Quote:
A) Unlike amateur clammers, who usually dig clams by hand during the summer, professional clammers work year-round, using all-weather instruments . . .
D) Unlike amateur clammers, who usually dig clams by hand during the summer, professional clammers working year-round use all-weather instruments . . .
duybachhpvn wrote:
Hi
generisI would like to ask for option D in this question, if we consider just the part "professional clammers working year-round use all-weather instruments.....". Is this a correct structure?
From my opinion, "working" is modifying clammers and
that part can be rewritten as "professional clammers who work year-round use all-weather instruments...". Is this an acceptable grammar?
Thanks
duybachhpvn , as usual, you ask an interesting question.
Yes, if we isolate the part you describe, you are correct that
working = who workJargon: what you describe is a reduced relative clause.*
I see two issues with (D)'s verb.
(1) AS IS: there is probably a parallelism problem.
Unlike X, Y. What makes X (amateur clammers) and Y (professional clammers) different? Answer A:
Amateurs . . .
dig by hand
during the summer.Professionals
work year-round.
Compare A to D:
Amateurs . . .
dig by hand during the summer
Professionals
working year-round use (?)
(2)
Meaning problems. We have these phrases:
. . . professional clammers working year-round use ABC, or
hypothetically. . . professional clammers [who work] year-round use ABC
The description of professional clammers is not as clear as the description of them in (A).
Oddly enough, that haziness comes from the explicit or implied relative pronoun
who that modifies
professional clammers. If option D is inserted, the sentence implies that not all professional clammers work year-round,
but that those professional clammers who
do work year-round use certain kinds of tools to do so.
I hope that helps.
*As you note, we can "reduce" professional clammers who work:
-- remove the who
-- change the verb to the present participle (change work to working)
-- and place the participle "working" in front of the modified noun clammers.
We can reverse the process, too; we can change "clammers working" to "clammers who work."