maxost96 wrote:
Hello everyone,
I would appreciate it if you could evaluate my profile (if thats still possible)
Preferred program: Innovation & Entrepreneurship at ESADE
Other options: International Management at IE/NOVA/ESCP/BOCCONI/CBS
Male, German, 24 years old
Early high school in Germany, last three years at the German School in Lisbon
2 student exchanges in France
3 months of work and travel in the US
BA in Hospitality Management at Hotelschool The Hague in the Netherlands (#1 in the Netherlands, Top 5 worldwide)
GPA: 7.38 out of 10
Dissertation: 9/10 (very high for my university)
Internships (part of study program): 6 month F&B internship at Sheraton on Tenerife, Spain / 7 month internship at digital consulting scale up for hospitality companies in Berlin, Germany
Graduated March, 2020
Workexp. 1: Worked 8 months as a freelancer in research and translation - awarded with certificate for quality of work and customer satisfaction (Top 10% of all freelancers)
Workexp. 2: Responsible for pilot project for the European expansion of FMGC Business Analytics Scale Up in Amsterdam
Languages:
Fluent: German, English, Portuguese, Dutch
Used to be fluent (could "relearn" within 2 months if necessary): French and Spanish
Extra curricular activities:
- Heavily involved in Student Association: Academic assistance, integration of new students, gala committee
- Purchasing Manager of the student bar
- Volunteer at recruitment office: Open days, selection days
GMAT: 680 (Q46/38V)
A bit disappointing because I scored a 710 6 times in a row for my final practice exams, but I guess nervousness made a difference
I know that there are several weaknesses in my profile, but everything combined I think I have several strong points as well.
I lack the "big name" factor regarding my work experience, but not sure how relevant that is for an innovation master?
Hi
maxost96,
As the first step towards your profile evaluation, I would like to point out that you have got a pretty well-groomed profile with room for further development. First and foremost, your 7.38 GPA is fairly good and falls under the average front. But the most striking feature of your academic profile is your undergraduate academic background in hospitality management which adds a unique and fresh perspective to the programs you are applying to.
Coming to your work experience, you have a decent amount of professional experience through your internship programs as well as freelancing gigs. Having said that, the best part about your profile is that you have been part of some of the most diverse industries such as hospitality and FMCG. As a result, your profile stands out from the rest of the applicant pool which will eventually work in your favour. Regarding your concerns about the lack of big brand names under your work profile, you need not fret over it since your unique academic and professional background would easily compensate for the same. However, to showcase your professional expertise to the fullest, you can highlight the kind of projects you worked on, the impacts you created and the major takeaways to stand at par with the competition you face.
Your extracurriculars further vouches for the varied skills you have got under your belt. Looking at the details you have provided about your extracurriculars, you have been consistently upgrading yourself by going above and beyond in your endeavours. From your involvement in student association and volunteering work at the recruitment office to managerial duties in the student bar, you have quite a decent amount of experience on these fronts. Moreover, through these endeavours, you can highlight your leadership, management, mentorship and teamwork skills which are some of the traits these B-schools are constantly on the lookout for. In addition to this, as a recommendation, you can also work in an NGO to highlight your social skills or undertake certain certifications to showcase your constant momentum in the quest for knowledge and learnings.
Another interesting addition to your profile is your international experience in the form of two exchange programs in France and 3-month work and travel to the US which goes on to showcase your broadened perspective and adaptability quotient, traits held in high regard by the top b-schools.
Now talking about your concerns regarding your GMAT score of 680, you need not worry much since it is a good enough score with respect to the programs and schools you are applying for. Speaking of the schools you are targeting, i.e, IE, Bocconi, ESADE, NOVA, CBS, you stand a 70% chance of getting in. Additionally, you could also consider some dream category schools (where your chances of acceptance are 50%) such as LBS, DUKE, INSEAD.
You can also boost your chances of acceptance by drawing attention to the stronger aspects of your profile which can be achieved through your application. Your application is basically what can differentiate you by highlighting your strengths and overshadowing your weaknesses. You also need to showcase your journey and how you are a great value addition to the school. Additionally, it also carries a 30% impact on your admission prospects which is why I would urge you to pay more attention to the same.
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31 Jan 2020, 15:05
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