OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Day 164: Sentence Correction (SC2)
Needless to say, verb construction underlies the question.
This verb construction is called "passive reporting structure, " which I explain after the POE.
Passive reporting structure requires us to pay attention to the verb tenses for both the reported event and the time of the act of reporting.
THE PROMPTQuote:
Far from being a modern dietary invention, salad has a long and distinguished history: food historians claim that the Romans ate mixed greens with dressing, and the Babylonians are known to douse lettuce with oil and vinegar more than 2,000 years ago.
THE OPTIONSQuote:
A) Far from being a modern dietary invention, salad has a long and distinguished history: food historians claim that the Romans ate mixed greens with dressing, and the Babylonians are known to douse lettuce with oil and vinegar more than 2,000 years ago.
• historians of today can know something in the present about something in the past.
The problem does not lie with
are known.The problem is the infinitive, which is in the simple form
to douse•
are known to douse means that the Babylonians
more than 2,000 years ago are now known to still be dousing lettuce with oil and vinegar. Nonsense.
Eliminate A
Quote:
B) Far from being a modern dietary invention, salad has a long and distinguished history: food historians claim that the Romans ate mixed greens with dressing, and the Babylonians are known to have doused lettuce with oil and vinegar more than 2,000 years ago.
• This structure works and means: historians know that the Babylonians doused lettuce with oil and vinegar
KEEP
Quote:
C) Far from being a modern dietary invention, salad has a long and distinguished history: food historians claim that the Romans ate mixed greens with dressing, and the Babylonians were knowing to douse lettuce with oil and vinegar more than 2,000 years ago.
• Do not mistake this phrasing for "Babylonians were known to," which = we know that Babylonians did XYZ
• "were knowing" is not the same as above and is NOT a correct verb phrase.
-- It doesn't mean anything.
-- In English we do not say "were knowing" as a verb phrase.
The ancient pyramid builders were knowing about astronomy.Corrected: The ancient pyramid builders knew about astronomy.
• Babylonians were knowing = the Babylonians in the past continuously were knowing (NO) that they should douse lettuce with oil and vinegar
Even that attempt to translate a nonsense verb is not accurate. They either knew or did not know.
We do not say
are knowing, either. This is wrong: I am knowing a lot about geometry. (OUCH.)
Eliminate C
Quote:
D) Far from being a modern dietary invention, salad has a long and distinguished history: food historians claim that the Romans ate mixed greens with dressing, and the Babylonians have been known to douse lettuce with oil and vinegar more than 2,000 years ago.
• The Babylonians are not still in existence. We are not talking about a group of people who live now.
• When we use the present tense verb
have in the present perfect
have been known, AND couple it with simple infinitive TO DOUSE, we incorrectly indicate that the Babylonians are still alive and on occasion, [have been known to] do XYZ.
•
The politician and his cronies have been known to befriend mortal enemies of the nation.Are the politician and his cronies dead? No.
• The Babylonians are neither still alive nor dousing their lettuce with vinegar and oil.
Eliminate D
Quote:
E) Far from being a modern dietary invention, salad has a long and distinguished history: food historians claim that the Romans ate mixed greens with dressing, and the Babylonians who were known to douse lettuce with oil and vinegar more than 2,000 years ago.
• WHO creates a fragment. The second part of the sentence lacks a verb
-- [T]he Babylonians [who were known to douse lettuce with oil and vinegar more than 2,000 years ago] _____ (WHAT)?
-- These Babylonians (who were known to do XYZ) did WHAT?
• Take note: GMAC frequently sets this particular "fragment trap." What is "this fragment trap"?
In short, the trap consists of a relative clause that follows a subject
and "eats up" the only available verb.
That is:
A subject [Babylonians] will be followed by a relative clause with a pronoun (
who, that, or which) and a verb.
There will be a subject. (The Babylonians)
That subject will be followed by a relative clause, usually essential or restrictive (i.e., who or that and not usually comma + which).
-- the relative pronoun will be WHO, THAT, or which. In this case, WHO refers to and restrictively defines Babylonians.
-- the relative clause will contain a verb. [were known to douse].
-- But no
second verb exists for the subject itself [the Babylonians] to take.
The subject needs
its own verb because the relative clause merely describes the Babylonians and "eats up" the one verb that exists.
Eliminate E
The answer is BANALYSIS• PASSIVE REPORTING STRUCTUREThis question tests something called a passive [voice] reporting structure, which GMAC tests on occasion. (Rarely, although I have seen it used quite often in hard RC passages.)
Sometimes we want to report information even when
(1) we are not completely sure whether it is true,
(2) the source doesn't really matter,
(3) we do not know the source, or
(4) we want to distance ourselves from the source.
In essence we want to avoid mentioning the general agents who know (
we, everyone, they, the people).
• There are TWO STRUCTURES to use with passive reporting verbsWe have two structures we can use with passive reporting verbs
Structure #1 IT + reporting verb + THAT clause (Not applicable to our question. I have not seen official questions test this one, though I could be mistaken, so information about this kind is in the footnote.)
and
Structure #2 to achieve passive voice with reporting verb:
SUBJECT + reporting verb + to-infinitive ← ← THIS ONE APPLIESWe use these passive reporting structures to talk about facts or to use a formal style while reporting information. (Newscasters often use it.)
As I mentioned, we use it to distance ourselves from the information. ("Someone else said this first, not I." Or "The source isn't important. The fact is.")
• Passive reporting structure #2 Subject + passive reporting verb + to-infinitive (applies to this question)
This structure starts with the subject of the reported clause, which is followed by the passive reporting verb
and by the to-infinitive form of the verb in the reported clause.
That description sounds very abstract. Examples help. Keep reading.
