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Re: Unlike all the other mammal species whose olfactory receptors, which [#permalink]
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Unlike all the other mammal species whose olfactory receptors, which detect smell, were studied, the African elephants use nearly 2,000 olfactory genes to smell various objects, which in turn detect their odor.

A. objects, which in turn detect
B. objects, and they will detect
C. objects, resulting in detecting
D. objects that result in detecting
E. objects and thereby detect


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Unlike other mammals whose olfactory receptors were studied
the African elephants use nearly 2,000 olfactory genes to smell various objects to detect the odour

A) Objects do not detect odour. Incorrect modifier
B) ambiguous refererant for pronoun "they"
C) use of resulting is incorrect here..Elephants use 2000 genes to detect odour[Correct]....Elephants use 2000 genes resulting in detecting odour[Awkward and Incorrect]
D) Incorrect for similar reason as C.
E) Only valid construction that communicates the correct meaning

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Re: Unlike all the other mammal species whose olfactory receptors, which [#permalink]
In option 'A' can 'which' refer to 'objects'?
From what I have understood, relative pronoun modifier need not always modify the noun preceding it. It depends on the context. It can jump prepositional phrase, like in this case 'to smell various objects', and refer to far away noun-'olfactory genes'.
Here, it would be illogical to say ' objects in turn detect their odor' .
Am I correct in my analysis?
What exactly is the issue with option A?

Originally posted by aarkay on 14 Jul 2019, 05:21.
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Re: Unlike all the other mammal species whose olfactory receptors, which [#permalink]
aarkay wrote:
In option 'A' can 'which' refer to objects?
From what I have understood relative pronoun modifier need not always modify the noun preceding it. It depends on the context. It can jump prepositional phrase, like in this case 'to smell various objects', and refer to far away noun-'olfactory genes.
Here, it would be illogical to say ' objects in turn detect their odor. Am I correct in my analysis?
What exactly is the issue with option A?


Whenever you see which, it’s a good idea to consider what it most logically modifies. Typically, it’s the closest noun. I’d argue that the noun-modifier "which" most directly modifies "objects" in this sentence. This makes it seem like the object is detecting the odor of the olfactory genes.

You’re correct that this does not have to be the case!

In this scenario, though, the original sentence includes “which in turn.” Even if “which” was modifying “olfactory genes,” which in turn logically shifts the focus.

Does this make sense?

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