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I believe that if I had seen “although called a sea” probably it would have been incorrect and someone would have said that is missing the subject and a conjugated verb. So what is the rule for Though? As the answer choice C is correct, where can I find this rule for “though”?

Hi jdrury, you're correct. Though is a subordinating conjunction and marks the start of a Dependent clause.

Option C however, represents a case that many people refer to as verbless clause. Basically the verb is implied.

So, C actually implies: Though (the landlocked Caspian is) called a sea,....

where is is the verb.
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Choice C.
Though called a sea, the landlocked Caspian is actually the largest lake on Earth, covering more than four times the surface area of its closest rival in size, North America's Lake Superior.

To me here "the landlocked Caspian" is followed after its modifier is // to "North America's Lake Superior"

Rest of the answer choices have quite major gramatical error to eliminate them, but if we take into consideration the whole sentence, this //ism is also significant.

What do you think of this? or I'm diving too deep and out of subject? :idk:
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Let's tackle this question, one issue at a time, and figure out the easiest way to get to the right answer! Before we dive in, here is the original question with any major differences between the options highlighted in orange:

It is called a sea, but the landlocked Caspian is actually the largest lake on Earth, which covers more than four times the surface area of its closest rival in size, North America's Lake Superior.

(A) It is called a sea, but the landlocked Caspian is actually the largest lake on Earth, which covers
(B) Although it is called a sea, actually the landlocked Caspian is the largest lake on Earth, which covers
(C) Though called a sea, the landlocked Caspian is actually the largest lake on Earth, covering
(D) Though called a sea but it actually is the largest lake on Earth, the landlocked Caspian covers
(E) Despite being called a sea, the largest lake on Earth is actually the landlocked Caspian, covering

After a quick glance over the options, we see that there are a few places where we can focus our attention:

1. The modifier in the beginning: It is / Although / Though / Despite
2. Placement of the word "actually"
3. The modifier at the end: which covers / covering / covers


Since we're dealing with modifiers, let's do a quick check to make sure all the modifiers are placed directly before or after the word(s) they're referring to. This is one of the most common modifier errors on the GMAT, so it's a good place to start:

(A) It is called a sea, but the landlocked Caspian is actually the largest lake on Earth, which covers
This is INCORRECT because the modifier "which covers more than four times..." is placed next to "Earth," which is NOT what it's supposed to modify! This means we have a misplaced modifier, which is a big no-no on the GMAT!

(B) Although it is called a sea, actually the landlocked Caspian is the largest lake on Earth, which covers
Again, this is INCORRECT because it suggests that the modifier should be tied to Earth, rather than the Caspian, which it should be referring to.

(C) Though called a sea, the landlocked Caspian is actually the largest lake on Earth, covering
This is OKAY because when you begin a modifier with an -ing word, it's now modifying the entire phrase, rather than just the subject closest to it.

(D) Though called a sea but it actually is the largest lake on Earth, the landlocked Caspian covers
This is INCORRECT because we have a misplaced modifier and some terribly awkward wording. The modifier "but it actually is the largest lake on Earth" seems to be in the wrong place - it would make more sense to put it directly after "the landlocked Caspian" to make it clear that's what it's referring to. By removing the comma before "but," it also sounds like a run-on sentence, rather than a modifier.

(E) Despite being called a sea, the largest lake on Earth is actually the landlocked Caspian, covering
This is OKAY because when you begin a modifier with an -ing word, it's now modifying the entire phrase, rather than just the subject closest to it.

We can eliminate options A, B, and D because they have problems with misplaced, confusing, and poorly written modifiers.

Now that we only have to focus on options C and E, let's focus on any overly wordy or confusing phrasing:

(C) Though called a sea, the landlocked Caspian is actually the largest lake on Earth, covering
This is CORRECT! Starting with "Though" is clear and concise, and it makes a bit more sense to place the Caspian first in the next clause because it creates a clearer contrast to " called a sea."

(E) Despite being called a sea, the largest lake on Earth is actually the landlocked Caspian, covering
This is INCORRECT for a couple reasons. First, the GMAT prefers writers avoid the "being + verb" combination whenever possible. It's overly wordy, and there is almost always a better way to phrase it. Second, it makes more sense to put the Caspian first in the next phrase. The modifier in the beginning is "Despite being called a sea," and whatever comes next should be what is called a sea - the Caspian.

There you have it - option C is our best choice!


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Dear team,
I agree with the point that option c is best suitable option.
But I hav. Ea doubt regarding the use of though. "Though" is used with structure "though + subject + verb". And here "Though called a sea", subject+verb structure is missing. Kindly suggest.
Also, I have read the structure details of "though" modifier in Ultimate GRammar book.
bb generis GMATNinja
Thanks in advance

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Why is the usage of which wrong here? I thought 'which' can jump over 'on Earth' and modify the largest lake. Wont it make sense to say that the largest lake on Earth covers fours times the surface area?
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Hi everyone,

I am wondering for answer E, is the phrase "Despite being called a sea," every a correct?
From my understanding Despite must be followed by a noun.
If it is a valid phrase then is "being" a gerund and "called" is acting as a past particle?
Can a gerund be followed by a past or present participle?
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daagh GMATNinja egmat GMATNinjaTwo

Can you give some clarity on the usage of 'which/that'. Ideally 'which/that' should modify the noun just preceding them, but I have read that they can jump a few words to modify a noun that is a bit further away.

