Tanchat wrote:
Hi
GMATNinjaTherefore, what is other decision point between B & C ?
I read all posts. But I don't understand why B is incorrect
Hello,
Tanchat. I know I am
not GMATNinja, but you also sent me a PM with the same question, and you seemed to appreciate my response, so I will reproduce it below for the benefit of the community.
How about we look at a barebones version of (B) to expose its flaws? First, the line as is:
Quote:
B) An eight-inch plaster model is believed to have been used by Michelangelo for his sculpture of David and recently discovered after it was
Now, the same sentence without all the extra modifiers:
A model is believed to have been used and discovered after it was...Now can you see the meaning issue surrounding the parallel elements joined by
and? Sure, a model can be believed to have been
used by somebody, but was the same model also
believed to have been discovered? That would not make sense, but the parallelism suggests such an interpretation.
To follow up on my earlier comment, notice how a simple auxiliary verb could fix the problem:
A model is believed to have been used and was discovered after it was...Now, it is clear that
the model is believed to have been used by somebody and
the model was discovered after some time. It is funny how a simple word can change everything, but that is how grammar and parallelism work together sometimes.
I hope that helps clarify the matter.
- Andrew