The easy case: The reported event is in the present and the reporting
of the event is in the present. (NOT this question)
Watch how the structure changes (described above) from what is meant (in parentheses) to how the information gets reported.
Corinne is known to like sterling silver or platinum jewelry.
(
Everyone knows that Corinne likes sterling silver or platinum jewelry.)
Human beings are known to prefer sweet things.(
Anthropologists know that human beings tend to prefer sweet things.)
• The difficult part of the passive reporting structure: which verb tenses do we use?The type of to-infinitive we use depends on the temporal relationship between the action of reporting and the reported event.
In general, we must cope with two situations, the first of which does not apply to this question so I will put its examples in a footnote.
(1) the reported event and the reporting OF the event happen at the same time. (Not applicable to this question.)
Use the
simple to-infinitive.*
(2) The reported event happens before the reporting of the event. (The situation in this question)subject + passive reporting verb + to-infinitive (perfect tense)If the reported event happens before the reporting of the event, we use
(1) the present tense for the reporting verb, and
(2) the
perfect to-infinitive
-- if reporting is now but event was in the past, use present perfect infinitive
-- if the reporting happened in the past and the event happened before the reporting, use past perfect infinitive. An example is in the footnote.
This question: The reporting of the event happens in the present but the reported event happens [happened] in the past.
Subject + reporting verb + to-infinitive (present perfect).
Examples:
Corinne is known never to have owned gaudy jewelry.
(Everyone knows that Corinne never owned gaudy jewelry.)(Everyone knows that Corinne had never owned gaudy jewelry.)
The Babylonians are known to have doused their lettuce with oil and vinegar more than 2,000 years ago.(
Generic "THEY" know that the Babylonians doused their lettuce with oil and vinegar more than 2,000 years ago.)
This passive reporting structure is described in a very accessible way on these pages (in order):
here, #1, (passive voice with reporting verbs);
here, #2 (passive voice reporting verb, simultaneous event); and
here, #3 (passive voice reporting verb, reporting an earlier event).
Alternatively, a shorter and very good site comes from what I
think is a Hungarian source (maybe Estonian?) —a source whose author really understands this structure.
You can find that site
HERE.Unless you want a 700 or better, ignore those pages.
Takeaways:
Understand how
this question works -- specifically, understand why the incorrect options are incorrect.
It is now
known [and can be reported as a fact] that Babylonians who are no longer in existence [a fact derived from the context of the sentence] doused their lettuce with vinegar and oil more than 2,000 years ago.
That structure changes by way of passive reporting verb convention to the sentence in correct answer B:
[T]he Babylonians [i]are known to have doused lettuce with oil and vinegar more than 2,000 years ago.[/i]
--
Are known = the reporting is happening now and the info is generally known by a "they" or an "everyone."
--
To have doused = present perfect to-infinitive indicates that at some point beginning and ending in the past, Babylonians doused their lettuce with vinegar and oil.
If you have questions about the passive reporting structure, please read the linked pages.
Still have questions? Make them specific, tag me, and I will be happy to try to help.
Please do not go wandering on the web. Most of the attempts to teach this subject that I found were of poor quality.
I've given you two sources that I am sure are accurate.
COMMENTSSanjay7392 , welcome to SC Butler.
I see a couple of posters I have not seen for awhile—glad you posted.
As always, I am glad to see veterans and semi-veterans.
The efforts to understand and explain are good.
Your reasoning may have taken a wrong turn, but the reasoning itself rangers from pretty good to very good.
People who reasoned themselves to the correct answer are
almost correct in their reasoning.
A few subjects in SC are not all that hard, but they are somewhat rare and typically very hard to teach.
Passive reporting verb structure is rather common in formal English, occasionally tested by GMAC, and very hard to teach, imo.
I hope you all benefit from being exposed to the structure; you will see it again in business school and in business when you deal with attorneys (I would know) or with consultants (I would know about that, too).
You will also see this structure in academic writing, including in these often inexact "sciences" or subject areas in business school:
human resource management, management science, international business, marketing, organizational psychology, organizational behavior, and public relations. Those are a few examples whose material by definition does not lend itself to incontrovertible findings.
I am glad to see everyone wrestling with the material.
I like curiosity. I like tenacity. And I like courage. Kudos to all.
** This footnote contains examples that do not apply to this sentence but that make the structure that does apply to this sentence a little clearer. Examples help.
(1) IT + passive reporting verb + that-clause (from above, not our situation)
In this structure, we shift from a generalized "everybody" + active reporting verb
to
IT + passive reporting verb
The word IT replaces the generalized "everyone," and the active reporting verb is changed to the passive reporting verb.
Everyone knows that Corinne likes sterling silver or platinum jewelry.
It is known that Corinne likes sterling silver or platinum jewelry.
****
These examples go with the second structure that is used in this question, but the examples are in time frames different from those in this question.
(2) Second structure = subject + passive reporting verb + to-infinitive
Note the different kinds of to-infinitive structures used
(2A) (simultaneous timing, both are in the present) the reported event and the reporting OF the event happen at the same time.
Use the simple present to-infinitive.
subject + passive reporting verb + to-infinitive (simple)
Corinne is known to like sterling silver or platinum jewelry.
(Everyone knows that Corinne likes sterling silver or platinum jewelry.)
(2B) (simultaneous timing, both are in the past) reported event and the reporting OF the event both happen in the PAST (simple infinitive)
Corinne was known to like sterling silver or platinum jewelry.
(Everyone knew that Corinne liked sterling silver or platinum jewelry.)
(2C) (different timing, different times in the past) Reporting in the past, reported event in an earlier past (use past perfect infinitive)
subject + passive reporting verb + to-infinitive (past perfect infinitive)
Corinne was known to have liked sterling silver and platinum jewelry.
(Everyone knew that Corinne had liked sterling silver and platinum jewelry.)