The first animal shelter in the United States was established in 1869

[quote="EMPOWERgmatVerbal"]Pack 16, Question 3 of 5:

The first animal shelter in the United States was established in 1869 by the Women’s SPCA of Pennsylvania promoting that stray animals have humane care and appropriate food so as to rehome them.

A. promoting that stray animals have humane care and appropriate food so as to rehome them

B. who were promoting stray animals have humane care and appropriate food for their rehoming

C. promoting humane care and appropriate food to rehome stray animals

D. who promoted humane care and appropriate food for the means of stray animal rehoming

E. promoting as the means for stray animal rehoming humane care and appropriate food

Hello guys!

Eliminate Option A, 'so as to' sounded incorrect and the statement seemed off.
Eliminate Option B, adding an infinitive could have been a better idea for the sentence and 'were' refers to a plural noun; we need a singular here.
Eliminate Option D, 'means of' seems unrequired and wordy.
Eliminate Option E, it misses the usage of an infinitive.

Option C seems fine to me!

IMO,
Hit Option C.

Thank you!

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Raunak Damle

The first animal shelter in the United States was established in 1869 by the Women’s SPCA of Pennsylvania promoting that stray animals have humane care and appropriate food so as to rehome them.

A. promoting that stray animals have humane care and appropriate food so as to rehome them


1.This choice does not convey the meaning properly. . promoting that stray animals have humane care and appropriate .. conveys illogical meaning


B. who were promoting stray animals have humane care and appropriate food for their rehoming


1.This choice does not convey the meaning properly. . promoting stray animals have humane care and appropriate .. conveys illogical meaning


C. promoting humane care and appropriate food to rehome stray animals


1.Correct...Prompting correctly modifies to the women's of spca..

2. To rehome stray animals denote the purpose of the women.

D. who promoted humane care and appropriate food for the means of stray animal rehoming


1.This choice does not convey the meaning properly. . For the means of is not the correct idiom to be used here.


E. promoting as the means for stray animal rehoming humane care and appropriate food


1.This choice does not convey the meaning properly. . as the means for conveys ilogical meaning .


C is the best choice.. imo

Official Explanation

The first animal shelter in the United States was established in 1869 by the Women’s SPCA of Pennsylvania, promoting that stray animals have humane care and appropriate food so as to rehome them.

A. promoting that stray animals have humane care and appropriate food so as to rehome them

B. who were promoting stray animals have humane care and appropriate food for their rehoming

C. promoting humane care and appropriate food to rehome stray animals

D. who promoted humane care and appropriate food for the means of stray animal rehoming

E. promoting as the means for stray animal rehoming humane care and appropriate food

This question deals with several issues:

1. Pronouns need to clearly refer to their antecedents.
2. Modifier placement should be directly before or after the noun it is modifying.
3. Lastly, sentences should not be overly wordy.

Let’s start with pronoun-antecedent agreement. We need to make sure any pronouns we find refer back to clear antecedents.

A. promoting that stray animals have humane care and appropriate food so as to rehome them
This is INCORRECT. It is unclear whether the pronoun “them” refers to the “Women’s SPCA,” or the “stray animals.” We’re certainly not going to rehome the wonderful people at the Women’s SPCA - but the sentence isn’t 100% clear about that!

B. who were promoting stray animals be cared have humane care and appropriate food for their rehoming
This is INCORRECT. It is unclear whether the pronoun “their” refers to “Women’s SPCA,” or the “stray animals.”

C. promoting humane care and appropriate food to rehome stray animals
This is OKAY for now. The sentence removes the pronoun entirely to remove any confusion about who/what is being rehomed.

D. who promoted humane care and appropriate food for the means of stray animal rehoming
This is OKAY for now. The sentence removes the pronoun entirely to remove any confusion about who/what is being rehomed.

E. promoting as the means for stray animal rehoming humane care and appropriate food
This is OKAY for now. There are no pronouns to deal with here.

