Hi
KarishmaB thank for your answer. I have a few clarification questions if you can please help :
Q1. I think the parallelism in Option B is on point. Please suggest if I am right or wrong?
An eight-inch plaster model is believed to have been (a) used [ acting as a modifier] by Michelangelo for his sculpture of David and (b)recently [ modifying discovered] discovered after it was
Logic for "used" is a modifier : Check if the action denoted by the verb placed after the noun entity has been performed by that noun entity or not. If the answer is yes, then it is a verb, else it is a modifier. Eight inch plaster model cannot perform the action of "used"
Thus both used and recently are modifier and parallelism is on point
Q2. Only option B has correct tense usage. Please correct if I am wrong.
When looking at sequence of actions
Step 1:Michelangelo made David using plaster model
Step 2: Plaster Model was lost for 300 years
Step 3: Plaster Model is recently discovered
Thus any form of Perfect Tense should only be used with Step1 or Step2 and not with Step3. Step 3 will be simple tense
Out of all options, only Option B seems to fit this criterion. In option C perfect tense / perfect continuous tense variations are appearing and confusing me
3. When we say it is not clear who is "it" referring to it confuses me. Via parallelism I can clearly understand that the sequence following "and" is connecting to an eight inch plaster model .
The stem according to me is "An eight-inch plaster model is believed to have been"
Can you please take the time to address these three queries? Will really help my understanding a lot. Thanks!
KarishmaB
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Michelangelo, it is believed, had made his sculpture of David using an eight-inch plaster model that was recently discovered after being lost for nearly 300 years.
A) Michelangelo, it is believed, had made his sculpture of David using an eight-inch plaster model that was recently discovered after being
B) An eight-inch plaster model is believed to have been used by Michelangelo for his sculpture of David and recently discovered after it was
C) An eight-inch plaster model believed to have been used by Michelangelo for his sculpture of David has been discovered after having been
D) It is believed that an eight-inch plaster model that Michelangelo used for his sculpture of David and has recently been discovered after it was
E) It is believed that Michelangelo used an eight-inch plaster model for his sculpture of David, and it was recently discovered after having been
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I was deciding between (A) and (C) and these points made me choose (C) over (A).
A) Michelangelo, it is believed, had made his sculpture of David using an eight-inch plaster model that was recently discovered after being
"using ..." is a present participle and when it is used without a comma after a noun, it modifies the noun.
Present participle can be used at the end of the sentence to modify the entire previous clause with a comma. So there is that problem.
It seems that David was using the eight-inch plaster model.
Another problem, and one that seemed to be a bigger problem to me - the point of the sentence is not to tell you that M made his sculpture using a model (that has now been found), the point is to tell you that a model (that is believed to have been used by M) has been found. The critical information is tucked away in a modifier in option (A).
Also, here it seems that it was known that M had made David using the model and it is just additional info that the model has been found recently. Whereas, it seems more likely that the model was found and that is what gave the idea that M must have used it to make David.
C) An eight-inch plaster model believed to have been used by Michelangelo for his sculpture of David has been discovered after having been
Rectifies all our issues with (A).
It seems there are some questions about (D) too.
D) It is believed that an eight-inch plaster model that Michelangelo used for his sculpture of David and has recently been discovered after it was
It is believed that ... a model (that M used) ... and has been discovered ...
It is missing the verb of subject model.