jimmyjamesdonkey wrote:
Can you guys help explain when to use "in which" and "whereby" on gmat sentence correction...i'm stumped.
"In which" is a weird one, because we don't use it very often when we write or speak. But there's nothing wrong with it.
There are actually a lot of similar phrases that mean similar things: "on which", "near which", "with which", "without which", etc. All of these phrases are used to begin a modifier, just like the word "which" by itself.
Correct sentences:
The waiting room,
in which patients sometimes must spend upwards of two hours, is barren and lifeless.
I carefully walked around the table,
on which sat a priceless antique vase.
Joe is very attached to his bicycle,
without which he would lose his delivery job.
Here's what these phrases are for. Normally, when you just use 'which', you're saying that the noun being modified is the direct object of the action in the modifier. For instance, in the sentence "I threw the ball," 'ball' is the direct object of the action 'threw'. So when you turn that into a modifier instead, you'd have a sentence like this:
The ball,
which I threw, disappeared over the wall.
In the sentence "Joe owns a bicycle," 'bicycle' is the direct object of 'owns'. Likewise, you'd just use "which":
The bicycle,
which Joe owns, is red.
But sometimes, the thing you want to modify
isn't the direct object. In the sentence "the vase sits on the table," 'table' is NOT the object of 'sits'. You can tell because 'table' is part of a prepositional phrase: 'on the table'.
Similarly, in 'He would lose his delivery job without his bicycle', 'bicycle' is NOT the object of 'lose'. In fact, 'delivery job' is the object of 'lose'.
So when you turn sentences like these into modifiers, you'd use phrases like 'on which' or 'without which':
I carefully walked around the table,
on which sat a priceless antique vase.
Joe is very attached to his bicycle,
without which he would lose his delivery job.