We can eliminate options A & B because they have vague pronouns and unclear antecedents. Let’s move on to #2 on our list: modifiers. We need to make sure any modifier phrases we have are located next to their antecedents. While we’re here, let’s also check for overly wordy phrases too! To make problems easier to spot, let’s add in the non-underlined portion:

C. The first animal shelter in the United States was established in 1869 by the Women’s SPCA of Pennsylvania, promoting humane care and appropriate food to rehome stray animals.
This is CORRECT. The sentence removes the pronoun entirely to remove any confusion about who/what is being rehomed. There also aren’t any problems with modifiers and antecedents. Finally, it’s also written with concise, clear language.

D. The first animal shelter in the United States was established in 1869 by the Women’s SPCA of Pennsylvania, who promoted humane care and appropriate food for the means of stray animal rehoming.
This is INCORRECT. By starting the modifier with “who,” it’s now unclear if the phrase is referring to the shelter or the Women’s SPCA. Also, the phrase “for the means of stray animal rehoming” is overly wordy. Saying “to rehome stray animals” is much shorter and means the same thing!

E. The first animal shelter in the United States was established in 1869 by the Women’s SPCA of Pennsylvania, promoting as the means for stray animal rehoming humane care and appropriate food.
This is INCORRECT. This is a misplaced modifier! The phrase “as the means for stray animal rehoming” belongs after “promoting humane care and appropriate food,” not stuck in the middle of it.

There you have it - option C is the correct choice!

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Hi I got stuck between the meanings of A and C. Isnt A about promotion to have food and B about only the food itself.
Also Women’s SPCA of Pennsylvania is a collective noun. Why are we saying that "that" might refer to SPCA also? I thought it is unambiguously referring to stray animals.

I have a few doubts:
1. Isn't the "," (comma) missing before word "promoting'? Since "promoting...." is a modifier, which is modifying the preceding sentence, there should be a comma to separate the 2 statements?
2. The verb for the noun "human care" is "promoting". Similarly what's the verb for "appropriate food"? The sentence looks incomplete/weird in Option C without the verb for "appropriate food". Or, is it: 1) PROMOTNG human care and 2) PROMOTING appropriate food to rehome stray animals ? Even this structure looks a bit weird.
Request experts to please enlighten.

The first animal shelter in the United States was established in 1869 by the Women’s SPCA of Pennsylvania promoting that stray animals have humane care and appropriate food so as to rehome them.
Option C: promoting humane care and appropriate food to rehome stray animals

Request someone please to please help understand this..

Yes i think the comma is key here and is missing in the question. EMPOWERgmatVerbal can you help put the comma back in please. thanks.

Thanks for your questions PANKAJ0901 and AnirudhaS! Let's go through your concerns, one at a time:

1. The comma before the word "promoting" is NOT underlined, so it stays as part of the sentence no matter which option you choose. It doesn't need to be added back in because it's already there in all the options.

2. The word "promoting" is tied to BOTH "human care" and "appropriate food." There is nothing wrong with the word "promoting" applying to both items because the word "and" connects them. It's like saying "I enjoy eating ice cream and brownies." The verb "eating" applies to BOTH items because they're connected with the word "and." It's also a totally true statement - I truly enjoy eating both.

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A. promoting that stray animals have humane care and appropriate food so as to rehome them -- "them" pronoun ambiguity. "Promoting that" may not be the correct idiom. Promoting X is better. Eliminate.

B. who were promoting stray animals have humane care and appropriate food for their rehoming -- "their" pronoun ambiguity.
Also usage of "were" is only appropriate in subjunctive situations and this isn't one. "Women's SPCA" is a singular noun. Eliminate.

C. promoting humane care and appropriate food to rehome stray animals -- Correct answer.

D. who promoted humane care and appropriate food for the means of stray animal rehoming -- "for the means of" is incorrect idiom. "means to" would be more appropriate here since we are talking about achieving an aim. Eliminate.

E. promoting as the means for stray animal rehoming humane care and appropriate food -- promoting as the means to A, B & C. First of all, "means for" is incorrect idiom. "Means to" is better. Second, the structure of the sentence is wordy. promote B & C as a means to A sounds much better. Eliminate after review of C.

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