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Re: Although sophisticated technology will make international cash managem [#permalink]
chetan2u wrote:
Hasnain786 wrote:
Although sophisticated technology will make international cash management and pooling solutions more efficient, it, in the absence of proper regulatory direction, will also make falsifying accounting structures easier, thereby increasing the potential for fraud.


A) will make international cash management and pooling solutions more efficient, it, in the absence of proper regulatory direction, will also make falsifying accounting structures easier, thereby increasing
IT correctly modifies sophisticated technology.
THEREBY INCREASING correctly modifies the action of main sentence
TENSE remains the same
CORRECT


B) will make international cash management and pooling solutions more efficient, falsifying accounting structures, will become easier in the absence of proper regulatory direction, which will increase
the SUBJECT 'sophisticated technology' is missing in the main sentence
WHICH is a wrong modifier here- it cannot modify the result/action of previous clause


C) makes international cash management and pooling solutions more efficient, it, in the absence of proper regulatory direction, also makes falsifying accounting structures easier, which thereby increases
WHICH is a wrong modifier here- it cannot modify the result/action of previous clause

D) would make international cash management and pooling solutions more efficient, while in the absence of proper regulatory direction, it will also make falsifying accounting structures easier, which will increase
the main clause is not properly structured as it uses WHILE
WHICH is a wrong modifier here- it cannot modify the result/action of previous clause


E) would make international cash management and pooling solutions more efficient, in the absence of proper regulatory direction, falsifying accounting structures would be made easier, thereby increasing
the SUBJECT 'sophisticated technology' is missing in the main clause
improper construction


A


chetan2u

I have a question, is conditional verb right in D and E? i know these options are wrong but i am curious about verb use
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Re: Although sophisticated technology will make international cash managem [#permalink]
A takes care of parallelism and pronouns


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Re: Although sophisticated technology will make international cash managem [#permalink]
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sananoor wrote:
chetan2u wrote:
Hasnain786 wrote:
Although sophisticated technology will make international cash management and pooling solutions more efficient, it, in the absence of proper regulatory direction, will also make falsifying accounting structures easier, thereby increasing the potential for fraud.


A) will make international cash management and pooling solutions more efficient, it, in the absence of proper regulatory direction, will also make falsifying accounting structures easier, thereby increasing
IT correctly modifies sophisticated technology.
THEREBY INCREASING correctly modifies the action of main sentence
TENSE remains the same
CORRECT


B) will make international cash management and pooling solutions more efficient, falsifying accounting structures, will become easier in the absence of proper regulatory direction, which will increase
the SUBJECT 'sophisticated technology' is missing in the main sentence
WHICH is a wrong modifier here- it cannot modify the result/action of previous clause


C) makes international cash management and pooling solutions more efficient, it, in the absence of proper regulatory direction, also makes falsifying accounting structures easier, which thereby increases
WHICH is a wrong modifier here- it cannot modify the result/action of previous clause

D) would make international cash management and pooling solutions more efficient, while in the absence of proper regulatory direction, it will also make falsifying accounting structures easier, which will increase
the main clause is not properly structured as it uses WHILE
WHICH is a wrong modifier here- it cannot modify the result/action of previous clause


E) would make international cash management and pooling solutions more efficient, in the absence of proper regulatory direction, falsifying accounting structures would be made easier, thereby increasing
the SUBJECT 'sophisticated technology' is missing in the main clause
improper construction


A


chetan2u

I have a question, is conditional verb right in D and E? i know these options are wrong but i am curious about verb use


sananoor,

It is not necessary that WOULD is only used as conditional..
If I were the prime minister, I would ensure safety for all.

But here it is not conditional. It is just used as a future of a past event.
Although the policy would help the poor, we should oppose the policy as it will effect the economy of the country.
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Re: Although sophisticated technology will make international cash managem [#permalink]
A for me..

just a question :-

Usage of * ; * in A would have made more sense as we have two independent clauses ??
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Re: Although sophisticated technology will make international cash managem [#permalink]
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A for me..

just a question :-

Usage of * ; * in A would have made more sense as we have two independent clauses ??


IMHO thats a very good observation (And valid as well ) but on the GMAT our goal must be marking the best option as correct Answer (And ignore such minor issues :-D )
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