truly appreciate it.