OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Day 144 Sentence Correction (SC1)
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The endurance and consistency of baseball star Cal Ripken, known as "The Iron Man," are legendary.
A) The endurance and consistency of baseball star Cal Ripken, known as "The Iron Man," are legendary
B) The endurance and consistency of Cal Ripkin, a baseball star known as "The Iron Man," is legendary
C) Known as "The Iron Man," the endurance and consistency of Cal Ripken, the baseball star, are legendary
D) The reason baseball star Cal Ripken is known as "The Iron Man" is because of his legendary endurance and consistency
E) Known as "The Iron Man," baseball star Cal Ripken's endurance and consistency are legendary
HIGHLIGHTS• with the exception of option B, whose verb is wrong, these sentences may appear to be correct at first glance.
Typically this situation happens when
modifiers are being tested.
• Two themes vie for attention, but only one is the main event.
-- (1) Main event: "his endurance and consistency"
are legendary.
-- (2) sub-theme: Cal Ripken's nickname is Iron Man, a name consistent with the logic of the sentence
THE PROMPT and the OPTIONSQuote:
The endurance and consistency of baseball star Cal Ripken, known as "The Iron Man," are legendary.
Quote:
A) The endurance and consistency of baseball star Cal Ripken, known as "The Iron Man," are legendary
• looks correct
•
endurance and
consistency are correctly paired with plural verb ARE
•
known as "The Iron Man" (1) correctly modifies the
man, and
(2) is set off by commas and thus does not interfere logically with the main subjects,
endurance and
consistency Quote:
B) The endurance and consistency of Cal Ripkin, a baseball star known as "The Iron Man," is legendary
• Subject/Verb disagreement
• "endurance and consistency" are the subjects of the sentence. The subject is compound and therefore plural.
Is is singular. Correction: endurance and consistency ARE legendary
Quote:
C) Known as "The Iron Man," the endurance and consistency of Cal Ripken, the baseball star, are legendary
• Modifier misplacement
The endurance and consistency are not known as "The Iron Man." Cal Ripken is known as "The Iron Man."
Quote:
D) The reason baseball star Cal Ripken is known as "The Iron Man" is because of his legendary endurance and consistency.
•
reason and
because are
redundant.
We can say
The reason is that but not "the reason is because." Doing so sounds as though we are saying that "the reason is the reason."
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GMAC tests this issue. I explain why
reason and
because are redundant in
this post, here.Quote:
E) Known as "The Iron Man," baseball star Cal Ripken's endurance and consistency are legendary[
•This answer could look very tempting. The modifier is wrong.
• Who is the one "known" as The Iron Man?
-- Right after the words "known as Iron Man" should be the name
Cal Ripken, not in possessive form.
-- Possessive nouns are adjectives.
Cal Ripken's describes
whose endurance and consistency and the traits are.
-- "Ripken's endurance and consistency" were not called "The Iron Man."
The man himself, Cal Ripken, was called "The Iron Man."
By POE, the answer is A.In option A,
Correct: endurance and consistency ... ARE
Correct; "known as The Iron Man" modifies Cal Ripken
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