Anshul1223333
in A]
1) If I apply parallelism:
who take care to keep ( commom for 3 items below)
i- them cool,
ii- providing them,
iii- milking them
These are non-parallel.
Parallel structures don't have to match up exactly—it's ok if some of them have, e.g., extra attached modifiers that others don't have—but
parallel structures MUST ALWAYS have the same grammatical role overall.e.g.,
noun || other noun (although they can have varying quantities of modifiers and/or adjectives attached to them)
verb || other verb (although tenses may be different, if the context so requires)
modifier of a noun || another modifier of the noun
etc.
In this breakdown, "providing them" and "milking them" are the same type of grammatical element, but "them cool" is definitely not that type. So these are not valid parallel structures.
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2) can adjective - 'cool' be parallel to 'providing' as 'cool' is parallel to 'provided' an ed verbal in E]
Yes.
Consider the absolute requirement stated above (parallel structures need to be the same grammar thing overall).
In the correct version of this sentence,
• "cool" is a modifier of "[keep] them"
• "provided with high-energy feed" is also a modifier of "[keep] them"
• "milked regularly" is a modifier of "[keep] them", too
These are parallel. They're also the only 3 elements you can dig out here that ARE parallel—so even if they "sound weird" to you, they're the right parallel elements by default.