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Found only in the Western Hemisphere and surviving through extremes of climate, hummingbirds' range extends from Alaska to Tierra del Fuego, from sea-level rain forests to the edges of Andean snowfields and ice fields at altitudes of 15,000 feet.
(A) Found only in the Western Hemisphere and surviving through extremes of climate, hummingbirds’ range extends
(B) Found only in the Western Hemisphere, hummingbirds survive through extremes of climate, their range extending
(C) Hummingbirds, found only in the Western Hemisphere and surviving through extremes of climate, with their range extending
(D) Hummingbirds, found only in the Western Hemisphere and surviving through extremes of climate, their range extends
(E) Hummingbirds are found only in the Western Hemisphere, survive through extremes of climate, and their range extends
Meaning is crucial to solving this problem:Understanding the intended meaning is key to solving this question; the intended meaning of this sentence is that hummingbirds are found only in the Western Hemisphere and survive through extremes of climate because their range extends from Alaska to Tierra del Fuego.
Concepts tested here: Meaning + Modifiers + Parallelism• In a “phrase + comma + noun” construction, the phrase must correctly modify the noun; this is one of the most frequently tested concepts on GMAT sentence correction.
• The introduction of present participle ("verb+ing"- “extending” in this case) after comma generally leads to a cause-effect relationship.
A: This answer choice incorrectly uses the phrase “Found only in…climate” to modify “hummingbirds' range”, illogically implying that
the range is found only in the Western Hemisphere and survives through extremes of climate; the intended meaning is that
hummingbirds are found only in the Western Hemisphere and survive through extremes of climate; please remember, in a “phrase + comma + noun” construction, the phrase must correctly modify the noun.
B:Correct This answer choice acts upon the independent noun “hummingbirds” with the active verb “survive” to form a complete thought, leading to a complete sentence. Further, Option B correctly uses the phrase “Found only in the Western Hemisphere” to modify the noun “hummingbirds” and uses the clause “hummingbirds survive through extremes of climate”, conveying the intended meaning – that hummingbirds are found only in the Western Hemisphere, and they survive through extremes of climate. Moreover, Option B uses the phrase “their range extending from Alaska to Tierra del Fuego”, conveying the intended meaning – that hummingbirds survive through extremes of climate
because their range extends from Alaska to Tierra del Fuego; please remember, the introduction of present participle ("verb+ing"- “extending” in this case) after comma generally leads to a cause-effect relationship.
C: This answer choice fails to form a complete sentence; as “found only in the Western Hemisphere”, “surviving through extremes of climate”, and “with their range extending” are all modifiers, there is no active verb to act upon the subject of the sentence, “Hummingbirds”.
D: This answer choice fails to form a complete sentence; as “found only in the Western Hemisphere”, “surviving through extremes of climate”, and “their range extending” are all modifiers, there is no active verb to act upon the subject of the sentence, “Hummingbirds”.
E: This answer choice alters the meaning of the sentence through the phrase “and their range…Tierra del Fuego”; the use of “and” incorrectly implies that hummingbirds survive through extremes of climate
and as a separate action their range extends from Alaska to Tierra del Fuego.; the intended meaning is that hummingbirds survive through extremes of climate
because their range extends from Alaska to Tierra del Fuego.
Hence, B is the best answer choice.To understand the concept of "Comma + Present Participles for Cause-Effect Relationships" on GMAT, you may want to watch the following video (~3 minutes):
To understand the concept of "Phrase Comma Subject" and "Subject Comma Phrase" on GMAT, you may want to watch the following video (~1 minute):
All the best!
Experts' Global Team