Do we go by meaning and logic to ensure non-ambiguity, or is there a grammar rule that we can follow?
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It is called a sea, but the landlocked Caspian is actually the largest lake on Earth, which covers more than four times the surface area of its closest rival in size, North America's Lake Superior.


(A) It is called a sea, but the landlocked Caspian is actually the largest lake on Earth, which covers X

What is “it” referring to? Unclear.

(B) Although it is called a sea, actually the landlocked Caspian is the largest lake on Earth, which covers X

“it” is referring to what? Also, the placement of ‘actually’ is wrong…should follow ‘is’. The third error is ‘which’ seems to be modifying Earth OR “actually the landlocked Caspian is the largest lake on Earth”…that’s wrong.

(C) Though called a sea, the landlocked Caspian is actually the largest lake on Earth, covering CORRECT

(D) Though called a sea but it actually is the largest lake on Earth, the landlocked Caspian covers X

“but it” is wrong

(E) Despite being called a sea, the largest lake on Earth is actually the landlocked Caspian, covering X

“being” is wrong
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Why are options D and E incorrect? I can't get a solid reason to eliminate them
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Bunuel wrote:
Jizzy wrote:
Why are options D and E incorrect? I can't get a solid reason to eliminate them


Many posts on pervious two pages answer your query. Have you read the thread?

I'm new to gmatclub, wasn't aware that the thread had a 2nd page. I'll go through the posts. Thanks Bunuel.
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(A) It is called a sea, but the landlocked Caspian is actually the largest lake on Earth, which covers
(B) Although it is called a sea, actually the landlocked Caspian is the largest lake on Earth, which covers

Would like to understand why verb-ing "covering" is preferred over "which". I think "which" can refer to lake, so there are no errors meaning-wise. I wouldn't want to reject basis pronoun ambiguity. Why A and B are logically incorrect?

(D) Though called a sea but it actually is the largest lake on Earth, the landlocked Caspian covers - Can you help me understand sentence structure of D?
Though called a sea (subordinate clause) + but + it is largest lake (clause) > Can I consider it a clause?

Thank you for your help :)
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(A) It is called a sea, but the landlocked Caspian is actually the largest lake on Earth, which covers
(B) Although it is called a sea, actually the landlocked Caspian is the largest lake on Earth, which covers

Would like to understand why verb-ing "covering" is preferred over "which". I think "which" can refer to lake, so there are no errors meaning-wise. I wouldn't want to reject basis pronoun ambiguity. Why A and B are logically incorrect?

(D) Though called a sea but it actually is the largest lake on Earth, the landlocked Caspian covers - Can you help me understand sentence structure of D?
Though called a sea (subordinate clause) + but + it is largest lake (clause) > Can I consider it a clause?

Thank you for your help :)



In options (A) and (B), 'which' modifies 'Caspian' but is far away from it. It is next to 'Earth,' another noun it can modify grammatically (not logically though).
comma + verb-ing modifies the subject of the previous clause. So in options (C) and (E), 'covering' modifies the subject of the previous clause, 'Caspian.' That is better.

Option (D) uses two connectors 'though' and 'but' needlessly. We need only one to show contrast.
Also, it joins two independent clauses with a comma.

IC1 - Though called a sea, it actually is the largest lake on Earth ('Though called a sea' is a phrase. It has no verb. In passive, a verb needs helping verb too e.g. It is called a sea - passive)

IC2 - the landlocked Caspian covers more than ...

Option (E) is incorrect too.
'Despite being called a sea' should modify the Caspian, not the largest lake on Earth. It makes sense to say that 'Caspian is actually the largest lake,' not 'the largest lake is actually Caspian'

Hence (C) works.
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In option "C", having the main subject and verb between two commas doesn't make it non-essential? Is this allowed? What am i missing?
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KarishmaB many thanks! This definitely helps.

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Hi,

Confusion —> Why should which refer to The Caspian. The largest lake on earth covers more than……why is this statement incorrect?
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Confusion —> Why should which refer to The Caspian. The largest lake on earth covers more than……why is this statement incorrect?

Yeah, the "which" in (A) isn't flat-out wrong. It's just that the construction in (C) is more clear and less open to interpretation.

In (A), the reader must first decide that the "which" goes with "largest lake" and not with "Earth". That doesn't make the "which" wrong, but why make the reader choose, when (C) offers a less ambiguous option?

If we skip over "Earth" and decide that the "which" phrase modifies the "largest lake," the reader still has another decision to make: Is the Caspian the largest lake on Earth? Or is it the largest OF the lakes that cover more than four times the surface area of its closest rival in size? In other words, is it a restrictive or nonrestrictive modifier? Based on the logic and the structure, we can figure that out pretty quickly -- but again, the "-ing" modifier in (C) is clearer.

Lastly, starting the sentence with "though" in (C) immediately gives the reader the necessary context and makes it easy to figure out the intended meaning: "even though it's called a sea, the Caspian is actually the largest lake." (A) uses a "but" instead, and basically conveys the same meaning -- but setting up the contrast right away with "though" just makes (C) a bit simpler and easier to follow.

(A) isn't terrible and doesn't violate any clear-cut rules, but (C) is definitely a better option.

I hope that helps!
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