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In addition to containing more sentences than page six does, the sentences on page seven are more understandable than those on page six, with better words and grammar.
A. the sentences on page seven are more understandable than those on
B. page seven has sentences that are more understandable than those on
C. the sentences on page seven are more understandable than they are in
D. sentences are more understandable than they are on
E. page seven has sentences more understandable than those on
Meaning is crucial to solving this problem:Understanding the intended meaning is key to solving this question; the intended meaning of this sentence is that page seven contains more sentences than page six does, and the sentences on page seven are more understandable than the sentences on page six are.
Concepts tested here: Meaning + Modifiers + Awkwardness/Redundancy• In a “phrase + comma + noun” construction, the phrase must correctly modify the noun; this is one of the most frequently tested concepts on GMAT sentence correction.
• "on + page" is the correct, idiomatic construction.
A: This answer choice incorrectly uses "In addition to...six does" to modify "the sentences on page seven", illogically implying that the sentences on page seven contain more sentences than page six does; the intended meaning is that page seven itself contains more sentences than page six does; please remember, in a “phrase + comma + noun” construction, the phrase must correctly modify the noun.
B: This answer choice uses the needlessly wordy phrase "that are more understandable", leading to awkwardness and redundancy.
C: This answer choice incorrectly uses "In addition to...six does" to modify "the sentences on page seven", illogically implying that the sentences on page seven contain more sentences than page six does; the intended meaning is that page seven itself contains more sentences than page six does; please remember, in a “phrase + comma + noun” construction, the phrase must correctly modify the noun. Moreover, Option C further alters the meaning of the sentence through the phrase "than they are in"; the construction of this phrase illogically implies that the same sentences are more understandable on page seven than they are on page six; the intended meaning is that the sentences practically on page seven are more understandable than the sentences practically on page six are. Additionally, Option C incorrectly uses the unidiomatic construction "in + page"; please remember, "on + page" is the correct, idiomatic construction.
D: This answer choice incorrectly uses "In addition to...six does" to modify "sentences", illogically implying that sentences in general contain more sentences than page six does; the intended meaning is that page seven contains more sentences than page six does; please remember, in a “phrase + comma + noun” construction, the phrase must correctly modify the noun. Moreover, Option D further alters the meaning of the sentence through the phrase "than they are on"; the construction of this phrase illogically implies that sentences in general are more understandable when they are not on page six; the intended meaning is that the sentences practically on page seven are more understandable than the sentences practically on page six are.
E: Correct. this answer choice correctly uses "In addition to...six does" to modify "page seven", conveying the intended meaning - that page seven itself contains more sentences than page six does. Further, Option E uses the phrase "than those", conveying the intended meaning - that the sentences practically on page seven are more understandable than the sentences practically on page six are. Additionally, Option E correctly uses the idiomatic construction "on + page". Besides, Option E is free of any awkwardness or redundancy.
Hence, E is the best answer choice.To understand the concept of "Phrase Comma Subject" and "Subject Comma Phrase" on GMAT, you may want to watch the following video (~1 minute):
All the best!
Experts' Global Team