This one is fun, huh?
thangvietnam wrote:
I do not see any error in choice D
is this question from official source.
Yup, it's from the
OG! I occasionally hallucinate things in the OGs, but
Bunuel verified it, and he does not make mistakes. (Also:
mosquitos refuse to bite him, just out of respect. And the last time he went to Spain, he chased the bulls.)
MikeScarn wrote:
GMATNinja GMATNinjaTwo Hey guys, can you please explain what "that" is doing in my sentence?
I see what you did there! Nicely played,
MikeScarn.
The second "that" might feel a little bit unnecessary, but it's there to emphasize the parallelism:
"The Commerce Department reported that the nation's economy grew at a brisk annual pace of 3.7 percent in the second quarter, but that while businesses were expanding their production, unsold goods piled up on store shelves..."
So the Commerce Department reported two things: (1) "that the nation's economy grew..." and (2) "that while businesses were expanding their production, unsold goods piled up on store shelves..." So the word "that" just subordinates the two clauses, and clarifies that both clauses are things that "the Commerce Department reported." Fair enough. (More on "that" in
this article and
this video.)
septwibowo wrote:
I've read all the explanation but still confused why D is wrong...
Yeah, the "with" thing is tricky. Let's go through all of the answer choices, just to be safe.
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The Commerce Department reported that the nation's economy grew at a brisk annual pace of 3.7 percent in the second quarter, but that while businesses were expanding their production, unsold goods piled up on store shelves as consumer spending is slowed sharply.
(A) unsold goods piled up on store shelves as consumer spending is slowed sharply
The verb tenses make no sense here. Businesses "were expanding" (past progressive tense, if you like jargon -- basically, an ongoing action in the past), but then consumer spending "is slowed sharply" (present tense). There's no good reason to mix those tenses here. (A) is out.
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(B) unsold goods were piling up on store shelves as consumer spending slowed sharply
I have no problem with this. It's all in past tense: "business were expanding their production", "unsold goods were piling up", and "consumer spending slowed." That actually makes sense.
Let's keep (B).
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(C) unsold goods had piled up on store shelves with a sharp slowing of consumer spending
The verb tense doesn't work in (C), for starters. The past perfect tense "had piled up" must describe an action that logically occurs
before something else in the past. And that just doesn't work here: the action "unsold goods had piled up on store shelves" doesn't happen before "business were expanding their production." That's enough to eliminate (C).
The "with" is also goofy, but I'll say more about that in (D), since that one has attracted more questions.
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(D) consumer spending was slowing sharply, with the piling up of unsold goods on store shelves
Maybe I'm missing something, but I can think of two major uses of the word "with":
1. To indicate that one thing or person is accompanied by another: "Tim went with Ron to see a nine-hour documentary about weiner dogs."
2. To modify or describe an action: "Milena ate an entire pizza with great enthusiasm." The phrase "with great enthusiasm" just describes the action, "Mila ate."
The problem with (D) is that neither usage of "with" really applies here. It makes no sense to say that spending was slowing
accompanied by "the piling up of unsold goods," the way Tim was accompanied by Ron. And it's not logical for "the piling up of unsold goods" to describe the slowing spending.
Contrast this with (B), in which "as" indicates that the slowing of spending and the piling up of goods are happening at the same time. This is perfectly logical, and much, much clearer.
So given the choice between (D) and (B), (B) wins.
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(E) consumer spending has slowed sharply, with unsold goods piling up on store shelves
Welp, (E) has the same "with" problem as (D). Also, the verb tense still doesn't make a whole lot of sense: "has slowed" indicates an action that starts in the past but continues in the present, but then the non-underlined portion of the sentence is still in the past. It's not necessarily a crime to mix verb tenses, but in this case, there's no good reason to do it.
So (B) is the best we can do.
Also I think D has a comparison issue. It compares plural with singular. "Businesses were while consumer spending was"
Correct me if I'm wrong.